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As you are walking into the woods, you spot a mansion in the horizon. So you start walking twords it. As you walk up to the gates, you see a young lady, wearing a green shirt and skirt. She goes by the name of Hong Meiling. You ask her if you may go in. "Young mistress wouldn't be pleased if I let you in. So let me go ask the head maid Sakuya." You nod and she walks into the courtyard and then into the mansion. She returned 20 minutes later with her clothes torn, and her looking worn out. "What happened?" You ask. "She won't let me let you in." You sigh and start to walk away. "Wait!" Meiling says. You turn around and look in her direction. "I could let you in and give you a tour. But I would just have to hide you from Sakuya." Your face brightens up and you walk back over to Meiling. She opens the gate and you go in. After you walk in she shuts the gate behind you. You walk behind her and walk into the main room. You gasp at how big the sight is. Your thought gets interupted when Meiling says, "Well where would you like to go first?" You think for a minute and finally say, "Do you have a library?" She nods and starts walking to what you think is the way to the library. After a couple of minutes walking in silence behind Meiling, you finally stop at a large door. "Oh how rude of me, I forgot to ask you your name. What is it?" You tell her your name. "That name fits you perfectly!" You give her a grim look, and she giggles. After a minute you start to laugh. After what seems like five minutes, she finally opens the door and you walk in. You look at all the shelves filled with books, all the books stacked on the floor and just all the books in general. She starts walking in a general direction and you look over to your left. You see a young lady sitting, with her nose in a book. You walk twords her, not realizing you lost Meiling. You sigh and keep walking twords the lady dressed in purple. She says, "Who are you and what are you doing in Remilia's mansion?" You jumped a little and told her your name. She tells you her name is Patchouli Knowledge. "You didn't tell me why you are in this mansion." She says again. You say, "Well I just was walking in the woods and I-". She cuts you off, "That's all I need to know. Know stop being a pest. I need to read." You nod and start walking away, when Meiling starts running twords you. "I have been trying to find you. Where did you go?" You gesture your head over to where Patchouli is sitting. "Oh, well I hope you didn't disturb her too much. She always has her head in a book. So she never really has any communication with anyone else." You nod as you see a lady with red hair and bat like wings. She walks over to you and says "Well hello there new comer!" You are startled by the sudden outburst, and here you are thinking people in librarys are supposed to be quiet. She says her name is Koakuma. She is carrying a stack of books and you offer to help. She says, "Oh no thank you. But thank you for the offer. That is very kind of you. Well I got to go. I just wanted to greet the newcomer. Bye!". "Bye Koakuma." Meiling says. You and Meiling walk around the librar for about ten more minutes. Meiling finally says, "Well where to next?" You say, "Anything worth interest." She nods, and leads you down a long corridor. She whispers under her breath and whispers to you, "Crap, the young mistress and Sakuya are coming hide!" You nod and find a plant to hide behind. You hear two people walking nearer and nearer. "Meiling why arn't you at your station!?" An unknown voice asks. "Well... I uh..." Meiling says. "You what?! You need a really good reason to get yourself out of this one!" The same unknown voice says. "Sakuya calm down. I think I know why she is not at her station. I sense another human besides you Sakuya." An different uknown voice says. You go into a cold sweat, hoping they will not find you. "Yes mistress." The one that you are guessing as Sakuya says. Suddenly a maid with silver hair appears behind you. You jump. "Hello there." She says. She holds onto your shoulder and you both teleport beside a younger lady with blue hair and bat wings. "So your the intruder she says. Welcome.". "Wait young mistress! I let her in! Don't kill her!". "I wasn't going to kill her. Now state your name and buisness in my mansion!" You tell her your name and tell her that you were just walking in the forest then you saw the mansion and decided to look. You mean no harm. She nods and tells Sakuya to let go of your shoulder. "You seem harmless enough. You are free to go." "I never knew I was captured." You say with a grin. She gives you a grim look, and walks away. Gesturing for Sakuya to follow. Your sitting on the floor. Meiling offers you a hand. You get up. "Phew! That went MUCH better than I expected." Meiling says. You nod and ask if you may leave. "Aww do you have to go so soon? I was hoping to get to know you better." You nod. "I guess I could stay. I have been looking for a job. Do you think your mistress would hire me?" You say. "She most likely will. Meiling's face brightens up. Here let me go ask her. She walks away and returns minutes later. "She said yes but you get one chance. If you mess up your fired." You nod. Meiling brings you to a bedroom. "This shall be your room. There is a closet full of clothes that are suitable for working in the mansion. You nod and she walks out of the room saying. "Well I'll let you change then." You nod and look in the closet. You pick out a blue knee lengh dress, with lighter blue stars on it. You think it suits you. You say "I'm ready!" Meiling walks into the room and says "Wow great choice." You thank her. "Welcome to the first day on the job. I will have Sakuya get your things later." You nod and step out into the hall, with Meiling following you. "Where shall I start?"Related content
Comments: 8
GengarZilla [2013-03-13 22:16:13 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This has really helped me get information for my own OC's storyline.
I'm typing it up on Microsoft Word and uploading it part by part to deviantart. Once I reach the part where this came in handy for reference, I'll be sure to leave credit. Thanks a lot.
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Invader-Zix In reply to GengarZilla [2013-03-15 03:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Haha you're welcome~ Also, I'm glad I helped you. Thanks for reading~
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GengarZilla In reply to Invader-Zix [2013-04-15 11:53:21 +0000 UTC]
No problem, here's the part where this helped: [link]
Check it out if you want.
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Invader-Zix In reply to GengarZilla [2013-04-16 04:27:20 +0000 UTC]
That was a very well written chapter. Thank you for mentioning me.
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Flamez2k10 [2012-02-25 16:45:18 +0000 UTC]
y'know, this isnt half bad.Mind you, found difficult because of lack of paragraphs.
I'd love a job at the SDM, it'd be interesting to see what Sakuya would trust you with
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Invader-Zix In reply to Flamez2k10 [2012-02-25 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]
I know this isn't how I usually write... But I guess I was either 1. Wanting to test a new style. Or 2 just plain old lazy to put paragraphs. lol Or a mixture of both xD
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b-lack-a-ngel [2012-02-25 15:43:37 +0000 UTC]
cool, but I'm a boy... oh well, I can be girl sometimes...
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Invader-Zix In reply to b-lack-a-ngel [2012-02-25 15:44:56 +0000 UTC]
Lol sorry ^^' I might make a boy version of this. c:
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