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Published: 2010-09-06 01:13:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 798; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Just practicing.comments and/or critiques are appreciated.
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I love how you didn't make her super skinny and added the curves in there. I think the panties that go between the legs should get wedged in just a little. Not being perverted or anything, just thought that it would do that since it's a hipster style bikini.
I'm not sure whether it's wind that's moving her hair or if she has just turned her head. If it is wind, then the laces/ribbons/strings of the bra should be swaying as well or if it was just her hair, the strands near to her left ear should fall closer to her shoulder blade as it would've slid over her shoulder instead of around.
I think her ear is a little too small but then again, some people have small ears :3 And in my opinion, I think you should work on and around her lips more 
By the way, since she's straddling and she's not really a skinny girl, the volume of her right thigh would have appeared a little bit near her right butt cheek. And her left lower leg looks like it's very small compared to her thighs.
You put so much detail and care on the blending of the face, shoulder and lower back area that everything else seems a little off.
Still, this is a lovely piece of work
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Thanks so much for taking the time to give some feedback!
I realize now that I need to focus more on keeping things coherent (like the example with the hair flowing but the bikini strings staying motionless). And yea, hands are still trouble-makers even with a reference for me, hehe. I suppose I became impatient. However, I think it's the face that I was most nervous about messing with. Lips do give me trouble when I work with such small, tight areas and any little mark can really change the expression. It's definitely something I'll have to improve on.
Anyway, your critique is much appreciated and it's nice to get a new perspective on your work.
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Glad to be of help ^_^ When someone asks for a critique, I try to give some feedback if I could
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