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Published: 2010-06-04 12:56:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 277; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Some times I wish I were the rain,so when I touch your skin I can feel your pain.
Like an owl in the dark you felt alone,
and when your light shines your still unknown.
Your sorrow filled screams have fallen on deaf ears,
and I crumble inside as I dream all your fears.
You broke your wings and took a leap,
now you lay in an eternal sleep.
Your fears now left in a deep red stain,
Which is why I wish I were the rain.
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Comments: 5
jellybeanpoetry [2010-06-04 14:39:52 +0000 UTC]
I really like this poem. It's simple, yet beyond words at the same time.
I featured your poem in my news feat. here [link]
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Itamu3rdSovereign In reply to jellybeanpoetry [2010-06-04 14:45:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow Thank you so much I didn't think anyone would ever read it.
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jellybeanpoetry In reply to Itamu3rdSovereign [2010-06-04 15:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem I look forward to reading more
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LenBon [2010-06-04 13:05:10 +0000 UTC]
amazing. Simple as.
The rhyming really helps it flow (Y)
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