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Published: 2013-11-05 18:43:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 641; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 7
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My Little Pony - HasbroArt / Stormchaser (Stallion) / Moonspark (Mare) - Me
Original Sketch - Not uploaded to DeviantArt
Re-do of - kitistraza.deviantart.com/art/…
Definition of Re-Mastered - kitistraza.deviantart.com/jour…
Story time!
Moonspark was enraged as she entered the mental ward of the hospital. Eighteen years ago her father this stallion named Storm Chaser abandoned her. And she was finally able to track him down and she was going to give him a piece of her mind. She slammed open the door startling many and several heads turned her way. And then...she saw him...A grey blue stallion with a dark blue mane and a thunder cloud cutie mark. Sitting alone in a corner trying and failing to solve a children's puzzle..Thats when the reality of what Moonspark was dealing with hit her. Her movements became mechanical as she made her way over to him and sat politely across from him. He ignored her completely and as time passed Moonspark started to ignore him and focus on the puzzle he couldnt seem to finish. After many years spent with a very intelligent unicorn she started to help him piece it together. It was slow at first but it meant more to her than she thought it would. After awhile...he started to talk.
"I-I..d-didnt want to g-give you up..." He never once looked at her "With y-your m-mother gone t-they wouldnt let me t-take care of you by m-myself." he was crying now and Moonspark fought her own emotions down. "I w-wanted to l-look for you b-but I wasnt allowed to.."
Moonspark reached over the table and hugged him tight. "Its o-okay." the last remnants of her rage and anger faded as she listened to her father cry into her mane. "I...I l-love you daddy.."
Now that that is out of the way. The story is that after Moonspark's mother died her already mentally impaired father had a complete break down and was deemed unfit to raise Moonspark and she was taken from him despite his begging that he could be a good father. Moonspark was sent to the orphanage in Ponyville while Storm Chaster spent the next eighteen years in a mental hospital. The reason Moonspark hated him was because she was told a different version of the story that she was abandoned and unwanted and do to her growing up in a earth pony run orphanage she cannot fly and can never learn to. She naturally blamed him her whole life for all her problems until she realized it wasnt his fault.
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Comments: 18
aNIGHTLYpony [2013-11-11 14:44:32 +0000 UTC]
i think you've made some good progression! good job on the the line-art, it's now finer and more sophisticated ^^
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Java-Kitty In reply to aNIGHTLYpony [2013-11-11 15:25:21 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you ^^
And yeah..but having a better program to work with as well as a better tablet does help some too.
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aNIGHTLYpony In reply to Java-Kitty [2013-11-11 18:08:14 +0000 UTC]
do you work with paint tool sai already? it's free and easy to use ^^
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Java-Kitty In reply to aNIGHTLYpony [2013-11-11 21:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Im currently using Photoshop
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aNIGHTLYpony In reply to Java-Kitty [2013-11-11 22:55:48 +0000 UTC]
nice! i'd give SAI a try, it has a vector mask feature which allows you to re-position your lines in any shape and direction you want 'em to! i'm using it now together with my tablet and i must say the painting feels more natural ^^ photoshop however has some advantages SAI doesn't have.
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Java-Kitty In reply to aNIGHTLYpony [2013-11-12 00:55:02 +0000 UTC]
I would consider it if I didn't sketch all my pictures before hand.
If I ever try my hand at more complicated animations I will certainly give SAI a try however.
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AZ-Derped-Unicorn [2013-11-05 20:06:09 +0000 UTC]
Awww....this story is sorta sad for me but it's cute and sweet as well.
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mall45 In reply to Java-Kitty [2013-11-05 19:04:11 +0000 UTC]
But still...I'm glad they're back together again.
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Java-Kitty In reply to mall45 [2013-11-05 19:06:43 +0000 UTC]
Barely.
Moonspark can only visit for short periods of time do to work / strict visiting hours.
Plus shes still a bit cold do to the fact its his fault she cant fly.
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mall45 In reply to Java-Kitty [2013-11-05 19:19:20 +0000 UTC]
Well at least they get to enjoy the moments that they do have together.
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