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Well, nice so far, though I would recommend a background for atmosphere.
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The first few pages are sort of a preamble, introducing you to one of the main characters and setting up what's going on. After page 8 or so, things will really start moving.
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ya, i like that. its gets people interested first off. sometimes when things jump right into the main plot, im not intrigued enough to keep following. Its all about the pacing
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Glad you approve! I personally can see the advantages to doing it either way.
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