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Taken in Albuquerque NM Mid valley off 2nd street.Related content
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This looks like a wonderful place to shoot. Unfortunately, your technical aspects take away from the beauty of this place. But a little re-editing could fix that. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
The first thing I noticed were the tones. I love monochromatic photos, but this specific photo doesn't benefit from that. This photo doesn't have a subject, other than the path itself, so my eyes are going all over the place. Because of this, and the tones, sometimes I can't tell what I'm looking at. A colored version of this would help a lot since it would help my eyes differentiate between what's what. I can also see that you have some wonderful lighting and I'd love to see what this photo would look like in color with warm tones.
And, a tip about sepia photos: a lot of the times, a saturation like the one you have is too saturated and can look tacky. If you want to have a good sepia photo, try desaturating the browns a bit. It looks a lot better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/lā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Other than that, it's a good photo. Good contrast, composition, and angle.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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First of all I'd like to thank you for you critique of my work. God know I don't get much of that. I'm thinking the image does have a subject and that is shadows. Shadows that do take your eye on a kind of crazy dance through out the image and I see what you are saying. I thought the same thing but as I looked a little harder I noticed the whites of the image leaded my eye through the image and I fell for it. I'm not sure I may be fulling my self. As for my technical aspects I can agree on with you. I don't know Adobe PS. I only use the software I got with my camera. I'll try a version of the image with less saturation to see what difference it makes. I'm all so thinking of doing a color image of this also I don't like to submit them to close to each other. Again I want to thank you so much for taken time to let me know what you think. I cherish this more then anything.
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Thanks so much for your comment
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It has been a very long time since I indulged my artistic side, so please bear with me
I am honored to have been asked for a critique of this image.
I really enjoy the interplay of light and dark in this image. The sepia tint lends it a warmth which might otherwise have left it feeling a little cold and perhaps clinical. Having said that, however, I find myself wondering what this image would look like if rendered in grey-scale?
Overall I would give it a minimum score of 8.5. For me an image loses a point if unframed, but that is just me.
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I want to thank you so much for your words about my work. I very seldom get things said about what I do; so I cherish ever word and again thank you and I'm so honored in hearing what you think.
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Every artist deserves to be told when they have done well and where they have room for improvement
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This is really amazing, very nice.
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Your very welcome.
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I love it, too! x3
It looks so beautiful :3
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i absolutely love the chiaroscuro in this shot. it's simple yet stunning. great job!
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