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JD-Kloosterman — Connection the Dots: Explanation
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--Japanese translations--'Nante henna dougu, ne?'
'Hai, yattemite Batu-chan. Nanka kanjiruno?'
'U-un, nanimo kanjinai. Hitai-chan no chakura osae wa mada atashi yori umai datte.'
'Noroi fuuin no chi wa hara ni iruno da. Kitto sore wa kare ni sawatteiru.'
I've been told some people are having trouble viewing the documents. Apparently, DevART runs their documents through google, so to view the documents you have to sign into your google account (if you have one) and then the pdf should show up.
Is this horribly incovenient? Let me know if there's a bunch of you out there who don't have a google account and don't want one. I CAN switch back to splitting up the chapters into two or three parts, it would just get increasingly more difficult as the story gets on. Let me know what works best for you guys.
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First of all, I love your little discussion between Batman and the league on the what Luthor was holding. Also the Flash trying to wrap his head around what Luthor was doing with the Anti-Life Equation. It was JLA Plastic Man Hillarious worthy. King Faraday has been killed off alot in various stories and seems to always come back.
Second, you once again you capture the character well. You did a great job writing Blue Devil agan. What does he notice about Hinata? The plot thickens.
Thirdly, Naruto and his allies going to help the Teen Titans? I have several friends working on making Naruto Teen Titans fics. Yours is the best one I have read.
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I worried about the enormous amount of exposition in this chapter. Nothing much happens, it's just a bunch of people sitting around talking, often about rather complex and heady things. So I tried to keep it light and varied, and I'm glad you feel I suceeded. Especially with Blue Devil... as I've said, I'm not totally familiar with his character.
Well, you haven't read much of the Teen Titans yet, so you may want to hold off on that call, but thanks. I enjoyed Teen Titans when I was younger and having them look after the teenage ninjas was just very natural.
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They should get along well with the Titans and I can imagine the situation with Sasuke will remind them of Terra in particular. Also like how Blue Devil's in this fic. I mostly know him from his older stories and his time in Shadowpact. Feels kind of odd that a concept of a globe planet is new to Naruto. Do they believe the world is flat back in Konoha? Also raise an eye at King Faraday being killed off panel, but otherwise I like this chapter. As usual, Star is also quite the cutie personality wise.
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King Faraday was a minor character in the series, and I really wanted to work with Amanda Waller.
Exploration isn't high on Konoha's list of interests, nor is astronomy. They know about the moon and about gravity, so perhaps they know, but given that their "world" consists of approximately five countries that can be crossed in a few days, I doubt it. Certainly none of them have seen the world from space.
And yes, the Titans and the ninjas are going to have a good time.
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