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jeremy3 — .CMC everfre epilog 04en
Published: 2018-09-07 16:43:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 4189; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 17
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As always, please tell me if you thind english mistake.Thanks to: www.deviantart.com/deadmeat888
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You made mistakes, but you didn't mean to do any harm. Just don't do it again.
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This is really great page. The emotions! Also I love that Scoots in the last panel
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Really good chapter, I'm glad you are doing these epilogues to wrap everything up nice and neat.
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Some other questions will be answered soon, thanks.😊
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She will get over it eventually
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few fixes in bottom right corner.
change this to that in "i even thought i deserved to die in that forest" and then "but then derpy arrived... and she saved me" so it makes more sense.
other than this, alls good and nice story
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