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Published: 2017-12-21 17:16:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 4773; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 25
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English is not my first language,Β if you find mistake or error, please notice me.I'll make the change as soon as I can,
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It's a shame you don't have your pet fax machine here either.
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Only one option remains, use the Fallen Tiger Attack.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=NgRpJlβ¦
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That fireball which hit twilight must be a critical hit!
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It shoot for kill.π
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Oh really loving the comic, great job here.
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Any chance Luna is going to show up, and fix this?
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To be honest, Cloudy is now so angry that even if Luna show up, that will change nothing.π
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Seems like a good time for a teleportation spell, or perhaps a time dilation spell.Β How about the Discord turn to stone spell!
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All of this need power that Twilight don't have anymore.π
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finally someone else has common sense
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Okay letβs see:
Panel 5: Fluttershyβs line should be, βit already didnβt work on a regular phoenix, so itβs not going to on this one!β
Last panel: first line should be, βThe protection of the forest is taking most of my power!β
As always I wish you the best and keep up the good work!
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I wish you the best too, I just will do the change tomorrow morning, but thank you.π
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