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Published: 2015-08-12 15:38:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 11099; Favourites: 101; Downloads: 54
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As always, a big thanks for Scootabyte for the corrections and the rephrasing.first part:Β fav.me/d8p0x1n
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HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHA
Child suffering is funny
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AB, you really stuck your hoof in it. Don't try to defend your mistakes; that just makes it worse.
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This Deviation was featured in the following Equestria Daily Post www.equestriadaily.com/2015/09β¦ Thank you for providing pony material for all of us to enjoy 
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I'm one to talk...but more comic please!!
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I knooowww but Β my vacation was so good, I want to return to the beach.
Don't worry, in fact i'm on my way and our Trissy is planed for part 19.
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I wish I was at the beach.Β :0
Oh my dear Trissie!!Β You are a superstar!Β
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Oh hey, welcome back from vacation! I will have the next part corrected today
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Thank you so much Scootabyte.
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Poor Scootaloo! Its okay.
Sweetie bell is just a butthead. XD
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But it was Sweetie Belle who teased Scootaloo about her weight. Apple Bloom just called her a dodo.
Also the ears are too low on their heads. Just a minor nitpick.
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I have tried to drow them more hight on the head, more like the TV show, but I don't really like.
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I kind of like the positioning of the ears. Makes your style unique.
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Your style is unique too and I really like it, in fact I changed the way I draw my pony eyes after have seing your style, for this I have to thank you.
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You did, for real?Β I am so honored right now.Β
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Yes i'm not very kind with her in this comic.
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All she needs now is her sweet Rumble.
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No problem.
I just mean that u write ur comic so well that i ( and im sure that im not alone ) can really feel a bound to the characters.
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I'm really happy to read that, cause I like to drow strongh ans real emotion.
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Hmmm this seems like a perfect time to use my anti-gravity potion that i "borrowed" from that dimension with those small yellow guys *takes a sip* oh it's working... how do i get down?
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Applebloom: Scootaloo... I'm so sorry. I...
Scootaloo: *sniffle*
Applebloom: I... I thought you couldn't fly because of your super tiny deformed wings.
Scootaloo: .........................................
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Thanks a good idea for a comic parody.
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Oh wow that is a new one about Scootaloo, very cool. Head canon accepted.
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Sad for Scootaloo...
And sad to wait for more
3 days before hiatus ends
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Yes I'll going to vacation, so No computer, No bambou pen, just me, a sketch book, my family, and the sea.
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I could use one now...
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"I could or you could"?
Yes I could, but not enough time for finish one part before I'll go.
Or maybe I don't understand your reply, sorry.
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I'm going to go out and say Scootaloo probably deserves it for stealing that letter to begin with.
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omg so many Β feelings
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she is not heavy. she just has a big heart. and small wings if the MLP game is accurate.
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Sure, she's not heavy, but it's one of her fears.
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The sad fact is....
...she doesn't have to be heavy to worry about that.Β She has so much trouble flying that she just has to imagine her weak, stunted, stubby little wings need as much help lifting her body off the ground as possible, and every pound, no, every ounce is one she really couldn't afford.
Its not hard to go from THAT and twist it into a highly warped body image with impossible to meet standards...
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Apparently much heavier than Fluttershy, who in the past has been carried by six small birds, and lost at tug-o-war against a single butterfly.Β XD
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Also she got carried around by a swarm of delicate butterflies that miraculously didn't die. X3
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In fact Scootalou don't really Know if she can't fly cause of her weight or other medical or physical dissease, but it's one of her fears.
In fact I think even the scenarist of this show have not really planed something for explain.
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OK.Β She just doesn't like them jerking her chain, heh.
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