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jeremy3 — Why Are You So Sad Part2

Published: 2014-02-19 17:05:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 3068; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 20
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Description This is the final version, i m not very good in english, so i hope, it's correct.



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Comments: 11

softpad [2015-07-24 08:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Its pones talking so no worry.

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supersonicslasher [2014-10-03 23:53:33 +0000 UTC]

afraid only has one f in it but other than a few spelling errors the grammer is ok

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jeremy3 In reply to supersonicslasher [2014-10-04 00:00:41 +0000 UTC]

And i can't fix that, this drow was lost with my old computer. Thank you. 

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supersonicslasher In reply to jeremy3 [2014-10-04 00:45:31 +0000 UTC]

its all good

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Keeper-of-time-RD [2014-06-22 13:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Cute comic good work. One critique though.

Sad = the emotional state of being unhappy. Sade isn't a word, at least not that I'm aware of.

edit: oh and the words / term for Derpy's line is/should be 'pretty sure'.

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jeremy3 In reply to Keeper-of-time-RD [2014-06-22 21:09:35 +0000 UTC]

I have to found my original files for fix that. Thanks. 

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extraphotos [2014-03-12 23:04:56 +0000 UTC]

don't cry be amazing flyer ever

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Scootabyte [2014-02-20 22:48:29 +0000 UTC]

I just noticed that Derpy's eyes are different color in every panel


Very cute drawing though.

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jeremy3 In reply to Scootabyte [2014-02-21 06:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes i notice that too, too late,. I have to fixe that because is not the good color of eyes.

Thanks.

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USMCbrony0311 [2014-02-20 16:40:35 +0000 UTC]

cute

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jeremy3 In reply to USMCbrony0311 [2014-02-20 16:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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