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Published: 2013-02-24 10:25:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 28682; Favourites: 461; Downloads: 97
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Well we have been exam since last Wednesday and I failed LOLZ.Anyways, Momoko failed in Exam and Blossom got A+ but Bubbles got A++. Bubbles is higher than Blossom just like the episode of "Him's Diddle Riddle". Hope ya like it.
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Being familiar with both The Powerpuff Girls and its anime spin-off, I laughed out loud at this drawing's take on how instead of retaining the smartness American Blossom thrives on, Momoko is a ditz in comparison. And then the last panel throws a curveball especially for those that remember the scene in PPG when the girls take the SATs! This is considering that the comic seemed like it was just about comparing the two Blossoms. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Topped off with a colorfully fantastic representations of the girls here, this comic is not only funny, but also great to look at! Just a teeny bit of a shame there's no real background.
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I shall applaud you now. Now and forever.
I just LOVE the stars in the Puffs eyes. That technique just makes their eyes POP. I've watched a ton of your speed arts on YT and I love your use of shapes. I'm only about a year younger than you but I still have a long way to go before I fully understand what you as a fifteen year old did in Photo Shop.
But, now, for this comic. I do think Momoko's face looks a little funky, but everything else about her is amazing. Again, I don't understand shading and lighting, but you've done is amazing to my naked eyes.
I love how you captured Bubbles' obliviousness to make Momoko look even more stupid, besides Blossom being able to ace the test in only a minute.
Last thing, the grammar was a little incorrect, but I was still able to decipher it.
BEAUTIFUL!!!! You truly are one of the most talented people I've ever met!!!! XD
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Nice job jerimin!!
i love the part when Bubbles gets a better grade then Blossom.
I bet you worked alot!
luv ur channel on youtube
and i luv your humor
comtinue your great and awesome work love it. and also i request you do len kagamine, i know you did miku before so i beleive you can do len. if you do not take requests then sorry and please forgive me for requesting.
keep up your good work! i know you can reach alot of subscribers!!!!
You should be more than 3 million cause your videos are good and humourous. luv your videos!
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This is my first Critique so....
This is just... beautiful I don't know what to say!!
Once I failed a test and my friend got an A my other got an A+ and the other got A++ But still STORY OF MAH LIFE!! Still Idk what to put here..... BANANA LOOGIC WORD OF STUFF NESS xDD err..... Logicness... Stuff.... Um........
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I always enjoy it when an artist offers critique. I'd do it myself, but it requires some kind of prerequisite which I don't have. With that in mind, I'm not going to pull my punches. If you're the kind of person who gets easily upset when people tell you that their art isn't good, turn back now. If you're interested in hearing honest thoughts, let's get busy!
VISION
Basically another pointless attack against Momoko. It's not even that accurate, seeing how Blossom, the original Blossom failed an SAT in Him Diddle Riddle.
1/5
ORIGINALITY
It's well copied from the original source, but that's what it is. A copy. While there is a place for copies in this world, like fanfiction writing, when one of the categories is originality, it fails. But then, how about the concept? Can a copied artwork still be original in concept? The thousands of anti-Momoko, anti-PPGZ drawings tells me otherwise.
1/5
TECHNIQUE
This is probably the best part of the whole thing. The artist not only does the PPG style exactly right, but also the PPGZ style. That means the author had to take something I presume they didn't like and do it exactly as it's supposed to. Granted, the better solution would not be making this artwork at all, since using art to attack is a sign of weakness, but it's drawn well, at least.
5/5
IMPACT
I did not have a good impact on this one. In fact, I had a negative reaction. I was contemplating writing a snarky comment on the pic, but I'd rather do this. In the end, I'll forget about this picture. It's not going into my favorites, it's not going into my computer. It's just going to wither and die along with the rest of the anti-PPGZ artwork.
1/5
FINAL SCORE: 2/5
While the execution is excellent, the fact remains that the core of this is lacking. I don't care how well-performed a bad movie is, I will YouTube the scenes I like and not buy the movie. The same is here. You can polish a turd, but in the end, it's still a turd.
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this is some really artwork you did! How did Bubbles get a A++ that is impossible to do in a exam you drow you did good.And please correct me if i spelled a word wrong on the critique.please do so if i need to do some changes on the critique i'm writing right now please could help with my spelling because i'm really bad at spelling my words sometimes on my test or exam if i do so,so please help me spell my words good as a comment for the critique right now today at this very particular time now.
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So do I, as before, I failed my worst subjects, English, Maths, Chinese and Home Economy, they digusted meΒ Β Β Β Β
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for real monoko got note on school but ask to some like dexter and she will fail! the only time got a F is were she got no time to stuindin well to her hero work! but momoko
a beter a note miyako and kaoru! the problem ppg blossom she smart were she never stuindint for it! but bot learn fast but only were got time for it cuz hero job is the problem. yes momoko love love story and hero comic and but were time to do her home work she do! but is one thing bot got! and is the naturel leadership and make the battle in the faver of the team like were momoko fond her rebon is a weapon and use on him!
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.....Looks like bubbles is the smart and cut one, blossom...is half smart
Blossom:HEY!!!
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Her name is also blossom. Not momoko.
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Momoko is her japanese name
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That's the reason why I don't like PPGZ, they ruined Momoko's smart character...
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I know, I hate that too.
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This is the guest of true! XD
*I am laughing like crazy!*
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Wow funny and accurate.
Seriously ppgz, you messed up alot
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What do you mean messed up?
PPGZ is a remake. Remakes are supposed to be different.
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I don't mind it being different but some of the decisions they made I found bad. I don't think the show is awful but I prefer the original by far.
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I'm glad that you don't hate it ^_^
Because PPGZ is the anime that helped me to get into drawing ^__^
Also, PPG is a parody of american superhero tropes.
PPGZ is a parody of Japanese superhero tropes.
It's a Japanese Logic!Β Β
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k, glad to hear it inspired you
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wow I'm not impressed that Momoko doesn't get an A but I can't believe bubbles got an A++
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What grade are you?... I'm grade 8 well not trying to be a copΒ <---( I ask my mom about that like a stranger, I'm not... maybe to you)
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Eh! I see... I'mean sorry for bothering.
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I admire ur work! its just that u make it look soo easy lol
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Β Poor Momoko andΒ Β yea hey to Bubbles.
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Oh, here, sorry to butt in, but I can point out the mistakes. Here is all the dialogue with my corrections:
"Finally! I'm finished! What do ya know! I have 59 minutes left for my relaxation. Hey, Momoko! You'd better finish that in 59 minutes. Remember, the teacher only gave us an hour."
"Look, Momoko, I got an A plus! What did you get?"
"You got an A? Look at mine! I have the same letter as yours!"
There you go!
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Finish instead of finished and I don't think "ya" is something Blossom would sayΒ Β
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Oh okay. The word "ya" is a word that I often use 
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Blossom: yeah . . um momoko?
Momoko: what?
Blossom: you got an F?
Momoko: yes i failed miserably
Blossom: hey i know a great trick to turn an F into an A
Momoko: oh, what is it?
Bubbles: here I can show you
Bubbles turns the F into a perfect A and then she added a plus next to it
Momoko: awww thanks bubbles, and blossom 
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You should've added "59 minutes later..." on the second panel.
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