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joelashimself — MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' prologue 2
Published: 2012-05-12 04:16:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 25272; Favourites: 141; Downloads: 242
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Poor Trixie, she seems down on her luck.What's this strange Unicorn after?
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This guy looks like bad news. He wants your soul, Trixie! Run!
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The long hair/mane in the stallion's face reminds me of Howl from Howl's Moving Castle. To me his voice actor would be Christian Bale, Howl's VA.
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what's up with the double v in "rivver" on the last frame? O.o other then that wonderful comic... I'm loving it!
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Never been a master at spelling.
The art takes over my mind and I get a bit distracted.
Glad you like the comic.
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"Trixie thanks you for your attendance, now kindly go jump in a river."
I'm already loving this.
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I'm glad! lots more to come!
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From one traditional pony comic artist to another, thanks for putting this on here, It's super awesome sauce.
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Thanks man! I have not yet begun to scribble.
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Kickass style.
I actually liked the stallion character a lot. (I do not usually do, but I think you caught the right look here.)
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That unicorn stallion talking to Trixie... something creepy about him.
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not to criticise or put down, I like your style very much. but it's river, not rivver. once again not mocking you or anything I hope to see more of you on EQD BTW Congrats on being featured ^_^
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Kinda looks like Trixie's about to be recruited for a DnD quest.
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Shitty OC, lost interest instantly. Glance at future pages reveals more boring Trixie and Twilight stuff.
This comic is simply too standard and boring.
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Thanks for your criticism.
I welcome everypony's observations.
Any suggestions on how it could improve?
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Well, to me the suggestion would be just have a comic about Trixie being Trixie instead of just following the boring idea of her and Twi's rivalry. I guess I should be happy at least you aren't shipping them (yet, if you do there's no chance for this).
But meh, the dark and 'aggressive' stallion that randomly appeared? He's pretty fucking boring. Saw him and he's so cliche I just rolled my eyes and couldn't be bothered.
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Bitch you just jealous of his great and powerful swag-
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