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Published: 2014-02-08 23:19:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 3227; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 0
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You're a dime a dozen in a sea of billions.Individuality has no significance in numbers so vast.
And while this fact may make looking forward hard
we can't keep living in the past.
You're a nervous movement in a freeze frame scene.
Steady hands won't help hold up such a fragile act.
And while you take your time keeping character
you fake what you can't take back.
With nothing more than a thought we form our actions
and this is where we extinguish the lie they tried to invent.
The lie that we painted our lives without passion
well conclusions are useless with no attempt to commence.
You're a song I can't name stuck in my head.
I've Β listened to you before and probably will again.
And while I can hum the melody all day long waiting
for it to hit me I still won't know where you've been.
You're a gust that has never changed direction.
Nothing can touch you you're only felt as you brush skin.
And while you can't be stopped, nothing lasts,
nothing can escape an end not even the wind.
With nothing more than a thought we form our actions
and this is where we extinguish the lie they tried to invent.
The lie that we painted our lives without passion
well conclusions are useless with no attempt to commence.
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Comments: 41
joeyws91 In reply to princessanastasia434 [2014-09-01 16:40:33 +0000 UTC]
thank you kindly.
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joeyws91 In reply to captivityisevil [2014-09-01 16:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you appreciate it.
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Rise-of-the-Republic [2014-08-31 23:45:16 +0000 UTC]
I can totally turn this into a song. It would be like a Sleeping with Sirens kind of lonely sounding Guitar, meant to pull on the listeners heartstrings and inspire them head to toe and tell them that the world is beautiful!
This is an amazing poem, and it shall definitely be remembered within the vast brain of mine that constantly struggles for success, inspiration, and peace of mind. You have successfully unblocked my mind for the moment, and I am extremely grateful to have found such a ponderous peace.
Thank you joeyws91!
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joeyws91 In reply to Rise-of-the-Republic [2014-09-01 01:43:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you appreciate it.
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Rise-of-the-Republic In reply to joeyws91 [2014-09-01 15:34:46 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all! I do love this!
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Laurenabees In reply to Rise-of-the-Republic [2014-09-01 00:21:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, the Sleeping with Sirens thing got me, that would be amazing. ;w;
Although, this piece is still heart-stoppingly pretty even without the music. Your words describe it wonderfully.Β
I give my thanks too, thank you for adding even more incredible art to my life!!
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Rise-of-the-Republic In reply to Laurenabees [2014-09-01 15:36:20 +0000 UTC]
:3 I do think it would be awesome!
I would try to turn it into a song... That is... If I knew how to play guitar... Perhaps, some time I will. That is with this mans' permission!
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joeyws91 In reply to Laurenabees [2014-09-01 01:44:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks glad you enjoy it
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OvergrownRuins [2014-08-31 21:26:07 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I like the idea of it and flows we. Great job!
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IzzyMarrie [2014-08-31 20:35:54 +0000 UTC]
This is a seriously good read, and I love how it flows off the tongue. Β It has a specific rhythm that's just . . Β well . . Β appealing! Β Very deep, and I definitely feel you deserve the daily deviation (congrats on that, btw!)
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joeyws91 In reply to IzzyMarrie [2014-08-31 21:30:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks much appreciated!
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coraajna In reply to joeyws91 [2014-08-31 22:52:52 +0000 UTC]
No problem Thank you for the enlightenment!Β
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OtakuWannaBeGamer [2014-08-31 18:49:08 +0000 UTC]
WOW!Just wow.That was amazing,i can't think of anything else to say other than that.
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joeyws91 In reply to OtakuWannaBeGamer [2014-08-31 21:28:41 +0000 UTC]
I'll gladly take that thanks
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joeyws91 In reply to WinxMewGirl [2014-08-31 21:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks glad you like it
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A-Lovely-Anxiety [2014-08-31 17:50:17 +0000 UTC]
this is such a lovely piece. Β there are more than a few lines i wish were stuck in my head right now.
congrats on a well deserved ddΒ
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joeyws91 In reply to A-Lovely-Anxiety [2014-08-31 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much Appreciate it.
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TheGalleryOfEve [2014-08-31 12:10:43 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!!
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AgonizingSwordfish In reply to joeyws91 [2014-09-01 03:49:43 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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ThatAnnoyingRabbit [2014-08-31 08:42:03 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
Congrats on the well deserved DD! I'm so happy for you!Β Β
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ThatAnnoyingRabbit In reply to joeyws91 [2014-08-31 16:32:57 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome^-^Β
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brassteeth [2014-08-31 07:02:26 +0000 UTC]
Honest and direct, with an overarching feeling of youth!
Congratulations on your D.D!!!
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joeyws91 In reply to brassteeth [2014-08-31 13:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks you glad you like it!
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beaverbobb12 [2014-02-14 13:02:47 +0000 UTC]
"You're a song I can't name stuck in my head.
I've Β listened to you before and probably will again."
That was good
I liked that, a lot. You should check out my song "Buy or bounce"
we have similar writing styles, maybe chat sometime?
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joeyws91 In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2014-02-10 18:54:47 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! I always try to make stuff flow
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