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Description The story behind this aging marker drawing is easily as amusing as the image itself.

Years ago, I was commissioned to do a drawing for a Star Trek fan club, the eponymous U.S.S. Chesapeake.

They wanted, quite simply, for me to draw a ship for them.

I didn't realize that the club at the time would have been more than satisfied had I simply put the name "U.S.S. Cheasapeake" on a drawing of Star Trek: The Next Generation's famed Galaxy Class vessel; so being the mecha-nut I am, I designed an entirely new vessel.

I decided to add a third warp nacelle, (Please note that I did this drawing well before the episode "All Good Things..." aired.) integrated into the saucer section, so that it would not become a lumbering, bulky target should the vessel have to separate. Said Nacelle would add power to the weapons system, in particular the dedicated saucer dish particle beam, when the ship's sections are united.

Keen eyes will also note quite a preponderance of torpedo tubes lining the ships hull.

Anyway, when I presented this battle wagon to the club, they rejected it out of hand because it wasn't the opulent explorer's vessel that Picard rolled around in. Normally, I would have simply gone back to my drawing board, but, being gleefully fluent in treknobabble, I decided it would be fun, this time, to debate the benefits of my ideas.

At that point, I addressed the club and defended my concept like defense contractor fighting to keep a plant open.

I pointed out that, in Next Generation, Starfleet's rules of engagement staunchly dictated that commander's were never to fire unless fired upon. Given that fact, and the situation that their two greatest territorial rivals: The Romulans and The Klingons boasted a prodigious first strike capability as well as an aggressive fleet disposition; it was certain that Federation starships would be called upon to respond to initial aggression.

To carry out such a doctrine under those circumstances, Starfleet would need a second strike capable front line vessel, and quite frankly, the Galaxy Class simply wasn't it.

I went on to enumerate the Next Generation Episodes1 in which the Enterprise 1701-D was incapacitated by obsolete, underpowered, sometimes ancient vessels whose only tactical advantage was that of first strike. TheFederation clearly needed a vessel that could absorb an attack from a war-surplus Bird-of-Prey piloted by a Ferenghi skeleton crew and respond in such a decisive manner as to deter future incursions from ambitious would-be aggressors.

Just to drive the point home, I also mentioned that of the six total Galaxy-Class vessels, christened at that point in the 'Trek timeline,2 (Which were supposed to defend the Federation from the Romulan Star Empire which boasted at least 12 separate comparable D'Diridex-Class cruisers.) three were lost during deployment. (Four, if you count the Enterprise-D itself, during "Generations". And the Galaxy was just a test-bed ship!)

I actually ended up selling the club on the idea of the ship.

If I was a fictional Federation defense company, I would have made a mint contracting that gun-laden behemoth to Star Fleet.

Well I would've, if there was money in the Star Trek future.

1.) Just to assuage the fears of the countless, annoying fuddy-duddies, who feel I'm going way too deep in my analysis of fictional outer space fleet dispositions and tactics--"Yes, I am aware this is all just a T.V. show!" so please feel free to bugger off.

2.) Edit: I had previously made what I considered to be a complete list of the names of the Big E's sister vessels, but I had included the USS Melborne, which a keen-eyed observer pointed out was an Excelsior-Class vessel. For the sake of accuracy and brevity, I felt it was better to omit the listing.
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Comments: 107

BULLETPROOFCHEETAH [2017-01-20 03:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Β This piece done in marker seems to have a slightly sinister Β air about it, if refined it's dark beauty might be fully realized. Β Just a thought. Β 

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JESzasz [2015-12-15 16:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Β Wow, and I thought I armed my designs to the teeth! I love the exotic curves you gave her. Andrew Probert would be amazed IMO!

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KiteBoy1 [2015-01-26 01:52:01 +0000 UTC]

Hi! Are you doing? That is one amazing looking starship you design. I wish that ship was featured in Star Trek online. You don't play that game do you?

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Tribble67 [2014-02-02 22:46:46 +0000 UTC]

As a Trek geek, I totally agree with your assessment and would like to go further and say that Starfleet should have developed a First Hit Defense technology, or two. An All Times aggression response AI possibly?

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grimmhelm [2013-08-29 14:58:41 +0000 UTC]

should put this into the STO guys there always running contests to make ships part of the game which in turn makes it cannon to the show like the whole enterprise F contest a few months ago

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Unit-ZER0 [2013-01-08 19:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Say hello to the O-Mega Class...

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shieldsz [2012-08-25 03:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Pretty cool man. Any Star Trek movies coming out should definitely look to artists such as yourself for ship concept ideas. You and every other Star Trek concept artists here would make Star Trek movies, games, etc. much more awesome.

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heavyneos [2011-12-24 18:52:16 +0000 UTC]

That what I’ve bin telling my friends, star fleet ships are oversized and under armed when compared with their rivals in the Klingon and Romulan empires

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Romulion [2011-11-11 22:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Great one Well done mate.

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avaruus-apina [2011-11-11 14:11:40 +0000 UTC]

That is just awesome!

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ACXtreme [2011-11-11 11:18:53 +0000 UTC]

I'd say you defended the ship... ... like a boss

but seriously, I'm very impressed. I'd love to 3D model it if only I had time : (

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NOMANSNODEAD [2011-07-12 09:21:43 +0000 UTC]

wow..nice!

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Tsunderelightning [2011-07-11 03:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Star Trek ship of the line. Awesome! I never understood why they rely on cruisers.

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unknown20troper [2011-03-05 21:33:28 +0000 UTC]

That's amazing! (The art and the story.)

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MaciaPaladin [2011-03-03 20:04:12 +0000 UTC]

I only have one "issue", and it's with your description. Where was it established that the Melbourne was Galaxy class? I recall it being seen on-screen as Excelsior in "The Best of Both Worlds" (the ship Admiral Hansen arrived on). She was the one in the tractor beam that got blown up immediately in the opening of DS9's "Emissary". [link]

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JohnStaton In reply to MaciaPaladin [2011-03-04 00:02:19 +0000 UTC]

You are right. It was never solidly established that the Melborne was an Excelsior class vessel. That's a definite oversight on my part.

However, a Galaxy class vessel was destroyed at Wolf 359, The same site you referenced bears that out, at least. It also identifies this unnamed Galaxy class vessel as Hanson's ship, since the same bridge set was used to film his last communication.

I had always assumed that the Excelsior class vessel that delivered Hansen and Shelby was the USS Hood. Is there any place where the identity of that ship is solidly established?

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MaciaPaladin In reply to JohnStaton [2011-03-04 11:00:16 +0000 UTC]

Actually, sorry. I was saying that it WAS established that the Melbourne was Excelsior class and not a Galaxy class. The picture on Memory Alpha is from the opening of "Emissary", the pilot of Deep Space Nine, which shows the battle actually taking place. The first ship destroyed is the Melbourne, and you can actually see the name on the hull if you look close enough, just before the Borg cutting beam blows the primary hull apart.

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JohnStaton In reply to MaciaPaladin [2011-03-04 19:47:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm not debating the fact that it was the Melborne at Wolf 359 or on the Emissary. It makes good sense from a narrative standpoint that a vessel mentioned in TNG would be showcased in the opening moments of DS9--bridging the two shows with a familiar element. I'm sorry if was unclear in my previous post that I agreed with this point, given the information provided.

I was saying that while I was in error regarding the identity of the vessel, a Galaxy class ship was still lost at Wolf. I believe its remains can be seen in the upper right section of the view screen when the Enterprise encounters the battle's aftermath.

I'm still not convinced it was the Melborne that dropped Hansen and Shelby off on Jouret Four. Hansen mentioned that the Melborne was awaiting a new captain. I can see a ship without a commanding officer being pressed into service once the Borg crisis was solidly established, but before then, I don't see it being used to ferry a flag officer and his aide.

Without new information, I inclined to assume it was the USS Hood--the ship they usually show in that particular clip of library footage.

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conquest79 [2011-03-03 19:37:36 +0000 UTC]

its a odd but cool lookn ship.

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RiseofDarkFire [2011-03-03 19:33:10 +0000 UTC]

*faint* You don't do half-measures, do you? YOU ARE AWESOME.

BTW, what's the crew complement of that thing?

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DIDfan [2011-01-02 06:50:57 +0000 UTC]

this looks awesome and you fleshed out the idea well. but you have one problem with your description, the nacelle does not create the warp power but merely creates the field around the ship, thats what the warp core is for

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JohnStaton In reply to DIDfan [2011-01-03 22:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Interesting point. I suppose that what I get for taking my ideas from Franz Joseph.

Well, for future reference I can simply say that the saucer section has its own independent warp core.

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DIDfan In reply to JohnStaton [2011-01-04 04:23:08 +0000 UTC]

that works

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omnifan In reply to DIDfan [2011-01-02 07:22:57 +0000 UTC]

hes right

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Caraig [2010-12-21 05:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Bravo, an excellent design!

You know... something to consider: Cryptic and CBS have a contest going on for designing the Enterprise-F. If you were inclined, this would be a competitive design.

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utriv [2010-12-15 22:00:41 +0000 UTC]

IIIIIIIIII like it!!!!

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JohnStaton In reply to utriv [2010-12-15 22:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Glad to hear it.

Or rather, read it.

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utriv In reply to JohnStaton [2010-12-29 21:34:23 +0000 UTC]

No prob! XD

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TheApprentice225 [2010-11-06 16:02:02 +0000 UTC]

you've not only sold them but you've sold me good sir! I am blown away by this design and would hang it on my wall had I enough picture frames. I don't supposed you'd be willing to do another ship with a similar purpose for my 26th century Star Trek group? I will provide a link to it should you be interested.

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WhiteFox89 [2010-10-28 03:04:11 +0000 UTC]

that is AWESOME!!!!

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JohnStaton In reply to WhiteFox89 [2010-10-28 17:25:14 +0000 UTC]



Thanks for the kind words.

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WhiteFox89 In reply to JohnStaton [2010-10-29 02:01:52 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome!!! keep it up!!!

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GStevensArt [2010-07-12 01:32:22 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work. I really like this ships design especially the integration of the warp nacelle into the saucer.

However, in regards to the comment on the bottom about making a ton of money if there was money in the Star Trek Universe. That is my big problem with Star Trek. It's full of Socialism. That was why I preferred Alternate Universe presented in the Enterprise episode "A Mirror Darkly" where humans killed the Vulcans during First Contact and jacked them for their ship and created an Empire. Now that is how the Federation should roll.

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JohnStaton In reply to GStevensArt [2010-07-12 16:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Heh, while "In a Mirror Darkly" was by far the best episode of Enterprise, I think that outright barbarism and piracy is too far on the other side of the pendulum for my taste.

I think the best portrayal of a future democracy could be found in Babylon 5. But then, B5 had the best of many things. Reboot Galactica started out looking to be as good, but then it stopped making any damn sense.

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GStevensArt In reply to JohnStaton [2010-07-13 02:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Galactica lost me when they blew up the Pegasus and tried colonizing that planet that got invaded by the Cylons at the end of the second season. Then they really lost me when they started getting really religious.

By the way, have you seen Firefly? That was a great series too.

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JohnStaton In reply to GStevensArt [2010-07-13 14:45:10 +0000 UTC]

Yea, Firefly was beyond excellent. Shame it didn't last very long.

Did you read the most recent Dark Horse "Serenity" comic? It's the only place now where we can get Firefly stories, and the most recent one-shot "Float-Out" had the best ending possible.

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GStevensArt In reply to JohnStaton [2010-07-13 21:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I gotta confess that I did not give it a look until after it was off the air. I was channel surfing once and paused long enough to see them riding in a horse drawn wagon that looked too western for me and thought that they were doing some Stark Trek holodeck crap or time warp and never gave it a second look. Regretfully, I did not learn that there was a reason for the western look since they were often flying to planets are the far rim of human colonized worlds... like the old west where people were in search of gold and a new way of life.

I need to check out those comics too.

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Hummakavuula [2010-04-21 15:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Behemoth is right..that thing is intimidating! awesome design. I wouldn't mind taking a crack at modeling that.

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JohnStaton In reply to Hummakavuula [2010-04-29 16:33:25 +0000 UTC]

That would be absolutely awesomesauce!

Let me know if you'd need any thing from my end.

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Hummakavuula In reply to JohnStaton [2010-04-29 18:15:45 +0000 UTC]

I read an earlier post of yours that said you would change a few things if you had to do it over again..like windows and such. If I decide to tackle this, I'll base it from that standpoint. I'm working on a Daedalus Class ship right now, Maybe I'll go after your behemoth next.

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JohnStaton In reply to Hummakavuula [2010-04-30 01:20:46 +0000 UTC]

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name-already-chosen [2010-01-30 07:41:39 +0000 UTC]

This is really good!

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JohnStaton In reply to name-already-chosen [2010-02-01 19:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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OmegaSqaudFi [2009-06-30 17:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done, i love it

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Promus-Kaa [2009-06-03 01:43:37 +0000 UTC]

There was money in the TOS timeline, so if you had designed some TOS ships you WOULD have made a mint.

Seriously though, NICE design. I never did like Picard's floating Hilton Hotel; I always scoff when people claim "OMG LIEK PICARD WOULD TOTALLY OWN KIRK'S ENTERPRISE," because the Enterprise-D was always getting owned by older, obsolete ships like you mentioned.

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EBONY-BANDERSNATCH [2009-03-13 04:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow- You did a fantastic job selling the concept: The ship on TNG kept getting disabled by things like thousands-year old booby-traps, or even the library that they found drifting out in the middle of nowhere for fifty thousand years that gave Data like twelve personalities. I'm not sure if a warship would fare any better against one of the countless subspace anomalies floating out there: It would seem that there's Federation vessels being gulped down on a weekly basis.
Of course, there was more of that in Voyager than in any other series, as I recall, so maybe they should just stay the hell out of the delta quadrant...

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JohnStaton In reply to EBONY-BANDERSNATCH [2009-03-13 04:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh man, don't get me started on Voyager.

That show was flawed coming out of the gate, and unlike Enterprise, which found a direction in its final year on the air, Voyager never shaped up.

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AnimeSniper [2009-03-10 21:36:39 +0000 UTC]

And if the federation didn't buy then there is always the other ship toting massive firepower factions out there... they would simply have to get past you a lowly human or adorian, blue skin guys little atennae that that your prof-sig depicts possibly

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JohnStaton In reply to AnimeSniper [2009-03-11 02:28:33 +0000 UTC]

"they would simply have to get past you a lowly human or adorian, blue skin guys little atennae that that your prof-sig depicts possibly."





Run that by me again? I'm having trouble following what you're trying to say.

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AnimeSniper In reply to JohnStaton [2009-03-12 22:35:16 +0000 UTC]

First Sorry and on closer inspection I recognize your profile image as Destro from the original [link] cartoon but back to what I posted... amazing how 15+ years of last seeing the original tends to make one not recognize them. And in retrospect I hate it when the keyboard doesn't register a keystroke.

Most races in Star Trek when first encounter humans tend to view them as a weak inferior species or some other reason, Klingons we have no Honor, and except for Vulcans who saw us as emotionally grounded in our ways... I meant the Andorians from the ST Enterprise which I have been watching on Sci-fi, my only fix currently, are the ones Captain Archer encounters and has recurring meetings with throughout the series is who I intially thought of... why I don't know.

Still excellently drawn and I could see this as the Federations attempt to balance things out after the Dominion War and the Delta Quadrant i.e. the Borg.

Also, the ship could have Torpedo launchers that say could be adjusted to fit non-federation issue torpedos i.e. Klingon, Romulan, Cardassian, etcetera that are salvaged from the battlefield of the not completely destroyed ships and looks to have a flight deck on the back between the nacelles

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