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Update Log: 04/19/08Hi everyone, this is just another quick...errr, semi quick update. I'm still super busy as always, but I found a little time to make a few changes.
Changes:
Reshaped the legs and added fur to them
Removed the rings from the horns
and a few minor flaws fixed
I'm not sure if the shape is right, I think it's something I can work on and play with. If you find that you don't like these new changes, the previous version can be found here: [link]
Update Log: 03/25/08
Hi everyone...I'm sorry that it'ss taking me so long to get back to everyone. I've been SUPER busy! *sigh* Anyways, I made a few 'minor' changes based on the the continued comments that I've been getting. I should have more by this weekend (hopefully).
Changes:
Added a second set of antlers on the otherside of her head
Resized and removed darkness around the eye
Added texture to her muzzle and hands
reshaped the head a little
removed the tattoo
Please keep the comments coming, I think were getting closer to a really great morph! :8)
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Update Log: 03/33/08
Ok, I've taken a lot of criticism to heart and I've 'tried' to make the appropriate changes. Keep in mind that this is a quick update, I haven't gotten to everyones request yet.
changes:
Reshaped the changed the color of the Muzzle (nose)
Eyes
Made the head bigger (not sure if it shows)
Added Fur
Reshaped the horns
Reshaped the hands, making them more hoof like
...and changed the animal from a straight deer to a reindeer to avoid horn confusion.
Anyways, keep the comments coming. If you like it, great! If something is off or needs changing, let me know! This is your project as well as mine this time.
The original can be found here: [link]
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Hi everyone,
Well, here I am again with another new morph...but this time, things are going to be a little different. How is that? Well as you look this morph over, what do you notice? *S* Don't see it? Well, to me...it's not quite complete. This is an old project I started some time ago and I thought it might be fun to get some interaction from the fans....still lost? Ok, let me explain:
This is an incomplete project, my goal is to get input and change it as nessary (hopefully this could be fun) I want everyone to tell me...What do you like about it? What don't you like? What needs improvement.
Also, what direction should I take? How about adding hoove? Should they be full or partial? Do I need to add fur? Yes...no? Should the muzzle be smaller? Anything that you fancy. Your opinions will help me shape and complete this morph (which I will be updating periodly)....I look at it as a team effort and a chance for people to have a say in what they want to see! YAH!
If this works out, I might do other projects this way. So, please...don't hold back! I want to hear what you think...really!!!
My currently list of future changes:
-reshape the hands into partial hooves
-add fur to certain locations (such as the arms)
-reshape the legs, making them more animal like
Morph: ReinDeer
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Model info:
Name: xstockx
Site: [link]
Original: [link]
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Comments: 190
damn, its looking good girl. well done.
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I suppose if you're really looking for criticism...
The neck could be a tad longer,
The legs could be a tad lither,
The arms could shrink a little,
And the hands could turn more hooflike.
I do like this pic though.
If you're going to alter this pic, don't post over it like you did the dog-muzzle pic.
Minature seqences of progression are good, if you hear what I'm saying.
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i've tried a few of your sugestions...let me know what you think of the current version.
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The neck hair adds to the effect--nice,
The hands are progressing nicely,
The longer horns are amazing and look even better,
But the legs haven't changed yet.
Still waiting for that.
I'm sure that's going to be great when they do change, though.
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I hope so...but, I'm glad that you like it so far! Thank you! ^_^
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Nicely done so far love the tail although one thing I noticed is that its clearly visible under the jaw thats its been liquified try copying the noise from other parts of the neck to mask it better. Dunno might help 
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Check the latest version and let me know what you think.
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Very nice
One thing though I noticed that the Hoof Fingers seem to be a bit too smooth but looks great
Great job on the neck too
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Maybe a little more texture is needed the.
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I love the concept and most of what you have done...
My one suggestion is about the antlers. If she is turning into a doe, how does she have antlers.
Unless she's changing gender too... I,personally, would like her to remain as a female.
but otherwise, I agree with the other comments!
Great job!
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I thought about this too to be honest...your correct (as far as I know) a doe doesn't have antlers. But if I left them out, it would have been harder to figure out what animal she is changing into. Lets just pretend (using the power of imagination) that there is a rare species of deer were the females have small antlers. *L* Of course, I will try removing them after I make a few more changes. They might not be needed.
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then again...you could always have her becoming a him...just a thought. I agree with what most of the others have said: looks great, but the muzzle's a bit...pudgy, pouty i suppose
I like your idea for making her legs more deer-ish, and perhaps you could give her a bit more haunch.
Excellent horns and tail especially
you could also try adding a hint of color - not fur just yet (though, that would be good too) but a change of skintone to foreshadow the fur to come.
Also, perhaps if you darken her nose and eyes, make them both more wet-looking...you know, those bambi's-mother eyes
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I redid the muzzle a bit, I'm not sure if I can do much about the pudgy look...but I did take away the pouty expression. But I did redo the nose and the eyes a bit.
The legs and arms are next on my list!
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There are a few species where the females have antlers, (not quite deer, but reindeer are an example)
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Really?? I had no idea! That's interesting.
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Thanks for the reindeer idea. *S*
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you should have added feet, hooved feet. anywayz, this looks good, just like a lot of the rest
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I can't, the picture is cut off...sorry. ^_^
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hmm i'd say if you were going to change the hands into hooves, maybe just add a very subtle darkening of her left palm (the skin thickening, getting darker etc) rather than change the fingers into actual hooves. It would retain a bit of elegance and feminity. (does that make sense??)
Lovely work though! The face is great!
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Hmmm...interesting idea. I'll try that and see how it comes out! *HUGS* Thanks for the idea!
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You're welcome! Hope it all turns well - I'm sure it will!! *hug back*
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hmm tough to answer. id say let it take its course.[ie continue her tf]
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How are the horns? Ears? Anything need work? Does it need more features? Fewer? *poke poke* Oops...sorry. ^_^
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With the hands how they are, you could make them look like they are becoming hooflike for one
The body shape could be made to look like its shifting a bit (Chest and leg wise)
The horns are fine, could be a tiny bit bigger, i dunno. Ears are good too. And maybe little bits of fur growing on her arms.
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I've already started working on hooves for her hands, I like your ideas and see about making some more changes
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Glad i could be of assistance to you
I'll be on my messenger 2night as well
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the muzzle looks a bit odd may want to make that more subtle, and maybe give her hooves, or the starting of such, and a bit of fur on the neck and stomach.
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Sounds like a good start...any other ideas?
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Not really, btu I will get back to you if I do
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You should add some fur to her legs too. the inner thighs look too plain.
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also, move the antlers back a bit, they make her head look long.
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Do they? I'll play with it and see. Thanks for the advice!
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