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My first assignment forRelated content
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Nice work but your shading needs a bit of work and your circles, I would suggest using a round flat object like a empty clean cup bottom or a coin or a coasterΒ
Sorry If I sound harsh but it's only way to improve, and that's how I learned
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Hey! Not harsh at all. I appreciate the criticism. It helps me improve!
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I wouldn't recommend tracing just to get a perfect circle. That would be contrary to the whole point of practicing.
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Agreed. That's why I was doing the warmups earlier, doing nothing but circles.
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Okay and that is very true, criticism helps anyone improve their skills in anything we do
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Constructive criticism is one thing I was looking for here on dA when I started posting my art with the kisekae edits.
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Well, you definitely need to work on smoothing those shadows. Good job otherwise.
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I need a lot of work. 
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It's not that I was blaming you. If I just tell you it's awesome, I'd be lying. So I think I'd better tell you what you already know. It's nothing to be ashamed of. I can't do that right either.
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No worries! ^^ I appreciate the criticism. It helps.
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