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dd4rri3nd [2011-01-20 18:02:25 +0000 UTC]

(Ok...well if you had premium membership I'd be able to use the star-thingys to rate your picture but oh well.)

Well I like this picture, despite work that needs to be done. I'll Start with what I like.

The color sceme's simple yet beautiful. You'd be suprise at what you can do if you follow the K.I.S.S.(Keep It Simple Stupid) method. I also like the somewhat yin-yang appearance of this picture, of how Ita is a bad, Loli is good, yet with them imbracing, a piece of loli is on Ita's side, while a piece of Ita is on Loli's side.

Now for the parts that need fixing.
Well for one thing, is the technique. I can tell you went over an original drawing with markers, but when doing so, you must always becareful. Take the process slow, also this goes for filling in the colors. You don't want to go out the lines. Also, the angles are off, especially around the heads of the two girls....like loli's bonnet, which makes the picture look flat. There's also a lot of empty spaces, incompletions here and there (where's Ita's neck?) and anatomy problems (Loli's chin is needs to be more rounded.) Also there's a lot of "dirt"(spots, smears, markings, etc... that dont belong in the colorless part of the page) that kinda ruins the picture. Try using a photo editing program, or ms paint (save as png file) to make the whites in your picture "whiter." So that way the picture looks more cleaner. If not, try using whiteout, a good eraser, and/or when drawing and coloring try to use a spare paper or something to cover the hands you place on the page so the oils on your hands wont smear the ink,lead,etcetc on your paper.

Over all I'd give it a 3 and 1/2 out of 5. It's good, but can still use some work. Well keep practicing and keep drawing ^_^

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dd4rri3nd [2011-01-19 23:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Ok I'll critique this one, when I get the chance, just send me a note with a link to it.

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Levia-the-Dragon [2011-01-08 11:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Huh... so by a bad Lolita, the term means a tacky or lazy one?

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