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Hello, and thanks for reading my tutorial, here I hope to give some sound advice to those who want to make their OC Mew Mew but don't know where to start. Let's begin!Names:
Alright, first off, you have to name your girl after some type of food, and pronounce it the way the Japanese would, it won't make sense later on if you don't. You pretty much have free range with given names anyway! For family names make sure it's connected to a color. "Momo"= peach, "ai"= indigo. And that it connects with her outfit's color scheme too.
Animals:
Unfortunately, there are more than enough endangered species to choose from. >.>" And everyone, making the 698,972,356,385,903,127th canine/feline Mew is not CREATIVE. Remember now, the more endangered they are, the stronger your Mew will be, and I challenge you to choose an "ugly" critter and make a Mew with it. But please for the love of God DO NOT make your Mew have the DNA of some mythological animal if you're NOT planning an AU fanfiction! A phoenix Mew with the canon group is a Mary Sue, that same phoenix Mew teamed up with a unicorn, lochness monster, dragon, and minotaur Mew is CREATIVE!
Colors:
If you've named your girl say...Salsa, don't make her color scheme black and blue! The color scheme has to connect with her name, either with just family name like Mint's, or both like Lettuce and Ichigo. And all the mews have some secondary color, which you can see on their "fur" trim on their outfits. Either it's white, a shade/tint of their main color, or the same color as their animal features. The third option works best with animals of one main color though, so no zebra stripes, that'd be odd.
For the most part, Mews change hair color to an unnatural variant of their natural shade. Ichigo goes from dark red to pink, and Minto goes from dark blue to medium blue.
Outfits/Mew Marks:
Here's something that gets overlooked a lot, if you think about it, everything about the Mew's physical appearance is symmetrical. Some things that all the Mews have in common are as listed:
-The collars, of course!
-Their outfits are sleeveless.
-They have those puffy, detached sleeves.
-Their outfits are short enough to expose their garters.
-Their Mew marks fall in the mid-line of their bodies.
-Their outfits also reveal their marks somehow.
Anyway, besides the marks being symmetrical, imagine an invisible line splitting you perfectly down the middle and that's the mid-line. Unless your Mew was hand injected, her mark will appear on said line, let's look at Ichigo, hers is on her inner thigh. But, if she stood with her feet together, her mark still falls on her mid-line as well.
And the garters, well they show what the Mew's rank is. If it's on the left thigh, she's a follower, right thigh symbolizes the leader (AKA the most powerful.)
Weapons/Attacks:
Now all the Mews weapons are musical instruments, thank goodness there's a plethora to choose from as well, why not have a Mew who's animal AND weapon come from the same continent? Such as a didgeridoo and a Kangaroo? (Feel free to use that idea if you want!) Anyways, let's look at some examples on how to choose a weapon for your Mew! Anyway, there are three ways to go about this:
Word-smushing 1: "Strawberu-beru" = "Strawberry Bell"
This is where you can smush the instrument name along with your Mew's given name.
Word-smushing 2: "Min-tone Arrow" = "Mint Tone Arrow"
This second choice is where you can take a word with musical meaning and smush it with your OC's name. Now take into account that Minto's bow is shaped like a harp, and Zakuro's whip is a flute, but you don't HAVE to say it like with Strawberry Bell.
The girl behind the Mew:
The list of questions you want to ask before putting tragedy in:
- Has it happened explicitly in-universe to either a main character, side character, or even an extra?
- Has it happened implicitly in-universe?
- Could the authorities' behavior reflect a world in which this tragedy is common, rare but possible, or almost impossible?
- Are you TRYING in general to dismantle the innocence of the series you're using? (Simply writing in a tragic character to add more edge does not count--- dismantling an innocent world is usually a pretty serious literary experiment, perhaps done for a creative writing course.)
- Are the authorities hopelessly incompetent, yet this sort of thing does not crop up regularly? (Incompetent cops yet little crime tend to be a clue that certain things may not be plausible in a fanfic.
To use Pokemon as an example, a fanfiction in which Misty is killed by Rockets and then have Ash embark on a quest of bloody revenge is ridiculous when not played for humour or for the sake of dismantling innocence. This is because:
- This has never happened explicitly in-universe.
- It has not happened implicitly, either, though the Japanese dub DID include the Squirtle Squad threatening to kill Misty if Ash didn't come back--- though, the same Squirtle turned out to be a bit of a softie later, so it's possible he'd have never followed through.
- The authorities behavior suggests that some things may be nigh impossible occurences--- parents send their children away from home on unsupervised adventures at the age of ten, compare to this world where some kids aren't allowed to play unsupervised in the front yard or walk down the street.
- The authorities are not hopelessly incompetent, either. Jenny is portrayed as sharp and in the know on things. This suggests that if something like abuse did transpire, it would likely not go to an extreme, and the child would be pulled away from his abusive guardians before it turned any worse.
In fact, you are more likely to encounter a legendary Pokemon than a severely abused kid or a serial killer.
And on a last note folks, try not to give your OC a SUPER KAWAII DESU NEKO GIRL DITZY PERSONALITY DESU!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to ??? [2013-03-10 14:00:31 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, and thank you for the fave!
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TerrificallyTerri In reply to ??? [2013-01-02 18:42:17 +0000 UTC]
Could my character be like a theif at first? Like she a jwel theif. Her twin was sopost to me the new mew but they got mix up and gave Her the ingection instead.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to TerrificallyTerri [2013-01-02 19:16:47 +0000 UTC]
That's your decision, bro, not mine.
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mrmen00returns In reply to ??? [2012-12-06 23:07:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm thinking of a dark, kinda has a split personality character , would the name 'Zakuro nanime' , sound suitable?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to mrmen00returns [2012-12-07 18:07:13 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, about the last reply! What I meant was, are you going to give Kinoko a personality disorder? Your explanation is kinda vague on that.
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mrmen00returns In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-12-07 18:52:04 +0000 UTC]
I was , she would be kinda good , kinds evil , I was going to give her split/multi personality disorder.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to mrmen00returns [2012-12-08 01:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Okay, so do you mean that she is a neutral character?
Alright, just do as much research as you can. Most experts believe that it doesn't actually exist, and the most famous case of the disorder, Sybil, is under serious scrutiny.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to mrmen00returns [2012-12-07 18:00:51 +0000 UTC]
What sort of personality disorder are thinking of giving her?
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MidnightAqua246 In reply to ??? [2012-12-04 21:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Could you help me with my new Mew Mew?
My FC's colour scheme is black, and I can't think up a first name for her. :/ (This has been a huge help, by the way. ^^)
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MidnightAqua246 [2012-12-04 23:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Glad that it helped, but since I know nothing about your character I can't actually help. Try analyzing her personality first and see what you can come up with.
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MidnightAqua246 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-12-05 07:12:40 +0000 UTC]
She's a tomboy and she's very jumpy. She can be sarcastic but she's outgoing and a good person, that being all I came up with on personality. She's got the DNA of a black dorcopsis and... I still got nothing on names.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MidnightAqua246 [2012-12-05 13:48:32 +0000 UTC]
'Tomboy' is a pretty broad term and it's more of an opinion than a fact. Try figuring out how she might be seen as a Tomboy and describe it. Also figure out the flaws that will naturally surface from the traits you already described.
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MidnightAqua246 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-12-05 16:39:04 +0000 UTC]
I did not know that. XD
She's seen by a tomboy because she's more energetic and daring than most girls. She also doesn't care what people think of her, in comparison as to how most girls care about what they look like. She's also immature for her age. XD
She often gets into trouble with other people and finds it hard to make friends because a lot of people see her as rude and obnoxious (which she can be). She's also very impatient and likes to rush things, which causes her to get some things completely wrong. She's also pretty inattentive and gets distracted easily when she has to do things at a slower pace.
Do I need to say anything else?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MidnightAqua246 [2012-12-06 00:14:44 +0000 UTC]
Alright, now that you have that, how did she become that way? In others words, what's her past?
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CherryOnee-chan In reply to ??? [2012-11-24 13:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Can you help me with my Mew Mew, Cherry? I'd be really greatful!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to CherryOnee-chan [2012-11-25 02:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Sure, what sort of help?
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CherryOnee-chan In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-11-25 17:12:16 +0000 UTC]
Er, well, I'm having trouble making up her outfit, weapon and attack. Her attack is Ribon Cherry Surprise, and her weapon is Cherry Staff. Does it sound to generic? Also, she's a panther. And I don't know about her hair stle, and a lot of OCs are called Mew Cherry.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to CherryOnee-chan [2012-11-26 01:06:34 +0000 UTC]
Looks are the least important thing about an OC, I'm more concerned with personality and back story. Once you have those down, the rest will naturally follow.
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CherryOnee-chan In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-11-26 12:35:11 +0000 UTC]
Well, both her parents died when she was young, and she's a bit depressed sometimes, but she is loyal and very sarcastic. When she's not being sarcastic, she is honest, to the point of hurting one's feelings. She says it as it is...but doesn't mean to hurt anybody.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to CherryOnee-chan [2012-11-26 14:16:36 +0000 UTC]
I recommend expanding her personality a bit more, think about why and how she became the way she is and how it affects herself and others.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to CherryOnee-chan [2012-11-27 14:22:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
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SnowSpirit6375 In reply to ??? [2012-08-21 07:23:33 +0000 UTC]
This guide really helped me devolp my team(s) of Mew's! Thank you! (Also based on another comment, Mew Ceriman has the DNA of an Axolotl! Her counterpart Mew Parsley has a Gavial instead.)
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to SnowSpirit6375 [2012-08-21 13:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and yay Axolotls! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
SnowSpirit6375 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-08-22 02:13:10 +0000 UTC]
Also a question no the Mew Marks, if they were injected like the canon ones were, could they have a mark on their hand if they held it over their chest or something when they were injected? Sorry if it sounds stupid but I didn't really get how that part worked.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to SnowSpirit6375 [2012-08-22 14:43:38 +0000 UTC]
Well, I remember in the anime that the group was shot with a beam that caused their marks to appear on the line, but injections like you suggest are perfectly okay.
Although there are a lot of nerves on the hand making for a very painful injection. >.o But you do whatever you want.
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SnowSpirit6375 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-08-23 11:18:29 +0000 UTC]
Ah,thanks! Oh dear and it's the youngest and shyest that got hand/wrist marks too...
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to SnowSpirit6375 [2012-08-23 13:27:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. Ah, oh well at least the pain will subside eventually!
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fictionfighter In reply to ??? [2012-07-23 18:37:14 +0000 UTC]
Could I ask you for help with one of my Mew Mews?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to fictionfighter [2012-07-23 18:56:03 +0000 UTC]
Sure, what kinda help?
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fictionfighter In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-07-23 19:13:46 +0000 UTC]
Well...for personal story reasons, the leader of my Mew Mews is (don't kill me) a cat, but her personality is pretty generic for a main-character magical girl. You know, happy, bubbly, always looking out for her friends, etc. I need to give her more personality while still having her able to fit with my other Mews.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to fictionfighter [2012-07-23 22:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Well, you could try twisting her personality somehow where she's not so generic, and that can be where her flaws come in. Because honestly if you poke around you'll easily find 5,926,492,659,026,184 OCs with the same personality. So, what more can you tell me about her personality? What about background?
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fictionfighter In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-07-24 00:00:27 +0000 UTC]
I only just started working on these characters recently, so they only have the basic personality traits as of now. Most of them don't really have stories yet.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to fictionfighter [2012-07-24 00:59:54 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well put some time aside to really think about what they're like and what sort of history contributed to making them that way.
Also, thanks for the watch!
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ChimeraWaffles In reply to ??? [2012-07-21 16:01:52 +0000 UTC]
I have a question regarding the garters that the Mews wear. I know that they are used as a sort of ranking system and that they are an important part of the Mews' costumes, but two of the Mews on my Fan!Team are boys, and I am having a hard time making their outfits be compatible with a garter. Do you think I could replace the garters with another clothing accessory that could still show the Mews' ranks? Perhaps wearing boots or socks, and the leader's would reach higher up on her legs than the others?
[I'm asking because I'm a little worried this is a dumb idea, or it breaks cannon too much. ^^"]
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to ChimeraWaffles [2012-07-21 22:20:24 +0000 UTC]
To my knowledge nobody the canon doesn't say that boys can't be Mews, but it's just that there has never been any in canon. So, that would mean you have a lot creative free reign on what their outfits look like, and just as with any other outfit of the "Magical Girl" variety you have to come up with a theme and make them similar enough that anyone can tell that these boys are in uniform.
Also garters on boys is pretty creepy in my opinion. o.o"
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ChimeraWaffles In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-07-21 22:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I think boys wearing garters seems sort of weird too. That's one reason why I'm trying to come up with a different thing for them to wear. xD" I don't mean that the boys would be the only two not wearing garters. If I made a change and decided to replace the garters with a different accessory, all the the Mew's outfits would have that accessory instead of the garters.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to ChimeraWaffles [2012-07-21 23:33:27 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you could introduce your design as a new 'power level' of sorts. Nowhere in canon does it say that the outfits the Mews are the ONLY ones they're allowed to have. Maybe that's just level one, and your team has come far enough to attain level two somehow? I don't know I'm just rambling now.
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PsychoSheepParty In reply to ??? [2012-07-02 08:28:42 +0000 UTC]
I have a TMM OC (your tutorial was extremely helpful by the way ) named Cherry Amaiaka. She's a black haired dark red mew mew and her animal is the Red Panda >w<
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to PsychoSheepParty [2012-08-02 03:22:11 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you! ^//^
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MokaTheHat In reply to ??? [2012-06-13 00:45:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like this. I started making a Mew. I would love your input. Her surname is Kuroi and her name is Kanzou, which literally translates to Black Licorice, her name Kanzou (licorice). Her endangered animal is the Maui Dolphin, I think their are about 55 left in the world, and her color is black (obviously). I know a lot of people use black, but it's kinda hard to make a color different from the other Mews. Still working on the weapon and attacks and outfit, but I'm drawing. Fingers crossed it comes out good. Great job, btw!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MokaTheHat [2012-06-13 02:36:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^///^
That all looks okay, but I'd rather know about her personality and biography since I consider it to be the most important aspects when creating a character.
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MokaTheHat In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-06-21 19:36:32 +0000 UTC]
She has three different personality's. The first one is a serious facade for her family. She uses this one to get good grades and high ranks in gymnastics and dance. Her second is a very happy and bubbly personality she exerts when she is alone or with close family and friends, like her father. The third one is a very seductive one. She only uses it around her crush or when she is in mew mew form.
She was born between an affair her father had with a co-worker, he isn't even the father she learns later in the story. Her mother really doesn't like her, and she is also the villain in the story, trying to make her son hate Kanzou, who is good. I know this is short, but I tried posting this multiple times before, and things kept happening.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MokaTheHat [2012-06-22 02:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Kanzou's personality is that of a manipulator who dons a different personality, depending on the situation, in order to get what she wants. Especially since one of them is a seductive personality, in effect she's sexually manipulative too. It makes complete sense that her mother hates her because she sees right through her manipulations and she just wants to protect her son from Kanzou.
Her past also helps to add to her personality. Since her father really isn't her birth father then Kanzou's birth mother is very likely to be manipulative and controlling if she managed to convince her lover that the baby she was having was his, and Kanzou looks like she's managed inherit that trait.
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MokaTheHat In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-06-22 02:43:16 +0000 UTC]
She really hates the seductive personality, but she got that from her mom.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MokaTheHat [2012-06-22 03:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Why would she act that way when she's in her Mew form? Especially towards her crush.
All I have to say is that Kanzou sounds like a manipulative, awful person who expects to get everything she wants. Additionally, based on your reply she also blames others for her own problems. Honestly, you have the beginnings of a great villain with Kanzou, but because you made her a protagonist and seem to expect her to be liked it makes her a huge Mary Sue.
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