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Hello, and thanks for reading my tutorial, here I hope to give some sound advice to those who want to make their OC Mew Mew but don't know where to start. Let's begin!Names:
Alright, first off, you have to name your girl after some type of food, and pronounce it the way the Japanese would, it won't make sense later on if you don't. You pretty much have free range with given names anyway! For family names make sure it's connected to a color. "Momo"= peach, "ai"= indigo. And that it connects with her outfit's color scheme too.
Animals:
Unfortunately, there are more than enough endangered species to choose from. >.>" And everyone, making the 698,972,356,385,903,127th canine/feline Mew is not CREATIVE. Remember now, the more endangered they are, the stronger your Mew will be, and I challenge you to choose an "ugly" critter and make a Mew with it. But please for the love of God DO NOT make your Mew have the DNA of some mythological animal if you're NOT planning an AU fanfiction! A phoenix Mew with the canon group is a Mary Sue, that same phoenix Mew teamed up with a unicorn, lochness monster, dragon, and minotaur Mew is CREATIVE!
Colors:
If you've named your girl say...Salsa, don't make her color scheme black and blue! The color scheme has to connect with her name, either with just family name like Mint's, or both like Lettuce and Ichigo. And all the mews have some secondary color, which you can see on their "fur" trim on their outfits. Either it's white, a shade/tint of their main color, or the same color as their animal features. The third option works best with animals of one main color though, so no zebra stripes, that'd be odd.
For the most part, Mews change hair color to an unnatural variant of their natural shade. Ichigo goes from dark red to pink, and Minto goes from dark blue to medium blue.
Outfits/Mew Marks:
Here's something that gets overlooked a lot, if you think about it, everything about the Mew's physical appearance is symmetrical. Some things that all the Mews have in common are as listed:
-The collars, of course!
-Their outfits are sleeveless.
-They have those puffy, detached sleeves.
-Their outfits are short enough to expose their garters.
-Their Mew marks fall in the mid-line of their bodies.
-Their outfits also reveal their marks somehow.
Anyway, besides the marks being symmetrical, imagine an invisible line splitting you perfectly down the middle and that's the mid-line. Unless your Mew was hand injected, her mark will appear on said line, let's look at Ichigo, hers is on her inner thigh. But, if she stood with her feet together, her mark still falls on her mid-line as well.
And the garters, well they show what the Mew's rank is. If it's on the left thigh, she's a follower, right thigh symbolizes the leader (AKA the most powerful.)
Weapons/Attacks:
Now all the Mews weapons are musical instruments, thank goodness there's a plethora to choose from as well, why not have a Mew who's animal AND weapon come from the same continent? Such as a didgeridoo and a Kangaroo? (Feel free to use that idea if you want!) Anyways, let's look at some examples on how to choose a weapon for your Mew! Anyway, there are three ways to go about this:
Word-smushing 1: "Strawberu-beru" = "Strawberry Bell"
This is where you can smush the instrument name along with your Mew's given name.
Word-smushing 2: "Min-tone Arrow" = "Mint Tone Arrow"
This second choice is where you can take a word with musical meaning and smush it with your OC's name. Now take into account that Minto's bow is shaped like a harp, and Zakuro's whip is a flute, but you don't HAVE to say it like with Strawberry Bell.
The girl behind the Mew:
The list of questions you want to ask before putting tragedy in:
- Has it happened explicitly in-universe to either a main character, side character, or even an extra?
- Has it happened implicitly in-universe?
- Could the authorities' behavior reflect a world in which this tragedy is common, rare but possible, or almost impossible?
- Are you TRYING in general to dismantle the innocence of the series you're using? (Simply writing in a tragic character to add more edge does not count--- dismantling an innocent world is usually a pretty serious literary experiment, perhaps done for a creative writing course.)
- Are the authorities hopelessly incompetent, yet this sort of thing does not crop up regularly? (Incompetent cops yet little crime tend to be a clue that certain things may not be plausible in a fanfic.
To use Pokemon as an example, a fanfiction in which Misty is killed by Rockets and then have Ash embark on a quest of bloody revenge is ridiculous when not played for humour or for the sake of dismantling innocence. This is because:
- This has never happened explicitly in-universe.
- It has not happened implicitly, either, though the Japanese dub DID include the Squirtle Squad threatening to kill Misty if Ash didn't come back--- though, the same Squirtle turned out to be a bit of a softie later, so it's possible he'd have never followed through.
- The authorities behavior suggests that some things may be nigh impossible occurences--- parents send their children away from home on unsupervised adventures at the age of ten, compare to this world where some kids aren't allowed to play unsupervised in the front yard or walk down the street.
- The authorities are not hopelessly incompetent, either. Jenny is portrayed as sharp and in the know on things. This suggests that if something like abuse did transpire, it would likely not go to an extreme, and the child would be pulled away from his abusive guardians before it turned any worse.
In fact, you are more likely to encounter a legendary Pokemon than a severely abused kid or a serial killer.
And on a last note folks, try not to give your OC a SUPER KAWAII DESU NEKO GIRL DITZY PERSONALITY DESU!
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Comments: 398
MokaTheHat In reply to ??? [2012-06-22 03:36:32 +0000 UTC]
She doesn't blame her mother for the seductive personality, she just has it. Her brain lets it out in her Mew form to just get it out, and she uses it unintentionally on the person she likes, but in the beginning, she doesn't like anyone. And her serious personality was built from the fact her step-mother hated her so much, and she wants to please her, and her father. I have no intention of making everyone like her. No one really likes her until they get to know her a lot better. And no one really gets to know her better.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MokaTheHat [2012-06-22 18:01:03 +0000 UTC]
She is a protagonist. What I mean by "like" is not character-side-like. It's reader-side-like. It's VERY DIFFICULT for a reader to identify with and enjoy reading a story about a character like her. Reread your reply and notice how many times you "excuse" her flaws and blame them on external sources--- that's what makes her un-likeable. It's a pity party, it's full of excuses that she can't "control" her manipulative personality (utter bullshit, you always have the ability to stop being a manipulative brat). As such, that says you EXPECT the reader to brush her flaws under the rug and like her simply because she's a helpless victim. THAT is what makes her a Mary Sue.
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Kittyshy3342 In reply to ??? [2012-06-11 01:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Don't you hate how EVERY mew mew oc is a panda or fox named cherry? I know it's their oc, but still
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Kittyshy3342 [2012-06-11 01:42:58 +0000 UTC]
It took a while, but I learned to ignore it.
It'd be nice to see more Mews with animal DNA that isn't fuzzy or "cute." Like an Axolotl for example.
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fictionfighter In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-07-23 05:17:43 +0000 UTC]
That's an interesting idea, I might just have to do that
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Kittyshy3342 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-06-11 23:14:15 +0000 UTC]
I agree, I'm working on a Tasmanian tiger one (even though they're already extinct)
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Kittyshy3342 [2012-06-11 23:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Cool! I don't see any problem with that since I can't recall any info on what would happen if an animal did go extinct. It gives you room to create some fan canon for the story you're making.
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Kittyshy3342 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-06-12 00:08:57 +0000 UTC]
It's sad, they were cute to me, now they're trying to recreate them
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Kittyshy3342 [2012-06-12 01:05:25 +0000 UTC]
They are, how come? o.O" Didn't they used to live in parts of Australia too? That might not be good since the Cane toads could kill them.
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Kittyshy3342 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-06-13 01:41:26 +0000 UTC]
They're already extinct, and I hear they're blaming dingoes. I think it's people's fault(s)
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Kittyshy3342 [2012-06-13 02:31:50 +0000 UTC]
Wait, what? Could you explain that a bit more I can't understand what you're trying to say.
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Lupa12 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-07-06 20:00:33 +0000 UTC]
What she is saying is that, the Tasmanian Tiger is extincted, and that they are trying to recreate it. Now the cane toads, where imported to kill the bugs that where eating all the sugar crops etc. BUT the cane toads are poisonous, so technically Kittyshy is worried that IF they do recreate the Tasmanian Tiger, it will become extinct again via the cane toads. Is that easier?
P.S Cane Toads are awesome fun to hit with a golf club :3
P.P.S Your tutorial was very helpful
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lupa12 [2012-07-06 22:47:23 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, yes it really is! I thought there was something I wasn't getting, thanks for the clarification
LOL I definitely wouldn't want my pets encountering any of them.
Thank you again!
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Lupa12 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-07-10 08:56:19 +0000 UTC]
No problem
I have created my own Mew I have the name and stuffs, I just need to figure out the rest
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lupa12 [2012-07-10 13:12:39 +0000 UTC]
Cool, good luck with that.
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Kittyshy3342 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-06-13 04:57:56 +0000 UTC]
Real life (not story): Tasmanian tigers are extinct. I blame humans, they blame dingoes. Now people are trying to use Tasmanian tiger DNA to recreate them.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Kittyshy3342 [2012-06-13 14:40:03 +0000 UTC]
What reason do they have to bring back Tasmanian Tigers?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Kittyshy3342 [2012-06-15 12:54:59 +0000 UTC]
That doesn't sound like it'll end well, they should just leave extinct species alone.
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HopeyCakes In reply to ??? [2012-04-13 17:49:30 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Thanks for the OC tutorial! I recently got into the Mew Mew fandom, and a lot of OC's I've seen so far don't follow this.. D:
Thanks!!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to HopeyCakes [2012-04-13 17:54:34 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you and you're welcome! ^///^ And thanks again for the llama and watch!
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throtmorton In reply to ??? [2012-03-16 00:17:52 +0000 UTC]
can a mew mew also have face markings if there animal did?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to throtmorton [2012-03-16 00:44:15 +0000 UTC]
What sort of face markings do you mean exactly?
Also, thanks for the fave!
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throtmorton In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-03-21 03:34:20 +0000 UTC]
like black eye circles(panda) something that is very related to the animal when a person thinks of it
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to throtmorton [2012-03-21 03:51:42 +0000 UTC]
I don't see why not, heck people could think it's black eye make up, or a sign of some really bad sleep deprivation LOL.
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throtmorton In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-03-21 03:53:50 +0000 UTC]
haha thanks lol any suggestions for cool mew mews, unusual ones?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to throtmorton [2012-03-21 15:24:17 +0000 UTC]
Well, since I don't really know what you're planning all I can advise is: Research Is Magic.
Also, you don't see many folks using an "ugly" critter like this! [link]
ISN'T IT ADORABLE?
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throtmorton In reply to ??? [2012-03-16 00:11:39 +0000 UTC]
so are there alot of people using say a panda mew mew? i was considering doing this.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to throtmorton [2012-03-16 00:32:19 +0000 UTC]
From the little bit I know of, pandas are a fairly popular choice.
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SockyDominiq In reply to ??? [2012-03-12 08:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, so many people NEED to read this.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to SockyDominiq [2012-03-12 22:45:48 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, thank you! ^///^
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Gxmwp In reply to ??? [2012-02-24 22:57:36 +0000 UTC]
I have a Q. I want to have my mew mews have names like tokyo mew mew(like how their real names are spelled differently) but I don't know how to do that! Can you help me please?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Gxmwp [2012-02-25 00:26:05 +0000 UTC]
First off, thank you for the fave!
Um, I'm not sure what you're trying to say could you be a bit more specific? o.o
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Gxmwp In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-02-25 04:34:30 +0000 UTC]
Sorry about the confusing question and nvm I figured it out. it was just a question about how the human and mew mew names are spelled differently
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gelajiou In reply to ??? [2012-02-23 17:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Goodness gracious, this tutorial helped me out quite a bit. I was wondering though, if I could get a secondary opinion on one of the mews I have for an AU type thing??
If you don't have time to do a quick review, that's fine with me, but if you could, I would love any help uwu
I'll start off by saying that this mew is the leader of her team, and a lot farther into the future. Her team is completely comprised of mews infuses with fictional beings (dragon, jackalope, griffin, and pegasus+unicorn who are twins hehe)
UwU
I'll give the profile incsse you would like to give any tips or pointers ;o;
Her name is Ryuuko Shibata (Dragon-child, firewood rice field), alias Mew Lychee, infused with a standard European ridgeback dragon. 15 years old, parents are geologists (playing off of dragon obsessions with treasure and gems), and they are usually off on expeditions elsewhere. Mew mark is located on her lower back. Color scheme is magenta, black and white. She is hotheaded and has a short temper, brash in her actions. She's defensive and has a bit of an ego, but loves to surround herself with friends and such cause she's extremely social. She's the leader of her team in this AU, so she wears her garter on her right calf since.. Ichigo doesnt actually exist here. (even if she did, I think fantasy creatures would challenge the power of endangered animals since they draw power from how few of them there are?? Pretty sure there are less dragons that iriomote cats??)
In any case in honestly really bad with characterization, which is why the other fantasy mews (Kyoko mew mew I call it hehe means fantasy mew mew) only have concept designs. I've been trying to make their designs all medieval/renaissance period inspired. UwU
Anyways, thank you for any help ;__;;;;;
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to gelajiou [2012-02-24 02:35:15 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, I like that jackalope idea.
The ideas sound pretty good to me, and I really like Ryuuko's personality!
Hm, have you tried looking up sewing patterns for medieval/renaissance wear?
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gelajiou In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-02-24 03:43:18 +0000 UTC]
Yess, the jackalope girl is named Usagi Fukuda (Rabbit, Lucky Rice Field) uwu/ she's based on a pirate wench! I didnt see a lot of jackalope mews (actually, only one) so I decided to go for it uwu///
I've been trying to find like... decent authentic womens medieval clothing to base their outfits on, but I really dont have much good sources u__u
Uhm.... might I ask another thing..?
I'm having a bit of difficulty trying to explain how uhm... these girls were infused with mythical beings DNA... at first I was thinking it had something to do w/ the mew aqua (since didnt they say it had the power to bring back extinct specie..?) But im not to sure on that haha XD
thanks for the help! ;__;
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to gelajiou [2012-02-24 04:00:45 +0000 UTC]
I honestly don't remember if they mentioned that, it's been so many years since I watched. Since it's an AU, you could get away with saying that said mythical critters did exist at one point in time.
Aww, and now I can't stop thinking of Sailor Moon dressed as a pirate... LOL
[link] Something like what they have here? They even have a photo gallery of completed work and folks wearing them.
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gelajiou In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-02-24 04:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Same here haha XD I first watched it like 5 years ago, and just started rewatching it cause my 9 year old sis got interested in it : ) she's actually the main reason I started up on this "Kyoko Mew Mew" project I got here XD
pirate themed girls are so cute omg anyone dressed as a pirate I would take that home XDD!
actually, I finally got pictures of Usagi and Ryuuko... granted they were done quickly in pen but.... its something hey uwu
Ryuuko: [link] complete with chem notes haha
Usagi: [link] tentative design uwu/
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Lupa12 In reply to gelajiou [2012-07-06 20:05:50 +0000 UTC]
My jaw legitimately dropped to the floor when I saw the drawings if the characters O_O
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to gelajiou [2012-02-24 14:33:27 +0000 UTC]
Aww, they're cute, Usagi's dress is my favorite. :3 Man, I really gotta learn to color, I only sketch. LOL
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capricorn20 In reply to ??? [2012-02-21 18:26:39 +0000 UTC]
I love your tutorial and I plan on using it.. but on thing I am planning on a group of Mew Mews that have bases in America ,Like Cafe Mew Mews through out the country or in a few major cities like New York, Las Vegas, etc . When naming them how should a I go about it ?
Here are a few I am working with right now.
New york Mew Mews:
Mew Ice ( Great White Shark)
Mew Melon ( California Condor )
Mew Almond ( Key Deer)
Mew Cream ( Kangaroo Rat)
Mew Black Berry ( American Crocodile)
Las Vegas Mews: ( All Male team)
Mew Jalapeno ( Hammerhead shark)
Mew Lemon ( Indiana Bat )
Mew Rice - ( Sambar Deer)
Mew Pecan - Island Fox
Mew Chocolate- Black Salamander.
You get the idea I have a team for San Diago and Hawaii figured out too but I I need help naming them. What would you suggest ?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to capricorn20 [2012-02-21 18:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Well San Diego, heck most of California really, has a lot of Spanish speaking communities from EVERYWHERE. Do some research into their traditional ingredients/dishes are. Same with Hawaii really, except with Asian communities, I would recommend looking into Southeast Asian countries for names. You'll find quite a variety of deliciousness!
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