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Hello, and thanks for reading my tutorial, here I hope to give some sound advice to those who want to make their OC Mew Mew but don't know where to start. Let's begin!Names:
Alright, first off, you have to name your girl after some type of food, and pronounce it the way the Japanese would, it won't make sense later on if you don't. You pretty much have free range with given names anyway! For family names make sure it's connected to a color. "Momo"= peach, "ai"= indigo. And that it connects with her outfit's color scheme too.
Animals:
Unfortunately, there are more than enough endangered species to choose from. >.>" And everyone, making the 698,972,356,385,903,127th canine/feline Mew is not CREATIVE. Remember now, the more endangered they are, the stronger your Mew will be, and I challenge you to choose an "ugly" critter and make a Mew with it. But please for the love of God DO NOT make your Mew have the DNA of some mythological animal if you're NOT planning an AU fanfiction! A phoenix Mew with the canon group is a Mary Sue, that same phoenix Mew teamed up with a unicorn, lochness monster, dragon, and minotaur Mew is CREATIVE!
Colors:
If you've named your girl say...Salsa, don't make her color scheme black and blue! The color scheme has to connect with her name, either with just family name like Mint's, or both like Lettuce and Ichigo. And all the mews have some secondary color, which you can see on their "fur" trim on their outfits. Either it's white, a shade/tint of their main color, or the same color as their animal features. The third option works best with animals of one main color though, so no zebra stripes, that'd be odd.
For the most part, Mews change hair color to an unnatural variant of their natural shade. Ichigo goes from dark red to pink, and Minto goes from dark blue to medium blue.
Outfits/Mew Marks:
Here's something that gets overlooked a lot, if you think about it, everything about the Mew's physical appearance is symmetrical. Some things that all the Mews have in common are as listed:
-The collars, of course!
-Their outfits are sleeveless.
-They have those puffy, detached sleeves.
-Their outfits are short enough to expose their garters.
-Their Mew marks fall in the mid-line of their bodies.
-Their outfits also reveal their marks somehow.
Anyway, besides the marks being symmetrical, imagine an invisible line splitting you perfectly down the middle and that's the mid-line. Unless your Mew was hand injected, her mark will appear on said line, let's look at Ichigo, hers is on her inner thigh. But, if she stood with her feet together, her mark still falls on her mid-line as well.
And the garters, well they show what the Mew's rank is. If it's on the left thigh, she's a follower, right thigh symbolizes the leader (AKA the most powerful.)
Weapons/Attacks:
Now all the Mews weapons are musical instruments, thank goodness there's a plethora to choose from as well, why not have a Mew who's animal AND weapon come from the same continent? Such as a didgeridoo and a Kangaroo? (Feel free to use that idea if you want!) Anyways, let's look at some examples on how to choose a weapon for your Mew! Anyway, there are three ways to go about this:
Word-smushing 1: "Strawberu-beru" = "Strawberry Bell"
This is where you can smush the instrument name along with your Mew's given name.
Word-smushing 2: "Min-tone Arrow" = "Mint Tone Arrow"
This second choice is where you can take a word with musical meaning and smush it with your OC's name. Now take into account that Minto's bow is shaped like a harp, and Zakuro's whip is a flute, but you don't HAVE to say it like with Strawberry Bell.
The girl behind the Mew:
The list of questions you want to ask before putting tragedy in:
- Has it happened explicitly in-universe to either a main character, side character, or even an extra?
- Has it happened implicitly in-universe?
- Could the authorities' behavior reflect a world in which this tragedy is common, rare but possible, or almost impossible?
- Are you TRYING in general to dismantle the innocence of the series you're using? (Simply writing in a tragic character to add more edge does not count--- dismantling an innocent world is usually a pretty serious literary experiment, perhaps done for a creative writing course.)
- Are the authorities hopelessly incompetent, yet this sort of thing does not crop up regularly? (Incompetent cops yet little crime tend to be a clue that certain things may not be plausible in a fanfic.
To use Pokemon as an example, a fanfiction in which Misty is killed by Rockets and then have Ash embark on a quest of bloody revenge is ridiculous when not played for humour or for the sake of dismantling innocence. This is because:
- This has never happened explicitly in-universe.
- It has not happened implicitly, either, though the Japanese dub DID include the Squirtle Squad threatening to kill Misty if Ash didn't come back--- though, the same Squirtle turned out to be a bit of a softie later, so it's possible he'd have never followed through.
- The authorities behavior suggests that some things may be nigh impossible occurences--- parents send their children away from home on unsupervised adventures at the age of ten, compare to this world where some kids aren't allowed to play unsupervised in the front yard or walk down the street.
- The authorities are not hopelessly incompetent, either. Jenny is portrayed as sharp and in the know on things. This suggests that if something like abuse did transpire, it would likely not go to an extreme, and the child would be pulled away from his abusive guardians before it turned any worse.
In fact, you are more likely to encounter a legendary Pokemon than a severely abused kid or a serial killer.
And on a last note folks, try not to give your OC a SUPER KAWAII DESU NEKO GIRL DITZY PERSONALITY DESU!
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Pikaninjachu In reply to ??? [2012-01-23 02:56:31 +0000 UTC]
Hey, can you help me a bit on my line of mew mews?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Pikaninjachu [2012-01-23 03:22:24 +0000 UTC]
Sure, what sort of help?
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Pikaninjachu In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-01-23 23:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Well, (first of all I love this tutorial!) I'm creating a line of Pokemon Mew Mews and I'm worried that some people might not like the way I've dressed and named them. I haven't named them after foods (I might, but I'm not sure yet) and their last names aren't colours. Because of this, they're outfits are not coloured after foods. Rather, the outfits (still following the sleeveless, garter-showing, choker-revealing rule) are designed-colour and style-after the Pokemon. For example, the Dustox is wearing a purple outfit with red gloves and boots. Is it okay for me to do this or should I stick to the regular naming and outfitting to avoid critisism?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Pikaninjachu [2012-01-24 01:09:00 +0000 UTC]
Of course, it's a crossover! You have a bit of freedom to interpret what a Mew would be like in the Pokemon world, I figure the rule that the less their is of a certain animal, the more powerful the Mew is wouldn't work too well in the Pokemon world. I say that rule can be ignored since all pokemon are pretty powerful anyway. As for names, why not try referencing things that pertain to the pokemon? Such as its type, where it lives, etc. You can go on Bulbapedia and look up its info.
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Pikaninjachu In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-01-24 01:58:26 +0000 UTC]
Great advice! I'll do that! Now if the amount of power doesn't come from the level of risk of the animal, what do you think should determine the power level?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Pikaninjachu [2012-01-24 03:19:45 +0000 UTC]
Training to learn how to use their new powers (Just like in the games! ), natural ability (like if they're already pretty athletic, it'll help with an Aipom Mew), and personality in a sense. How do they initially react to their new powers? How do their new powers affect them? (This is where you use some specific facts about the pokemon, like say X has Psyduck DNA and gets MASSIVE headaches and they don't know how to calm it down via using psychic powers! Psyduck suffers from chronic headaches, you know.)
Hm, now that I think about it you could use evolution as a sort of 'power-up' when they get strong enough. It gives your OCs some obstacles to overcome, AND IT LEADS TO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND GOOD STORYTELLING. Have it that your Dustox Mew is a Wurmple at first and becomes a Cascoon/Dustox because of her personality! As for pokemon who evolve via stones, perhaps have it that the process could result in tragic failure if they're too weak to handle it. So if they can't stand the excess energy, there is a 99% percent chance of DEATH with a generous dose of MASSIVE PAIN. The 1% being ending up as a human vegetable for life.
Does that make sense?
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Pikaninjachu In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-01-24 23:58:14 +0000 UTC]
I rally like those ideas! I'll use the training and naural ability and personality as an amount of power. I also do like the reactions: how do they react, how are they affect them. I'm not going with the whole evolution thing(sorry if you liked the idea) because some Pokemon don't evolve so it would be unfair. But do get an insanely huge power boost, I was thinking Mew Aqua infused into Evolve stones. So they would be trying to get the stones, but not wanting to because it would be a 99% chance of death and a 1% of being a vegetable/life coma. I got a great idea for the names! The Japanese word for their species (Dustoxoison) is their first and a common word in their pokedex info (Dustox=moth)for their last name. I'll send you videos of their transformation scenes (all character info in description)
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Pikaninjachu [2012-01-25 01:00:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you're right! I forgot about those kinds of pokemon!
Mew Aqua stones could work, yeah.
Hm, why not try a more subtle naming scheme? It doesn't even have to be Japanese per say, and you'd have more freedom to create interesting meanings for your characters rather than hitting people over the head with an overly obvious one. For example:
Alexis Oberon
Alexis means 'Defender' and Dustox's ability is Shield Dust. [link] (ability)
She can protect her team mates with it.
Oberon is the name of the king of the fairies from Shakespeare's comedy 'A Midsummer Night's Dream.' Emphasis on NIGHT, when moths are usually seen, (Also OMGLOL FAIRY DUST, DO YOU GET IT?! LOLOLOLOL ) and it's also the name of one of Uranus's moons! Moths are usually connected to nighttime anyway.
You can use that name if you want.
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Pikaninjachu In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-01-25 01:56:18 +0000 UTC]
That's a really great idea! I haven't even thought of that! I'm glad you said that because some of the names I was finding weren't very good for names. Any advice for weapons and mew marks? (sorry if I'm bugging you too much)
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Pikaninjachu [2012-01-25 02:41:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^///^ BTW, this site's very helpful with names: [link]
Oh, you're no bother it's okay. Well, for Mew marks, umm try looking at the pokemon in question. What are the first things about it that catch your attention? Then you can sketch a simple design with said eye-catching things, don't stress about making it detailed though. Just simple shapes, it's more pleasing to the eye.
As for weapons, I honestly think you don't need any since pokemon don't need weapons anyway, but it's your choice. I imagine them ranging from Squishy Wizard types to fist-fighting brawlers, of course it depends on personality and what DNA they have. In other words, give everyone a some sort of role in battles.
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Pikaninjachu In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2012-01-25 02:45:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I am so grateful for all your help! I'll send you the transformation videos so you can see the characters come to life. And I'll dedicate every character to you!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Pikaninjachu [2012-01-25 03:06:16 +0000 UTC]
Aw shucks, thank you, and you're quite welcome! ^///^
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mewzakuro240 In reply to ??? [2012-01-05 05:26:40 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE YOU. Oh my god I love you.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to mewzakuro240 [2012-01-05 14:41:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh um, thank you! ^///^ Thanks for the fave and watch as well!
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fffe443455 In reply to ??? [2011-12-07 04:05:04 +0000 UTC]
you have the best point ever! i'm tired of all the cat or dog OC's... can you make a Mew OC if there Extinct? not like dinosaurs but well this is the animal [link]
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to fffe443455 [2011-12-07 04:32:23 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, thank you! ^///^
Ooooh, now that's a cool looking critter! I could see Ryo knowing a guy who knows a guy that has DNA samples of extinct critters like this one.
...they're either horribly in debt or do shady things to get those samples though. Feel free to use my ramblings for fic ideas if you wish.
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Lunasoar In reply to ??? [2011-08-27 02:30:24 +0000 UTC]
can i ask you for help with my mew?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lunasoar [2011-08-27 03:42:06 +0000 UTC]
Sure, what kind of help do you want exactly?
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Lunasoar In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-08-27 15:27:04 +0000 UTC]
my mew is a panda (traditional black and white fat one) whos outfit is purple with black accents. i think she should be mew grape........even though i get migranes if i eat artificial grape things.....like lollipops,slushies,popcicles,etc so i need help to see if there is another purple foodl. also, i cant think of a good intrument to make a weapon. i was thinking marracas and make then swards wwith round handles. any suggestiobns?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lunasoar [2011-08-27 16:15:35 +0000 UTC]
Well there are red beets, red cabbage, and red onions that have a nice vibrant purple color to them. Eggplants or figs would be a good choice too. Though if you want to you can always just give her an overused food like plum, acai, blackberry, or passion fruit.
Huh? I'm not sure what you're asking about the maracas, do you mean that they turn into swords? o.O"
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Lunasoar In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-08-27 18:25:41 +0000 UTC]
yes, like the round part would be the handles and the sticks become the blades. and i thinks ill stick with grapes....adds good irony to the chracter
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lunasoar [2011-08-27 19:06:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh, okay I see what you mean now! It's fine to me. Is there anything else you'd like help with like personality or Grape's biography?
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Lunasoar In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-08-27 21:56:34 +0000 UTC]
well, i waas thinking she could be like me, outcasted from her peers. when she was chosen for the mew project, it helped her create bonds with the rest of her group, yet she still seemed to keep to herself. and it would add a bbit of comedeous irony when akasaka made them thier mew cakes, she couldnt eat her own, since she is allergic to grapes, like me!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lunasoar [2011-08-28 00:22:57 +0000 UTC]
I'd advise against making a self-insert, let your OC have her own life separate from you. It's also hard to portray an OC's flaws and let them suffer any consequences if you're pretty much writing about yourself. Try writing your fanfiction/RP as if you're affectionately insulting her, that's a great way to separate yourself from Grape while writing an interesting story.
Also I'm sorry if I come off as rude, but it's not "comedeous" it's "comedic" and it's not "outcasted" it's "outcast."
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Lunasoar In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-08-28 15:49:49 +0000 UTC]
ok, so how about making her the ultra enthusiastic smart kid, but being critisized as a teacher pet. her mew friends accept her as she is, and her knowledge in turn helps then to destroy a few aliens. and i will still keep the allergic to grapes.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to Lunasoar [2011-08-28 17:57:52 +0000 UTC]
No, now you're just building Grape off cliches, you'll only end up having the same OC as 4,867,237,557,202,940,345 other writers. Slow down and try to figure out how you can have Grape complement or even bring something new to the Mews, and then give her some time to stand on her own feet. Don't try to finish her so quickly, you need to put some time into her if you want to have an interesting character.
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MewMewToffee In reply to ??? [2011-07-17 08:13:00 +0000 UTC]
I'm using an Ocelot as my animal... What kind of food should I use.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MewMewToffee [2011-07-17 16:22:06 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, what are your preferences? Do you have a planned color scheme for her?
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MewMewToffee In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-07-17 20:33:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I was thinking like tan and dark brown so that it would be like the ocerot's fur
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MewMewToffee [2011-07-17 21:57:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, to name a few there's:
Caramel (Although it's pretty common, just saying)
Whiskey
Cinnamon (Also common)
Cumin (it's a spice)
Chai (as in chai tea)
Scotch
And that's all I could come up with. Your thoughts?
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MewMewToffee In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-07-17 22:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Tnx...I think I'm going with Chai
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to MewMewToffee [2011-07-17 22:56:45 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, anytime.
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FumirukuSuzuka In reply to ??? [2011-06-26 20:23:47 +0000 UTC]
This was very helpful. I didn't know about over half the stuff listed.
I have two OCs (three if you count the alien), do you have any suggestions as to where to put the mew mark? Can you also tell me if they're Mary Sues (or Gary Stus)?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to FumirukuSuzuka [2011-06-26 21:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing! Did you ever create profiles for them anywhere? If not, just tell me each one's personality and biography please.
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FumirukuSuzuka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-06-26 22:33:51 +0000 UTC]
I didn't create profiles yet. I'm still working on their designs. Here's what I have so far.
name: Orenji (orange) Honoomaru (honoo=flame=orange-colored)
age: 17 (although, he looks like an under-developed 11-year-old girl)
animal: Walia Ibex
personality: short-tempered, loud-mouthed, not very mannerly and can be rude, will not admit to being protective of anyone he likes (family of friends), stubborn
biography: he grew up with a pretty normal childhood. He has a stay-at-home mom and a dad who is constantly away on business. He has a younger brother and a younger sister. He used to have a twin sister named Kobocha. When he was around seven-years-old (before his younger sister was born), his family was in a car crash when another driver sped through the stoplights. The only one who died (later in the hospital) was Kobocha. Orenji has mostly gotten over the grief.
name: Gurapu (grape) Kurotani
age: 14
animal: Malaysian Sun Bear
personality: quiet, aloof, kind of lazy and irresponsible, can either be blunt or evasive in conversations
biography: the only child to a married couple who have been trying a child for years. She attends a private school and knows how to play the piano. She spends most of her time in the shopping districts to look for inspiration since she plans to become a graphic designer.
name: Keki (cake)
species: alien
weapon: mallet
personality: carefree, pround of his power, jokes around a lot, enjoys toying with anyone and getting them annoyed.
biography: a childhood friend of the the three main aliens. He likes to see emotions other than sadness because he doesn't like to see what he grew up on. He doesn't hate humans but he also like them. Instead he finds them to be intersting because of what they are capable of.
About the mew marks, the only other place I can think of is the lower back.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to FumirukuSuzuka [2011-06-26 23:47:14 +0000 UTC]
Everything's okay, but definitely work on being more descriptive with their personalities and giving them negative traits. The last thing you want to do is simply list traits. Think about why they act the way they are. Also think about how it effects them and other people around them. And one last piece of advice, all traits are double-edged with pros and cons, even something like 'purity of heart.'
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FumirukuSuzuka In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-06-27 00:09:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see. Thank you. I'm always worried about what to do with personalities for any OC I make.
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to FumirukuSuzuka [2011-06-27 00:16:43 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, I'm glad I could help!
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xxFeathertailxx4 In reply to ??? [2011-05-05 12:46:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! This tutorial really helped!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to xxFeathertailxx4 [2011-05-05 15:32:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, I'm glad that it did!
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xxFeathertailxx4 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-05-07 00:55:31 +0000 UTC]
Do you think you could me? How does this sound to you?
Name: Hakuto (White Peach)
Age: 16
Animal: White fox
Weapon: Peach chime (A whip with chimes on it)
Color: White
Mew mark: On the right side of her lower rib cage
Personality: Hakuto grew up with a sad childhood. Her mother and father lived happily but suddenly her father had an outrage and murdered her mother, Hakuto thankfully escaped. She grew up in an Orphanage and was adopted by a very religous family. Now a days, Hakuto is strong and proud, and can be quite firery. She has amazing acrobatic skills and attacks with power. She is one of the most powerful mews, but could never be leader because she has such a short temper and is easily angered.
Thanks!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to xxFeathertailxx4 [2011-05-07 02:56:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, first off, thanks for the watch! Now, anyway, about Hakuto. To be honest, the part about her dad killing his wife sounds like cheap pity-fishing bait. Especially since you never went into much detail about it. You might want to just scrap the murder bit since TMM is not the type of series that meshes well with that sort of thing. Now, about the part of her being powerful, that's sort of a given with Mews in general. They get their power from endangered species because there aren't many of said animal left, and so their power grows when there is less. Which leads me to my next point, if you position Hakuto's garter on her LEFT thigh, that makes her a follower and subordinate to Ichigo, who is the most powerful, therefore the leader. But if you put the garter on her RIGHT thigh, that puts her in direct competition with Ichigo over who will lead the Mews. Think of it in terms of kingdoms, you can't have two kings and one throne. So I recommend you give that some thought.
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xxFeathertailxx4 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-05-07 03:10:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I wasn't sure about the murder bit.... I'll just say she was given up for adoption at birth. She isn't competition with the leader, but is just a good fighter. Here, I'll change the personality:
Hakuto was given up for adoption at birth and spent 6 painful years in a small orphanage. Once she turned 6 she was adopted by a quiet and very religous family. Now a days, Hakuto is strong, proud, and quite firery. She has firce speed and acrobat skills and is a powerful fighter. She has a short temper though, and will easily start a fight if angered.
Is that better?
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to xxFeathertailxx4 [2011-05-07 03:22:12 +0000 UTC]
Yes! Much better, indeed! Might there be anything else you need help with? :3
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xxFeathertailxx4 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-05-07 03:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, yeah, I guess...
I was wondering if she should have a secondary color? And if so, what color would match?
And what eye color do you think would fit her?
thx
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to xxFeathertailxx4 [2011-05-07 14:11:20 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember you saying anything about the main color of her Mew outfit, but I think a warm orangey-peach, with a cream white for the 'fur' trim would be nice. Blue eyes, just plain blue.
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xxFeathertailxx4 In reply to kitsunekeyblader [2011-05-07 14:31:15 +0000 UTC]
Okay, thx so much! I might be posting a pic of her soon... Thank chu again!
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kitsunekeyblader In reply to xxFeathertailxx4 [2011-05-07 15:24:45 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! Cool, can't wait to see it.
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xxsexyemovampirexx In reply to ??? [2011-04-26 02:13:41 +0000 UTC]
this was really helpful....
... can you tell me if mine is a sue
[link]
shes a king cobra.... but she isnt symmetrical, and i havent named the sythe yet.
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