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Published: 2011-08-29 05:26:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 8092; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 37
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Wonderful. A character a actually realizing their flaws and developing. We need some of this in Bleach.
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Kurosaki looks gooooood. Awesome job there. Same as frostysnowman, the inner monologue is good too. I'm all for "show, don't tell" but there are some things, such as this right here, that need to be pointed out directly because they are so personal and intimate. We would never find out about how she feels any other way. The way you transitioned IchiBeast in a couple of pages back was very well thought out. Chapter 5 is lookin' gooooood. Well worth the wait.
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Thanks :3 This sequence is one of the biggest motivating factors for why I wanted to do the reboot. It had to be done in order for UlquiHime to seem legit, and I really didn't go over it very well in the original...
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I love this inner monologue! Orihime realises her faults and over-dependance on Ichigo. Now she can get over him and realise her feelings for Ulquiorra!
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