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Creating Interactions between Creepypasta OC'sHello to all you out there in the creepypasta community! In this continuation of my guides on pasta creation, we’ll be talking about making your own fancanon for both official characters and your own OC’s. Or your own pastaverse, as it were. Basically, I’ve noticed that a lot of people create a good OC that may even have a good story. Problems occur, however, when the topic of how their own characters fit in with the other pastas they interact with comes up.
First off, I should mention that a lot of people, particularly many traditionalists, dislike the idea of their OC’s existing in the same “universe” as other pastas. There is some truth to this because there’s nothing wrong with making your creepypastas have their own personal existence like this, in a world where they are the only monsters out there. However, you can still have a good story if your OCs end up interacting with other people’s pastas. Yes, even the famous ones.
I should also get a few things out of the way that you definitely shouldn’t do. While you will inevitably need to make some changes to the original story, don’t make a headcanon that completely destroys the official canon. For example, if you give Slenderman a third proxy, you shouldn’t make Slenderman into a nice old man with unusually pale skin who lives in Candyland. That’s Splendorman’s job anyways. I like Splendy, don’t steal his job. And don’t create a scenario and then expect everyone else to follow it. For instance, if your OC is Slenderman’s third proxy in your headcanon, people may still only acknowledge Hoody and Masky. And above all don’t make your OC the cousin/lover/daughter/mailman of a famous pasta (I could give an example here but there are too many to pick just one). This is both lazy and frequently a sign of a Mary Sue type of character.
Now that we have the boring part out of the way, the first thing you should tackle before even wondering how your characters fit into the other famous pastas is how your own OC’s fit in with each other. How did all your characters meet? Have all of them even made contact with each other yet? What are their opinions of each other? Are any of them allies? How about enemies? Or are their attitudes indifferent? Perhaps their allegiances change on a regular basis? What accomplishments have they achieved together? What fights have they had? What do they have in common and how are they different? All of these are just sample questions, but you should probably think of these ones at least.
Most of the same questions apply to how they interact with the “official”, already well-known characters. There are a few additional considerations you should take into account, however. Specifically, even if your pasta is a being of indescribable nightmarish power and so on you shouldn’t make the well-known OC do something like cower in fear or be your OC’s servant. That might make sense in a realistic sense, but in a literary sense it might annoy people if you tell them your creepypasta could punch Zalgo’s lights out if she felt like it. This is because it again falls back to the other problem I mentioned with destroying an official, well-accepted character’s canon.
A good link to an official character if you’re afraid of having your OC be called a Sue is just to have them know your character. Not be friends with, not be rivals with, just have them know of their general existence. This makes them both take place in the same universe (or outside the universe, in Zalgo’s case), but not seem so connected that people think you’re writing away the accepted version of a character. You could even have them fight in one of your stories, with neither side emerging dead of course, just to show they are familiar with each other. This is a good way of saying “I have a creepypasta OC who knows <
A lot of people get frightened away from having characters of their own interact with more famous pastas, but it can be done well. It just requires a little extra effort on you, the artist, to make something both believable and entertaining. Because at its core creepypasta is meant to be fun to be a part of. No one pays us to do this, we’re doing it cuz we wanna.
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KomradApex In reply to ??? [2016-10-27 22:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I guess it could work, provided the reason is rational. And sure! Those sorts of proxies can be really fun characters.
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Inkimuu In reply to KomradApex [2016-10-27 23:52:25 +0000 UTC]
Cool, I wouldn't wanna place names yet due to theft. But in later future you may seem them. I am also writing a fanfic (no romance intended, romance in the story only includes actual canon pairings). You can find the story below if you are interested. (Be mind it is my first).
www.quotev.com/story/8691550/W…
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KomradApex In reply to Inkimuu [2016-10-28 10:35:20 +0000 UTC]
I notice you do the thing a lot of new writers do where they structure it half like a story, half like a script (with thing like "[Sound of metal dropping]"). I guess it doesn't matter if it's just a fanfiction, but professional writing tends towards keeping it in the structure of a conventional story the whole way through.
(There are exceptions, like the great American novel "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn" for instance, but it was part of of the joke, since that book was intentionally riddled with spelling and syntax errors to make it seem like the writer was unfamiliar with writing books.)
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Inkimuu In reply to KomradApex [2016-10-28 12:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I see. But many other people have different unique ways of writing, like you for example. You try to act professional but at the same time relaxed and collective. As for me, I am scattered and opened.
And yes, I see what you mean.
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FairyTailBoss In reply to ??? [2016-10-07 06:45:51 +0000 UTC]
Alright, so, since I'm putting together a character. I'm using Ticci Toby as a template although it's only a template to make a decent character and I'm not taking ANYTHING from Toby at all (Except maybe setting something on fire, but it's not even the whole street.) I'm gonna actually put Toby into my story. Kastoway said that Toby is a cold blooded jerk, a rude killer, and lacks empathy. He ain't no bubbly, waffle loving, cinnamon bun. It'll only be for a short time though. You don't even get the Toby's name, just a description of what he looks like, and they aren't major to each others stories just to make sure it doesn't mess with either of the character's canon story. Does this sound like a good idea? :3
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KomradApex In reply to FairyTailBoss [2016-10-07 12:04:20 +0000 UTC]
Yep, that sounds good by my books.
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HoneyRoastedNuts In reply to ??? [2016-02-15 02:08:18 +0000 UTC]
My OC interacts with one of the Pastas, and that's the Stitcher. She only does that since he could sew her arms/legs/head/whatever back on expertly.
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Warriorwaffles [2015-11-25 16:31:38 +0000 UTC]
Because of this, I'm re-writing one of my Creepypasta OC's stories :3. (My OC pretty much went insane after she got cancer, then she went bald, and now the cuts people's scalps off, along with their hair, and wears it as a hat)
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KomradApex In reply to Warriorwaffles [2015-11-25 16:51:15 +0000 UTC]
Best of luck with the rewriting!
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makogirl In reply to ??? [2015-07-20 15:19:26 +0000 UTC]
I've got a pasta that I've just recently started. She is kinda my twisted take on the japanese legend of the "Slit Mouthed Woman".....When I made her, I was already keen on her existing in the same universe as the 'big boys' ( Slendy, Jeff, Ben, ect....) But how she'd interact....I'm not sure how that would go.....I imagine her being too mentally damaged to really care.
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KomradApex In reply to makogirl [2015-07-20 16:24:53 +0000 UTC]
If so, "her being too mentally damaged to really care" is a perfectly acceptable approach. Making her pyschotic to the extent that she sees no need for friends is would work well for a vengeful type, given that this is creepypasta we're talking about here.
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makogirl In reply to KomradApex [2015-07-20 17:48:15 +0000 UTC]
The way I imagined my CP oc to be is that she's kinda stuck on a "one track mind" she still clings to her reserved nature, she was a very shy and reserved girl before she went nuts. I'm gonna post her story and pics soon. If your interested you can have a looksee...
heh I'm aware that the story may be rough around the edges and may need some polishing. As for her design....I'm a user of IMVU so i made her character in there n.n;;
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KomradApex In reply to makogirl [2015-07-20 17:54:03 +0000 UTC]
I'd be happy to take a look. D'you think you could give me a link when her story is up?
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makogirl In reply to KomradApex [2015-07-20 18:10:01 +0000 UTC]
Here ya go n.n
makogirl.deviantart.com/art/Am…
Hope you like, and I'll be getting the pics up soon
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KomradApex In reply to makogirl [2015-07-20 18:55:53 +0000 UTC]
I read it, and quite enjoyed it too. :3
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wolf13sd In reply to ??? [2015-06-08 00:43:39 +0000 UTC]
hey um I was wondering if you could help me? I'm working on an oc right now. I want her to know of Zalgo and possibly Slenderman, but greatly fear them (reason will be in the backstory soon to come). How exactly do you think I should go about doing this?
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-08 18:27:30 +0000 UTC]
I don't know how you could work a fear of Zalgo and Slenderman into there without including them in the backstory...
Maybe you could make it so one of them is involved as to why she has telekinetic powers, since that's currently unexplained?
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-08 18:45:03 +0000 UTC]
Telekinetic powers, from what I've read, can be unlocked by anyone. It takes time and a lot of practice. You have to train your mind to find that power. Some people, like Adia (my oc) are born with that power already unlocked. Some are stronger with that power than others. Her's is pretty advanced as she comes from a Pagan family, who encouraged the uniqueness of their daughter, wanting her to practice and strengthen it. Now, I do want to include Slenderman and/or Zalgo in her backstory, but I'm not entirely sure of how to go about doing that.
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-08 19:44:06 +0000 UTC]
If you want me to help write the backstory, I'm afraid I can't do that. They wouldn't really be your OC unless you made them, after all.
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-08 19:49:00 +0000 UTC]
I can write the backstory. I just thought it would be helpful if I get some advice on how to include Slenderman/Zalgo..........
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-08 20:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Alright. Maybe you could give her some sort of interest or affiliation with the occult, possibly through her pagan family, that leads her to meeting Zalgo, or at least knowing of his existence. As for Slender, since you mentioned she makes her dwelling in a forest after running away, it could be an area under the eye of Slenderman and/or his proxies.
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-08 20:16:04 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you very much. I felt like her backstory was complete except for that little hole. Now that you've helped, I can finish. I really appreciate it :3
You think you could check it out once I have it completed?
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-08 21:27:05 +0000 UTC]
Sure! Just remember to give me a link.
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-29 05:54:00 +0000 UTC]
wolf13sd.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
Here you go, I hope I did alright on here....... *^*
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-29 11:42:34 +0000 UTC]
She's good, but she needs some work here and there. It's nothing major, don't worry, but rather a few little things. The incest element for instance felt believable until it was said it took her until she was 14 to check if her brother was telling the truth. I would think she'd have grown suspicious far earlier.
Overall I do like her though, and she has potential to be a truly great OC.
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-29 14:05:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, alright. I'll be sure to edit that. Thanks for taking a look at it~
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-29 15:02:20 +0000 UTC]
No problem. Best of luck in the fandom.
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KomradApex In reply to wolf13sd [2015-06-08 11:35:43 +0000 UTC]
I'll need to know a bit more about her. What else can you tell me about her?
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-08 16:42:48 +0000 UTC]
would you like a brief backstory?
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wolf13sd In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-08 17:34:23 +0000 UTC]
Well what I have so far is that she had a normal life and lived with her parents and older brother, and she had telekinetic abilities unknown to her parents, her brother secretly....'messed' with her. This caused psychological damage and gave her Rape Trauma Syndrome. She finally old her parents who took it to the police and her brother was sent to prison. Afterwards, she still had severe psychological damage, making her believe that every man would turn out like her brother, so she was paranoid of males. She was scared to live with her mother and father, so one night after they were asleep, she left her mother a noted, explaining why she had to leave. She strangled her father to death, using her telekinesis, constricting his lungs so he couldn't breathe. she wanted him to 'bot become corrupt like her brother'. She ran away from home, taking with her, her husky-wolf hybrid dog. She stays in a forest, where she has a shelter made of brush, branches, leaves, etc. She targets men, wanting to 'rid the world of corrupt males.' Her weakness is males, though, and if she comes in physical contact with them. BEcause of this, I kinda wanted her to be submissive and weak against males, or, those who appear to be men
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AngelOfDarkness1214 In reply to ??? [2015-05-25 22:42:47 +0000 UTC]
The first thing I thought of was: Slenderman has a mailman?
Should this worry me?
Btw great advise, I'm gonna use it!
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HoneyRoastedNuts In reply to AngelOfDarkness1214 [2016-02-15 02:09:25 +0000 UTC]
I'd hate to be that guy when Slender gets his electric bill XD
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KomradApex In reply to AngelOfDarkness1214 [2015-05-25 23:14:09 +0000 UTC]
Slendermail.
And no problem! I wih you the best of luck.
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xxty2425xx In reply to ??? [2015-05-04 01:34:34 +0000 UTC]
How do you work with this if you oc is the enemy of all life be it human or a proxy
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KomradApex In reply to xxty2425xx [2015-05-04 17:19:26 +0000 UTC]
By not making them act nice. It would kind of go against the whole "enemy of all life" theme.
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xxty2425xx In reply to KomradApex [2015-05-04 17:23:14 +0000 UTC]
My OC is a monster on a level that reviles zalgo he only cares about himself and his master everything else he toys with and destroy it
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Imnurhest In reply to ??? [2015-05-01 04:54:27 +0000 UTC]
Does this include completely reinventing well-known creepypastas? (I did that with Jeff the Killer)
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KomradApex In reply to Imnurhest [2015-05-01 14:35:30 +0000 UTC]
I suppose the guidelines might be a bit different in that case, but as always, just exercising common sense is probably all you need.
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TheDollsKB In reply to ??? [2015-04-19 22:44:55 +0000 UTC]
Do creepypastas always have to be the bad guys? My three in-the-works CP's (The Dolls) were abused and bullied as children, so they lead children that are/have suffered the same into their "Dollhouse" and become their... guardians, I guess? They take care of them and keep the safe. Then they make the abuser's lives a living nightmare (inducing hallucinations, driving them to the brink of insanity, etc.).
I'm afraid people will see them as Mary-Sue's, lame, not scary, etc. because of them helping the abused kids instead of running around and murdering people. I feel like they would be able to interact with Sally (Play with Me), because of Sally's past, but I'm kind of scared to have them meet. Any advice?
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KomradApex In reply to TheDollsKB [2015-04-20 00:10:59 +0000 UTC]
Having them interact with Sally might work, but try not to make them BFFs or long-lost cousins or such.
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NekoLenko [2015-04-09 20:37:15 +0000 UTC]
I have a CP character name Angie, she was human but became a half shadow half deamon (it's that okay?) thanks to a deamon name Discord (another CP character) I have her background, appereance and abilitys but an aspect that I think I need to chage before submit it is her relation with Jeff. Well, she know Jeff way before he became Jeff the Killer, (she was like 5 and he was like 6 since he is a year older than her) and they have a brother-sister relationship and stay like that I don't like OC x canon...only sometimes I like it but not that much, anyway my question is:
Did I need to change that or not?
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KomradApex In reply to NekoLenko [2015-04-09 21:00:53 +0000 UTC]
People might think she's a Sue type of character if her relationship with Jeff is overly friendly.
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NekoLenko In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-09 23:47:09 +0000 UTC]
Well they atcually always fight, insult each other, annoy each other and hate each other but since they only have each other (Jeff since he kill his family except his brother that somehow survive but he don't know he is alive and Angie since she didn't control her new self at first she kill her family) they just protect each other like brother and sister
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KomradApex In reply to NekoLenko [2015-04-10 00:00:10 +0000 UTC]
Alright, just so long as there's a significant element of conflict.
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NekoLenko In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-10 00:19:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the help
Oh and it's okay that Angie was human but become half shadow half deamon?
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