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Description Creating Interactions between Creepypasta OC's


Hello to all you out there in the creepypasta community! In this continuation of my guides on pasta creation, we’ll be talking about making your own fancanon for both official characters and your own OC’s. Or your own pastaverse, as it were. Basically, I’ve noticed that a lot of people create a good OC that may even have a good story. Problems occur, however, when the topic of how their own characters fit in with the other pastas they interact with comes up.

First off, I should mention that a lot of people, particularly many traditionalists, dislike the idea of their OC’s existing in the same “universe” as other pastas. There is some truth to this because there’s nothing wrong with making your creepypastas have their own personal existence like this, in a world where they are the only monsters out there. However, you can still have a good story if your OCs end up interacting with other people’s pastas. Yes, even the famous ones.

I should also get a few things out of the way that you definitely shouldn’t do. While you will inevitably need to make some changes to the original story, don’t make a headcanon that completely destroys the official canon. For example, if you give Slenderman a third proxy, you shouldn’t make Slenderman into a nice old man with unusually pale skin who lives in Candyland. That’s Splendorman’s job anyways. I like Splendy, don’t steal his job. And don’t create a scenario and then expect everyone else to follow it. For instance, if your OC is Slenderman’s third proxy in your headcanon, people may still only acknowledge Hoody and Masky. And above all don’t make your OC the cousin/lover/daughter/mailman of a famous pasta (I could give an example here but there are too many to pick just one). This is both lazy and frequently a sign of a Mary Sue type of character.

Now that we have the boring part out of the way, the first thing you should tackle before even wondering how your characters fit into the other famous pastas is how your own OC’s fit in with each other. How did all your characters meet? Have all of them even made contact with each other yet? What are their opinions of each other? Are any of them allies? How about enemies? Or are their attitudes indifferent? Perhaps their allegiances change on a regular basis? What accomplishments have they achieved together? What fights have they had? What do they have in common and how are they different? All of these are just sample questions, but you should probably think of these ones at least.

Most of the same questions apply to how they interact with the “official”, already well-known characters. There are a few additional considerations you should take into account, however. Specifically, even if your pasta is a being of indescribable nightmarish power and so on you shouldn’t make the well-known OC do something like cower in fear or be your OC’s servant. That might make sense in a realistic sense, but in a literary sense it might annoy people if you tell them your creepypasta could punch Zalgo’s lights out if she felt like it. This is because it again falls back to the other problem I mentioned with destroying an official, well-accepted character’s canon.

A good link to an official character if you’re afraid of having your OC be called a Sue is just to have them know your character. Not be friends with, not be rivals with, just have them know of their general existence. This makes them both take place in the same universe (or outside the universe, in Zalgo’s case), but not seem so connected that people think you’re writing away the accepted version of a character. You could even have them fight in one of your stories, with neither side emerging dead of course, just to show they are familiar with each other. This is a good way of saying “I have a creepypasta OC who knows <> but I’m not obnoxious about it”.

A lot of people get frightened away from having characters of their own interact with more famous pastas, but it can be done well. It just requires a little extra effort on you, the artist, to make something both believable and entertaining. Because at its core creepypasta is meant to be fun to be a part of. No one pays us to do this, we’re doing it cuz we wanna.
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KomradApex In reply to ??? [2015-04-10 13:36:44 +0000 UTC]

So long as her transformation makes sense, sure.

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NekoLenko In reply to KomradApex [2015-04-10 19:36:15 +0000 UTC]

okay thanks for the advice

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Dragonwolf505 In reply to ??? [2015-03-11 22:53:21 +0000 UTC]

i go with the groups of pastas theory, and my oc is in the slender group, but never really interacts with them (there is a good reason for this!)

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KomradApex In reply to Dragonwolf505 [2015-03-11 22:54:58 +0000 UTC]

I see. The Slenderverse is quite a very rich universe.

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Dragonwolf505 In reply to KomradApex [2015-06-10 01:17:33 +0000 UTC]

...pls dont judge.

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KomradApex In reply to Dragonwolf505 [2015-06-10 12:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Uh, okay...

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Ajones123 In reply to ??? [2015-01-29 01:30:52 +0000 UTC]

I didn't ship my OC with a canon. I created another OC to ship her with. Like Toby and Clock. I tried my best to not make her a Mary Sue

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KomradApex In reply to Ajones123 [2015-01-29 14:59:04 +0000 UTC]

That sounds perfectly okay.

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Heavenxcookie [2014-12-03 00:47:17 +0000 UTC]

So, I have a CP character named Rose Wilted (it's not her REAL name. But her CP name), she died near rose bushes, her favorite flowers. She had been beaten to death by her father (who has anger issues). When she came back to life (I have yet to explain what even happened for that happening). And well, she met Eyeless Jack who was wandering the area, looking for people to kill and kidneys to eat. When he saw Rose, he was about to kill her, and take her kidneys, and well, he didnt. Because he saw how hollow her eyes were, how pale her skin is. How beaten she looked. He backed off a little. And was mentally assuming that she might be... Another one, a Creepypasta. When Rose stood up, the once red roses wilted into black, dead roses. And the first thing she said to EJ was, "Hi. My name is Rose, who are you?"

Now, while I would like her together with EJ, I did not create her just to ship with him. Of course, she's going to be creepy and kill people, but not with EJ, she will do it occasionally but not all the time. Is there any tips on how I can ship her with EJ, and not make her seem like a Mary Sue?

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Ajones123 In reply to Heavenxcookie [2015-01-14 15:05:27 +0000 UTC]

Never ship an OC with a canon character.

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Heavenxcookie In reply to Ajones123 [2015-01-14 19:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Does it make the character immediately a Mary Sue? Is there any way to get away with it?

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Ajones123 In reply to Heavenxcookie [2015-01-16 01:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Not a Mary Sue perhaps. But everyone sees an OC as one or a spin off when they're paired with a canon. I don't think there's a way to get past it

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Heavenxcookie In reply to Ajones123 [2015-01-16 01:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Huh, well, I can deal with haters who don't like  "CanonxOC" because of their stupid reasoning "She doesn't belong with him!!" "She can't be with MY Eyeless Jackie!" them fanbrats tho, I can just ignore them for the most part. 

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Ajones123 In reply to Heavenxcookie [2015-01-16 02:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Those are rabid fangirls who are obsessed with a pasta. Ignore them and do what you want to do.

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Heavenxcookie In reply to Ajones123 [2015-01-16 02:28:17 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I will do that. I haven't had to deal with one yet, but my DA account is a small one, and I don't really post to groups, so I doubt anyone would even go all rabid fangirl on me. Plus, I know how to make the relationship work for the most part, still sorting things out though. 

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KomradApex In reply to Heavenxcookie [2014-12-03 00:50:07 +0000 UTC]

If you ship a character, especially a female one, with a canon pasta there will always be people calling them a Sue. Sorry, it's just something I've noticed. I don't know if your character is or not because I don't know a lot about them, but it might make people judge her harshly. If you want to keep EJ in the picture you might consider having them just be friends or allies.

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Heavenxcookie In reply to KomradApex [2014-12-03 00:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Hm, that's a good idea. But honestly, I might try making them a couple first, through slow relationship and good planning of the story, while keeping characters in character. If she gets called a Sue too many times, I'll change so they are friends or allies. You think I should try that as a first plan?

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KomradApex In reply to Heavenxcookie [2014-12-03 01:05:14 +0000 UTC]

You can go ahead with it, although I personally would just avoid any initial hate she may potentially draw by keeping their relationship platonic.

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Heavenxcookie In reply to KomradApex [2014-12-03 01:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Hm. Alright, I'll try doing this. People can probably get away with shipping their characters with canon if it's done correctly, not every relationship is perfect. Like. As long I make them have arguments (not too many at once though), but also cute moments with apologies (the fluff), and also those creepy moments and killing, and keeping the other Creepypastas remebered. And as long I DONT, make them have sex every 5 minutes, have romance issues (the cliche types like 'I can't be with you!' And stuff), and bad drama that always has romance involved. I might be able to get away with this, but, we'll see how it goes with Plan A.

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KomradApex In reply to Heavenxcookie [2014-12-03 15:42:19 +0000 UTC]

Alright. Good luck.

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Heavenxcookie In reply to KomradApex [2014-12-05 03:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Waragainstgiygas In reply to ??? [2014-11-26 09:18:04 +0000 UTC]

You're helping so much! could you review mine, Harlequin Peter?
Link: waragainstgiygas.deviantart.co…

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KomradApex In reply to Waragainstgiygas [2014-11-26 14:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Sure. I'm heading out the door right now but I'll check him out when I get back.

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Waragainstgiygas In reply to KomradApex [2014-11-26 18:02:49 +0000 UTC]

okay

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KatieBug1398 In reply to ??? [2014-08-14 05:56:47 +0000 UTC]

I know this is sort of strange, but do you think you could review my OC?
I'm going to start writing her story, but I want to make sure that she herself isn't Mary-Sue-ish before I try
katiebug1398.deviantart.com/ar…

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KomradApex In reply to KatieBug1398 [2014-08-14 17:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I'll give a look.

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KamiiFox In reply to ??? [2014-07-26 22:23:31 +0000 UTC]

What do you think of my new OC?: greycoat95.deviantart.com/art/…

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KomradApex In reply to KamiiFox [2014-07-27 15:47:33 +0000 UTC]

She isn't a bad character, but you'll need to give her a convincing backstory.

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KamiiFox In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-27 16:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Okay! Thanks!

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KomradApex In reply to KamiiFox [2014-07-27 16:40:16 +0000 UTC]

BTW, sorry if I can't be of more help right now. I just woke up so it's hard for me to focus. But if you want me to take a look at their backstory when it's done I'd be happy to offer any advice I can.

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KamiiFox In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-27 16:49:18 +0000 UTC]

It's perfectly fine!! I am actually trying to think of what to do for her story yet not make it cliché.

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KomradApex In reply to KamiiFox [2014-07-27 17:42:23 +0000 UTC]

That's a real challenge. I wrote a guide on that subject a while back:
How to Give Your Creepypasta OC a Good BackstoryHow to Give Your Creepypasta OC a Good Backstory
Howdy to all my fellow pastamakers! Not the food kind, the other kind. Anyway, in this particular guide I thought I’d share what advice I can on creating a proper backstory for your OC. I’ve noticed that there are a lot of great OCs out there who are missing a background on how they came to be and why they do what they do. Creating an origin story for your OC is as important in my opinion as giving them a memorable appearance and personality.
There's one model in particular I use for my once-human character, but you can follow it too if you so wish. It includes a set-up that describes who the character was and what they and their life used to be like, a dramatic incident which marks the transition to a Creepypasta, and an awakening to their new life as a creature of horror.
(I should mention that for the sake of simplicity we’ll just be assuming you character was once or is still human for this exercise. Besides, if som

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KamiiFox In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-27 22:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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jjtninja In reply to ??? [2014-07-07 19:50:13 +0000 UTC]

I think out of all the guides on Creepypasta, I can relate to this one more than anything. Heck, this very concept was the foundation for my series. (Of course I'm now reading this after I write it...((Timing...Gotta love it)) so yeah...) 
But yeah, what you wrote is exactly how you should have OC's communicate with each other. I tried to do mine with respect.
(Spoilers for the people who haven't read it yet) 
I never had it where one of my OC's completely dominated another person's OC. I don't have the right to decide who's better than whom in any person's Creepypasta story, nor should I make my OC any better than theirs. 
Like you said, that's just plain disrespectful. 

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KomradApex In reply to jjtninja [2014-07-07 20:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Wise words indeed. Trampling another author's character with your own OC is both careless as well as just plain lazy storytelling.

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sefira101 In reply to ??? [2014-07-05 20:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Is my OC good? sefira101.deviantart.com/art/N…

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KomradApex In reply to sefira101 [2014-07-05 20:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Her appearance is fairly standard, you may wish to make it a bit more complex with some scars, piercings, pieces of practical equipment or the like. As for her description, it's well-balanced with no glaring flaws so that's good.
My first thoughts reading her backstory was that it makes her more of a likeable character to me, how she just wishes to be heard and express herself through her stories and songs. (One small thing: it's spelled "angels" for the heavenly creatures, "angles" are used in mathematics.) The rest of the story is well-paced. Although a lot of pastas for female characters involve an abusive father figure, I wouldn't change that, since you wrote his part well and you'd have to pretty much change the rest of the story.
Overall I think she's an average-good character. If you want to improve her, try writing some more pastas with her in them. You'll be surprised how quickly she develops a unique personality.

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sefira101 In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-05 21:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your opinion.
Yeah, i think she needs some type's of scar's, to give a more dynamic appearance. (Since she is a killer, and would most like obtain some type of injury's)
(Man I'm bad at spelling. Thanks for telling me.)

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KomradApex In reply to sefira101 [2014-07-05 21:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, normally I don't like tons of scars everywhere but with her backstory it might make sense to have a few.
And don't worry, in high school my Math teacher was driven crazy by people doing that. XD

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sefira101 In reply to KomradApex [2014-07-05 21:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Ha, my math teacher is just as bad at spelling as me xD

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The-Cat-Loving-Kid In reply to ??? [2014-07-03 11:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Well, I may have possibly screwed up my OC. Dangit...

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StarryMochi In reply to ??? [2014-06-20 18:43:16 +0000 UTC]

mailman of a famous cpoc! that made my day! i will be sure to use these!

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KomradApex In reply to StarryMochi [2014-06-20 18:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. You could actually make your OC Slenderman's mailman if you want. Think about it, it would explain who keeps returning the notes after someone collects them. XD

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StarryMochi In reply to KomradApex [2014-06-20 19:05:18 +0000 UTC]

OMG I HAVE NEVER THOUGHT OF THAT. THAT IS SUCH A COOL IDEA HOLY SHIT MY MIND IS BLOWN.  

THANKS FOR MAKING ME LOOK LIKE A FISH ON DRY LAND. 

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KomradApex In reply to StarryMochi [2014-06-20 19:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Just doin' my job. XD On a more  serious note, while I think pastas should remain scary, there's nothing wrong with making jokes about them. It bothers me how some people, especially the "hardcore" creepypasta fans, seem to dislike any humour or parody.

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StarryMochi In reply to KomradApex [2014-06-20 19:12:08 +0000 UTC]

true true, but happy pasta is a exception, right?

I have my group of cpocs, and they all know each other. I have no problem with that since I'm not like a HOLY SHIT HARDCORE type fan, but is that okay? because a lot of other people do that same thing. 

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KomradApex In reply to StarryMochi [2014-06-20 19:15:05 +0000 UTC]

That's perfectly fine. All my OC's know each other and on occasion even make cameos in each other's stories.
And I love happypasta! ^^ Like I mentioned in the guide I'm a big fan of Splendorman. Except when he goes into Rage Mode, that's when I head for my bomb shelter and lock myself in until he calms down.

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StarryMochi In reply to KomradApex [2014-06-20 19:25:22 +0000 UTC]

omg. you have earned yourself another watcher. Currently right now I'm making a happy pasta!!! 

HOLY CRAP I JUST LOOKED AT YOUR PROFILE AND I SAW OHSHC AND IM FANGIRLING. AGAIN. 

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KomradApex In reply to StarryMochi [2014-06-20 19:39:13 +0000 UTC]

I know this may sound weird for a guy, but on the topic of OHSHC I'll let you in on a little secret. I have a huge mancrush on Nekozawa, he's just so friggin cute! XD

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StarryMochi In reply to KomradApex [2014-06-20 19:48:27 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im totally alright with that! i have a huge lady crush on haruhi <3

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