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Published: 2013-07-02 02:29:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1058; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 2
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got drunk and drew this last night though I think something similar has been done already... by everyone. Meh oh well . OH and I found my pencil set..... after I buckled down and bought a new one......Related content
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MikestarBrony [2013-07-02 09:52:28 +0000 UTC]
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They are really cute and I know from experience you will often have trouble with the scanner not picking up the softness of your pencil lines.
First thing I noticed is your thoughts need to be in a thought bubble rather than just hanging in mid air. The expressions on the ponies are well captured and really give you a feel for their emotions.
The white unicorns tail looks a bit ragged around the edges... but then I would probably expect that the morning after... so I think it fits the scene. the unicorn on the top's horn looks a bit misplaced and at the wrong angle but i can see where you were probably trying to avoid the mouth on the other one. it's barely noticeable though.
I'd love to see you have a go at coloring it as I think it would really add to the scene. and a bit of back story about who they are.
Well done.
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L9OBL In reply to MikestarBrony [2013-07-02 10:46:34 +0000 UTC]
If you want back story i suggest you read fallout equestria.... All of it. Cause i really dont feel like citing chapter 20.5 at the moment ahahahaha
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