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LampshdeThis — Re-Losing Determination: Chapter1.p7

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Published: 2016-03-14 20:40:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 980; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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Description .... Hehe.. Things are pretty much on a very loose thread here... And that thread won't hang for long... But I really can't bring myself to care anymore.......... I really can't. All I think of whenever anyone- which is non stop- brings it up, I just shrug it off.


Anyways! Finally a new update, I'm not dead yet! And no more blurry panels

I decided to translate Gaster's font on panel, which is more convenient, and for those who are both new, and confused, read pages 4,4.5 and 5, they'll explain what's going on in here.
Also; in this AU CHARA(kara), and Chara(tshara) are not the same person, here Chara is the first human, and the one who speaks in white dialog text during the genocide run, while CHARA is the one who speaks in red dialog text duing the genocide tun, and is the entity that appears at the end of genocide.

Sorry AsrielxFrisk, and AsrielxChara fans, but nope, I view them as siblings, also sorry SansxToriel fans, Toriel is older than Sans's grandfather in this AU, which makes it way too weird... Don't expect any sort of cliches here, and not all romance is two sided, so yeah realism, expect loads of it.

P.S: I left the eleventh panel's wingdings extra blurry, and untranslated on purpose, I hope you guys like Physics!

Previous page: Edit: I'm redoing all previous pages.
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Comments: 5

GLO-HE [2016-03-15 11:17:11 +0000 UTC]

A good work Sarah....

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LampshdeThis In reply to GLO-HE [2016-03-15 17:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Gloria

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GLO-HE In reply to LampshdeThis [2016-03-16 20:14:50 +0000 UTC]

  which is always my pleasure  dear Sarah  

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kiffKewitzz [2016-03-14 22:30:59 +0000 UTC]

That sixth frame of Gaster really disturbs me, there hasn't been a character which made me feel this uneasy in awhile  
Nice work on the chapter, Chara's tenseness are also really well conveyed.  Looking forward to more!   

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LampshdeThis In reply to kiffKewitzz [2016-03-15 10:21:01 +0000 UTC]

The sixth panel was that effective? Wow.

Thank you! Yep, Chara may think that they are above reproach, but this is W.D Gaster here, their power is nullified in comparison to his.
Already planning the next page!

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