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Published: 2005-05-10 05:52:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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I can be strong.I can do this!
I can make things happen.
I'm gonna push myself to my limits!
I'm not gonna quit!
Because I have to prove this to myself.
I know I can do this!!!
I use to be a punk and I took the easy way out.
But I don't want to do that anymore!
I want to show the world what I can do plus more and more.
I don't want to quit this time!
I want to do the best that I can do.
How can I get this through to you?
I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me!!
With him on my side, I can be all that I can be!!
To all the haters hatin on me,
To all the liers lying on me,
To all to people that want to see me fail
You all can go straight to hell!!!
I refuse to fail!!
I'm gonna finish what I started,
And you don't have to be apart of it!!
All I need is a little faith!!
Comments: 26
stabbedbycupid [2005-11-06 06:35:39 +0000 UTC]
hate to come down on you like this, but that's what it took me to change. stop writing like the angsty teenager that you are. look at the cracks in the pavement or the rain falling or the cars on the street and try to write about that. poetry can be about feelings, but you have to be creative about it. use images and strong language. find a way to set yourself apart.
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stabbedbycupid In reply to stabbedbycupid [2005-11-06 06:37:07 +0000 UTC]
correcting myself: you are not a teenager. an even better reason not to write like one.
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Cintillo [2005-05-12 02:16:15 +0000 UTC]
Heloito!
I love ur poem girl!
And thats rigth ALL that one person needs is to have faith!
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Latestcraze In reply to Cintillo [2005-05-13 18:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Yep...thanks much!!
~~Portia~~
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Latestcraze In reply to Leppaboy [2005-05-13 18:50:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
~~Portia~~
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UchihaGirl1123 [2005-05-11 01:15:40 +0000 UTC]
OOH!!!!! i like alot! let me see if i can match a drawing for this.........ehehe.
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Latestcraze In reply to UchihaGirl1123 [2005-05-13 18:48:54 +0000 UTC]
I would like that!!! Thanks!
~~Portia~~
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DarqueMagus [2005-05-11 00:08:26 +0000 UTC]
niiiiiiice. very forceful too but good forceful. ^^
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Latestcraze In reply to DarqueMagus [2005-05-13 18:47:36 +0000 UTC]
wow...thanks!!
~~Portia~~
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DarqueMagus [2005-05-11 00:00:57 +0000 UTC]
niiiiiiice. very forceful too but good forceful. ^^
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Latestcraze In reply to DarqueMagus [2005-05-13 18:46:47 +0000 UTC]
wow...thanks!!
~~Portia~~
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Latestcraze In reply to Ookamiofthewolves [2005-05-13 18:45:45 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
~~Portia~~
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PaisleyPirate [2005-05-10 20:44:47 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful. And inspirational. I needed that today. (even though I know you didn't write it for anyone but yourself)
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Latestcraze In reply to PaisleyPirate [2005-05-13 18:44:44 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad it helped you....and thank you!!
~~Portia~~
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Latestcraze In reply to Anaely [2005-05-13 18:43:02 +0000 UTC]
thanks...and thanks for the fav!!
~~Portia~~
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eclipz04 [2005-05-10 15:59:14 +0000 UTC]
Very powerful, so kudos to you for being so determined. It's inspirational to see that.
-brita
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Latestcraze In reply to angelscryrain [2005-05-13 18:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!!
~~Portia~~
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