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Published: 2005-09-25 21:37:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 245; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description In due time the sun will shine
The birds will sing
And one day I’ll have your ring.

In due time I know you will be mine.
But I have to be patient because you are a great find.
We are both young and have a lot to give.
So baby let’s take our time and just live.

In due time we will be together.
We both have some growing-up to do
But I just don’t want to lose you.

In my heart I feel like this is the end.
That me and you will never be together again.
But my love for you won’t go away,
And no matter how pissed off at you I am,
I will always ask you to stay.

In due time
I won’t pine for you.
I won’t chase you.
Because I’m tired.
I know my heart wants to keep hoping…
Hoping that you’ll give me a chance.
But now it seems that you won’t even give me a glance.

In due time things will happen.
I’m not gonna rush…I’m not gonna pressure you.
All I can do is be myself
And if that’s not enough….
Well…that’s just too tough!
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Comments: 17

truely-me-niece [2005-11-03 03:20:05 +0000 UTC]

i love your work, your very talented
nice piece

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Latestcraze In reply to truely-me-niece [2005-11-03 03:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow...thank you so much!!

~~Portia~~

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Leppaboy [2005-10-13 08:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful and touching poem... Great work!

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Latestcraze In reply to Leppaboy [2005-10-13 21:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

~~Portia~~

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angelscryrain [2005-09-29 01:03:51 +0000 UTC]

I know exactly how this feels....you have a great abilitity to express the true feeling behind someone I espescially like the last lines:

In due time things will happen.
I’m not gonna rush…I’m not gonna pressure you.
All I can do is be myself
And if that’s not enough….
Well…that’s just too tough!

It is funny and oh so true all at the same time. for me

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Latestcraze In reply to angelscryrain [2005-09-29 16:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...Thank you so much for the fav!!

~~Portia~~

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Cintillo [2005-09-28 21:20:34 +0000 UTC]

WOW very very beau!!
i admire the rhyme ^_^
i CANT do poems like that

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Cintillo In reply to Cintillo [2005-09-29 19:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Welcome and anytime
yesterday i tried to do one poem with rhyme and i just get like 4 sentences
so i admire teh people like you that get a Poem-poem

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Latestcraze In reply to Cintillo [2005-09-29 16:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!

~~Portia~~

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PaisleyPirate [2005-09-27 20:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Again, Awesome.

Portia, you put things so well in your poetry that it is always a joy to read. Even the dark stuff... so good.

This shows the greatness of the human heart in love... able to embrace those who won't (can't) acknowledge that they are being loved by someone, and someone who understands that not having that love returned eventually means that, even though you love them, you can't hang on forever, and that you have to be you. (wow, that sentence structure sucks!... sorry) I think you get my meaning tho...

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Latestcraze In reply to PaisleyPirate [2005-09-28 17:39:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I write what I feel.

~~Portia~~

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Xanofar [2005-09-27 17:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... The mood seems to subliminally chance in this poem. Interesting...

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Latestcraze In reply to Xanofar [2005-09-28 17:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very...very much!!

~~Portia~~

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DarqueMagus [2005-09-27 02:47:38 +0000 UTC]

first off. i wanna give ups for the poem. next i wanna continue to blow the horn of cowboy bebop and just say i can see jet in this poem so much. ^^ good work again.

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Latestcraze In reply to DarqueMagus [2005-09-28 17:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...I didn't know it was that good...I was going to delete it. Thanks again Oh bye the way, I can see Jet in this poem as well.
~~Portia~~

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ObsidianVormund [2005-09-26 23:08:06 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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Latestcraze In reply to ObsidianVormund [2005-09-27 01:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

~~Portia~~

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