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Published: 2005-03-23 04:15:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description You don't know you make me smile.
For you I would walk a thousand miles!
You don't know I love your personailty.
You don't know I like you in reality!

You don't know I think about you all the time.
You don't know I want you to be mine!
You don't know I have wonderful dreams about you!
You don't I really admire you.

You don't know how long I felt this way.
You don't know I never know what to say.
You don't know I talk about you all the time.
You don't know when I'm with you the sun always shines!

You don't know you are always on my mind.
You don't know I think you're really kind!
You don't know how much I care!
I don't know how much I can bare!

You don't know how alone I feel!
You don't know I want you for real!
You don't know when you're on my mind I can't sleep or eat.
You don't know I have something for you to keep!

My heart, my soul, my being belongs to you!
Now you know the truth about how I feel about you!!
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Comments: 20

Detruit [2005-12-01 09:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Hey this is good!
You are a good writer!
Love it!

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Latestcraze In reply to Detruit [2005-12-01 15:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow...Thank you!

~~Portia~~

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Detruit In reply to Latestcraze [2005-12-01 15:58:29 +0000 UTC]

Haha
You are so welcome

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daasa [2005-04-16 11:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh I like the flow. This reminds me of one of my favorite songs. Its called I found a diary underneth the tree. It's a beautiful love song.

To me your poem projects feelings I think that a majority of the population can identify with.It's sad because the person does'nt know how deeply you love and its beautiful at the same time.
Good job bringing in the ending.

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Latestcraze In reply to daasa [2005-04-18 05:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!! I'm glad you liked it!!!

~~Portia~~

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ObsidianVormund [2005-03-26 00:07:06 +0000 UTC]

So many great feelings expressed in this poem. I enjoyed it.

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Latestcraze In reply to ObsidianVormund [2005-04-02 18:01:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!
~~Portia~~

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alwaslgirl [2005-03-24 09:52:19 +0000 UTC]

awwww:/ how sweet lovely poemm

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Latestcraze In reply to alwaslgirl [2005-03-24 16:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

~~Portia~~

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DarqueMagus [2005-03-23 18:01:38 +0000 UTC]

that's really good. sweet

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Latestcraze In reply to DarqueMagus [2005-03-24 01:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks...I'm shocked that you did not complain about the exclamation points!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!
Again thanks!

~~Portia~~

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DarqueMagus In reply to Latestcraze [2005-03-24 03:31:46 +0000 UTC]

well i thought i'd let you slide this time ^^

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Latestcraze In reply to DarqueMagus [2005-03-24 06:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks..... and thanks for the fav....it means a lot!!

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Ookamiofthewolves [2005-03-23 04:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Thumbs up to you.

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Ookamiofthewolves [2005-03-23 04:18:15 +0000 UTC]

It's too awesome. I can't hold back the tears.

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Ookamiofthewolves [2005-03-23 04:17:20 +0000 UTC]

It's so beautiful. Good job. I loved it.

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Latestcraze In reply to Ookamiofthewolves [2005-03-23 04:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!!

~~Portia~~

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Ookamiofthewolves In reply to Latestcraze [2005-03-23 04:25:41 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome.

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Latestcraze In reply to Ookamiofthewolves [2005-03-23 06:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav.... It means a lot!!

~~Portia~~

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Ookamiofthewolves In reply to Latestcraze [2005-03-23 06:14:11 +0000 UTC]

It's no trouble.

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