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Published: 2004-04-19 23:58:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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This I made out of magnets of words on a little white board in the guidance office one afternoon a few days ago. My words were limited but this does have depth, trust me. In the days to come, as soon as I have written all the ideas I have at this point, I may make this into a longer poem--we'll see . . .Related content
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the choice of the words is very... i dont know the word, but it's a good one... I dont quite understand what u are talking about, but it gives u this strange feeling deep inside you.... It's intresting and weird at the same time,
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dont worry, its does have a lot of meaning to me, even though that i only had about one hundred words to choose from, most conjunctions and things like that, but its a very deep kind of understanding...i dont expect anyone to get it but me...
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Just knowing how this piece came to be makes it very nice. I get a feeling of letting go and enjoying life as much as one can. I like the imagery
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OooOOoOoOo very very very interesting....kinda makes you feel calm and free....
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