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Published: 2010-04-06 10:06:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 367; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 24
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Description A self portrait I made as a qualification assignment for the school I want to go to. It's not yet shaded cuz i didn't feel like it till now. But it will be done....maybe even colored?

so if you guys wanted to know how i look.....well like this....

and the dot on my nose is a birthmark
it's actually on the left side of my nose but here it's on the right cuz i didn't realize that when i look in the mirror it's on the other side....
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Comments: 4

Shotomanexe [2010-04-07 14:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Hm.... Your nose seems crooked and your ears are different, but that isn't really a problem. Fix the nose and it'll be ready for shading. Makes me want to do a self portait.

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leeuwen12 In reply to Shotomanexe [2010-04-07 19:37:17 +0000 UTC]

how can you say my ears are different? you never saw me?....or you mean left and right?....that's just because the of the light makes the 'ear-rimples' look different... but i'll fix the nose...

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thejoja [2010-04-06 17:34:57 +0000 UTC]

the hair looks like shit. esspecially on top of your head.
I can't see the slighest use of shadows. Make shadows.
When adding shadows, make sure to make yourself slighlty tanned too.
Your ears are to high, or your eyes are too low, but the ears have to start where the eyes are, unless you have a realy odd face-build.
When adding shadow, make sure to get yourself a fucking nose. You have a bit like n*gger nose, but like this? no.
get yourself a desent nose using shadow works.
Don't make it able to be bought as a print. people don't want to buy your goddamn face in king size as a poster or artwork.
Get yourself some pickles and facial hair. You miss any slice of detail here.
Don't draw those goddamn ripples and stuff. they have to be made out of shadows. So draw those already. It's best to draw them gently with a 4B, and then gently scrub them among the face, I'll show you how some time.
Also your eyes are faaar too big. It isnt fucking anime. common, nobody can have such big eyes. Get them normal size already.

Also, I'll try to take the old selfportrait (which realy isn't that good) with me on thursday (English exam). Unless you've dislexis, then you won't get to see them ^^

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leeuwen12 In reply to thejoja [2010-04-06 19:15:40 +0000 UTC]

no i don't have dislexis so show the fucking thing....and yes my face is fucked up so most of the things you said are wrong...and the description says it's not shaded...and i'm not making pickles...they're on different places and changing i only draw the things approximately stable...and i like big eyes...makes me sexy

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