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MistyLovesCookies [2013-05-22 04:23:17 +0000 UTC]

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One of my first critique, so please don't be offended.
Okay, first of all your shading is amazing.
But the anatomy looks a bit more like a horse than a wolf.. Try making the snout more round and the front shoulders back a little. The underbelly should curve into the back leg instead of out, unless it is fur. Try making the front shoulder and back leg a bit more angular, and the ankles thinner. The tail should flow a bit more as well. If you need any help with wolf anatomy, try looking up some side views of wolves :3
Hope I helped! Sorry if I was harsh e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>
Overall, great job!

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Patchworks-Key [2013-04-20 02:12:51 +0000 UTC]

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so this is my first critique so be warned e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)"/>

so personally i absolutely LOVE this peice of artwork but still there are a few little things you could add and/or fix

you could have made the muzzle a little more round and the shoulders a bit farther back
the tail could be less stiff and slightly more flowing
the ankles could be thinner at the bottom and maybe you could add paws or add grass to cover where they would be

well that's all i have to say because other than that it's awesomely amazing i hope you didn't get offended about what i said e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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JaaiJaai [2013-04-13 01:20:23 +0000 UTC]

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Okay,to start.This is absolutely FANTASTIC. I couldn't,ever,ever create something as beautiful.The shading! Amazing.This is my first critique,too! So,it might suck! Warning ._.
haha. cx

First,the shoulders seem to pop out forward a bit,so i'd make them a bit thinner and farther back. Second,the muzzle need to be a little round,and shorter.The neck shouldn't be quite that long,too.
lastly,I notice the paws are cut off,but I think you should make the 'ankles' a but thinner on the front arm.


Otherwise,it's amazing.WAY better then anything I can do! Keep up the good work,and never stop practicing.Your art is far better then mine,again.

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Bluemoon5652 [2013-04-12 23:50:01 +0000 UTC]

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Okay I've never done a critic but I thought this was a good one to do it for.

Vision: I'm not really sure what this means so I'm going to skip it.

Originality: Well, you took an lps character and turned it into a wolf. That's pretty cool.

Technique: So this is the one I really wanted to say something about. In my honest opinion when I first looked at this I thought it was a horse not a wolf. The legs look a bit long and the shape of the face as other people have said how to fix that. The only other thing I can think of is the hair, it makes it look a bit like a mane on a horse and that's what drew me to think of a horse.

Impact: The background colors match really well with the facial expression. She looks very sad and thus using blue colored backgrounds also puts forth that same saddened tone. The mix of colors in the background is very pretty as well ;D

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Alone-Dragon [2013-04-08 11:06:36 +0000 UTC]

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The shading is wonderful x3 and I adore those eyes! I also love the way you did her hair 0.0 but might I suggest you made the muzzle shorter and more round? Wolves tend to have more round muzzles. Also, the shoulders are popping out a bit from the front maybe they should be more slim. The tail's a little long. I think wolves should have a bit shorter of a tail, but you've got the idea there. x3 Other than that I think it's an over all pure work of art c: I love those legs x3 I love this drawing very much Light, and I think you're improving very very much c:

-Ginger

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619bees [2013-04-08 06:52:19 +0000 UTC]

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Okay, first ever critique, hehe a.deviantart.net/avatars/h/e/h… " alt=" " title="heplz" />

Sorry if it fails, I tried.

Hmm
um okay
Well first of all, the legs and arms look really good. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> AND THE SHADING. OMG THE SHADING. IT'S FLIPPING AMAZING. It's so detailed and original and awesome ;w;

And now for the things you could improve on/change. Well.... the only bit that I would change is the head. The rest is awesome e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>))) I'd make the head bigger and rounder,and the snout shorter. I would also put it a little bit closer to the head (make the neck a little shorter).

But this is AMAZING work, Light! Good job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/>
~ShparklyKitteh e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Meow :3"/>

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CALElDOSKOPE [2013-04-08 00:36:59 +0000 UTC]

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This is a great drawing! I would just work on the perspective of the snout, and maybe add less "spikes" on the hair. Otherwise, the anatomy of the legs is extremely well-done, and the shading is amazing! The blending effects are great, and the backround is better than I could ever do! The concept for this art is nice too. But, maybe you could give it a bigger belly? XD What I mean is that it would look more realistic if you gave it more muscle. And, I'm glad you're feeling better! All in all, great drawing and concept!
~Katie

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HorseQueenDiamond [2013-07-19 15:45:43 +0000 UTC]

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The shading is excellent xD gotta give u tht. But the wolf has a few flaws. First, the muzle is too squarish.I don't think wolfs have manes either........I also think the legs should be a littlke skinnier at the bottom to.I also honestly think u should bring the two front let a bit back, so therealmost directly inder the end of the main/shoulder area, just to givethe chest a little more space^^ I think the ears should be like pointing in the direction (unless there sticking out away from eachother or viseversa) I also think the bottom of the stomach couildbe curving upva
Ittle more when it connects the hind legs. I also think the inside of the tail is a little flat to.......... srry if I was a little mean I just want u to improve^^

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Magic361 [2013-04-18 02:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow Light this really good! The muzzle just needs to be a little more round other then that this is great!

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LPSPawsandclaws [2013-04-17 02:21:28 +0000 UTC]

I love it! I really dont want to try and offend you, but it looked like a horse with a brief glance. I'm so sorry! I'm such a jerk T-T

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JaaiJaai [2013-04-13 01:22:24 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic! Love the shading,too. c:

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Rainy-bleu [2013-04-11 19:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Love it! O: I'll probably write a critique later. X3

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BunnySlipperArt [2013-04-10 15:16:21 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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EpicNeonChess [2013-04-08 23:34:49 +0000 UTC]

I freaking love this LIGHT!

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LLAMALOVR [2013-04-08 17:56:02 +0000 UTC]

you certainly are improving my friend~

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Lpschick2 [2013-04-08 00:13:57 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing this is bye far the best thing I have ever seen

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lpsgirl688 [2013-04-08 00:05:20 +0000 UTC]

0.0 *breath taken* *Gasps* OMG SOOOOO ADORABLE I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT TO SAY....... I LOVE THIS ^^

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BoltStarStudioz [2013-04-07 23:57:01 +0000 UTC]

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LIGHT THIS IS
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AMG USHFAUWEDHFOSNVCZKJS RDNKVAN *explodes*

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