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Published: 2011-09-24 20:31:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 416; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 2
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Part 2 of =kit 's commission batch, this time another one of ~Twisting 's characters, Grief.Had a lot of issues with this one, still not quite sure if I like it...
At this point I had a bug theme going on...lol.
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Comments: 8
acrei [2011-09-25 01:59:05 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, well, great job, I love your lineart style hahaha, and your nose style, and your eyes..!!! But I think the back is a little off? Your back legs aren't as stiff as before, great job getting over that But the front legs are really stiff and kind of awkward, especially the one that looks like it's coming from the head [well, I can see it's not but I dunno how else to describe it] Plus, the back is a little stiff as well. I remember once when you critiqued one of my stuff, a long time ago, you said that wolves' backs aren't as curvy as cats, but maybe it won't hurt to arch it just a bit? I dunno.
Sorry for the wall of text and unwarranted critique *3* Your concept, lineart, and the rest of your anatomy is amazing as always <3
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Llutra In reply to acrei [2011-09-25 02:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! This really helps!
Sorry for the short reply but as you probably guessed my inbox is full of spam XDD
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acrei In reply to Llutra [2011-09-25 02:14:53 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I was glad I helped ^^
Haha, it's ok!
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Cheeseburger-kitty [2011-09-24 21:45:20 +0000 UTC]
So many kit commissions! XD
I love them all! 8D
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