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Published: 2009-04-14 01:41:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Lord, I’m tired of walking,
Always wonder where to go,
Weary.

Lord, I’m scared of shadows
Surrounding me and threatening,
Fearful.

Lord, I’m distant from all,
Close to none, even to my friends,
Lonely.

But Lord, you give me rest,
So that I may continue on.
Gentle.

But Lord, you give me peace,
Keeping me from my  enemies.
Faithful.

And Lord, you never leave,
Even though I deserve not love.
Loving.
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anniefeng93 [2009-04-14 13:03:28 +0000 UTC]

I really like the poem! It's very soothing. Idk why, but there are some tense points in the poem that restricts the poem from flowing smoothly. Idk. Probably just me! ^^
Another beautiful piece from Logon!!!

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logonomicon In reply to anniefeng93 [2009-04-14 23:26:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, all poems are subject to the reader(s), but I meant it to not be a really relaxing, soothing thing. I was going for more mournful at first, and then humility in the second.

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anniefeng93 In reply to logonomicon [2009-04-15 00:40:37 +0000 UTC]

=____=
i must be bad at reading poems. *tears myself*

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logonomicon In reply to anniefeng93 [2009-04-15 01:04:16 +0000 UTC]

You can't be bad at reading poems. That's a conceptual impossibility

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anniefeng93 In reply to logonomicon [2009-04-15 14:54:18 +0000 UTC]

And then Logon continues with his big words and then Annie runs away to hide in a box. And yes it is possible to be bad at reading, poems especially. I think differently than everybody else. Lol....

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logonomicon In reply to anniefeng93 [2009-04-15 22:19:23 +0000 UTC]

That only means you think differently than everybody else. It's literally impossible to read a poem incorrectly. Poems are ultimately written for the reader to interpret. Otherwise, the poet's crappy.

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anniefeng93 In reply to logonomicon [2009-04-16 13:26:24 +0000 UTC]

I will never professionalize in writing. That is all that matters. ^_^"

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Darthvicky6 [2009-04-14 01:53:14 +0000 UTC]

love it! oh your in choir?

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logonomicon In reply to Darthvicky6 [2009-04-14 01:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I'd like to think I'm a decent Bass for a Freshman.

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Darthvicky6 In reply to logonomicon [2009-04-14 01:57:33 +0000 UTC]

haha thats so cool. I love choir! I'm a soprano and your a Christan too?

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logonomicon In reply to Darthvicky6 [2009-04-14 01:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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Darthvicky6 In reply to logonomicon [2009-04-14 01:59:13 +0000 UTC]

well now i think that is pretty cool

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