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Published: 2010-04-05 02:53:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Why am I lying here bleeding?
How long have I bled?

Why can't I die?
Just let me die!
I shouldn't last so long,
I shouldn't be alive.

How many places am I pierced?
I must have more holes than flesh.

Will I ever be able to stop this?
Will my love for her ever die?
I have no desire to remain
Where my veins run dry.
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Comments: 9

malz110 [2010-06-12 08:12:40 +0000 UTC]

I like this, but it should be "lying", not "laying". (:

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logonomicon In reply to malz110 [2010-06-12 21:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Good catch. Thanks a ton pixie (do people still call you that?)

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malz110 In reply to logonomicon [2010-06-13 23:45:36 +0000 UTC]

no problem! and not really, other than you. xD i'm mally now, in general.

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crazydemonmbg [2010-04-05 04:21:58 +0000 UTC]

Well written. Short, but to the point of your feelings.

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TheArtisThatNeverWas [2010-04-05 03:00:40 +0000 UTC]

i love the end lines ^^

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logonomicon In reply to TheArtisThatNeverWas [2010-04-05 03:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you. I really appreciate hearing that.

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TheArtisThatNeverWas In reply to logonomicon [2010-04-05 03:23:41 +0000 UTC]

=]
just wondering not trying to be nosy or anything but are these poems about a real girl? ((really sorry if i come off as nosy, you don't have to tell me if it's to personal))

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logonomicon In reply to TheArtisThatNeverWas [2010-04-05 17:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Several of them were when I wrote them, but I have this thing about poems being personal, and I don't let them be that way for more than a minute or two. Poetry is all about the reader to me, so in that respect, no poem is personal enough to be about anything in the poet's life.

But yes.

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TheArtisThatNeverWas In reply to logonomicon [2010-04-05 17:17:03 +0000 UTC]

mmm i see ^^

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