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Published: 2011-07-10 00:34:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 646; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Gawd >.<I thought I wouldnt get this finished
anyway
tis Eclipse 8D
lol
I feel I dont draw my OC's enough so that's what im going to try and do ^^
lol I know I know a LOT of fails but still x3
I tried improving on water and grass/leaves....I failed XD
took me less than 4 hours ^^
I didnt draw it to make something epic I just sketched it for fun x3
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I think the perspective in the background is really well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Also, the way you did Exlipse, is really well done ^^ Good anatomy
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It looks a little bit wrong with eclipse's tail. I think it should have been more 'behind her' instead of beside her, if you understand what i mean? Also, that the bushes seems pretty 'tame' like... some you finds in the guardian, not bushes you finds out in the wild. You should also have tried to let a bit grass sticking up over the bushes, so it didn't looks like some you have placed there.
Eclipse's shadows are also a little bit wrong some places.
And a fail, that really anoys me, but isn't seen so much: The wind must come from left, wich you can see on eclipse's hair, but some of the grass points the other way...
But besides that: Awesome! I really like this pic ^^
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lol yush twas my first time doing bushes so i expected them to come out weird XD
i agree on the tail it just looked fine when i was sketching it but as i added colour i add second thoughts about it :/
oh frick >.< the grass lol you were there i suck at grass so was scribbling XDDDDDDDDD thats why it is a bit higgildy wiggildy and yush I forgot to put them over Eclipse lol is it ironic I had planned to do that XD
lol thank-you fro the critique ^^
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wow!!! the effects are beautiful!! you rock!!! Have a llama
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Cool.
I bet a lunar eclipse would have made this even more epic. You know when the moon turns red? Or is that a solar eclipse. Can't remember. XD
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ty ^^
I know what you're on about XD
I was just lazy ^^
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teh moon and background is epic! X3 Eclipse on the other hand, looks demonic and scawy
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XD lol
keep away pretty boy!
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