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Published: 2012-01-21 04:53:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 514; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 19
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weird title yes...i couldn't think>.>a example 4 commissions
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animefreakharuna99 [2012-01-23 02:21:39 +0000 UTC]
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i belive you should work on some body porportion i'm no good at it either but overall this is amazing the shading is perfect the hair and face are detailed beautiful and full of emotion it is wonderful you just need to work on body e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Smile)"/> And the backround is simple not to flashy and not taking attention away from the character which is good because the main focus of the picture is the characters.
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bonny1011 [2012-01-22 17:50:49 +0000 UTC]
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This is by far the best sketch I've ever seen.
Do first of all, I love how you shaded the clothes! It looks like there's only one light source somewhere (usually I see shading in places where it shouldn't be) and that's good. AndI looked closely, you even did blush! It looks amazing ℠(way better than I could do e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Second, I don't really get what they're sitting on, is it a sofa, table, or a big pillow? (Sorry >n<) And it looks like it's floating....
I am amazed how you did this, I could never do that. And those bunnies and that cat, Soo cute! I want them now~
Overall, this is an amazing sketch and I can't wait to see more from you ā„
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Milcay1 [2012-01-22 09:21:24 +0000 UTC]
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This is really good! Although, what are they sitting on? Is it a bed or a sofa? And the thing they are sitting on is floating in mid air. Also, the leg of the girl in front, her right, is confusing me because it sort of looks like the rest of the leg is missing. I like how the checkers theme of what they are sitting on is continued into the heart, that is a really clever idea! The girls' hair fall perfectly and the faces are perfect. Overall, this is a beautiful piece and I can't wait to see more.
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LoliCross In reply to Milcay1 [2012-01-22 09:28:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the tip!~
it was suppose to be a lounge =.=
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Milcay1 In reply to LoliCross [2012-01-22 09:30:23 +0000 UTC]
ok. I just got a bit confused
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hiccupsofthedead [2012-01-26 18:23:04 +0000 UTC]
This is really nice although the skirt looks a bit stiff... Maybe try looking at real photos of people sitting.. On the plus, love this ^^
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LoliCross In reply to hiccupsofthedead [2012-01-26 21:35:12 +0000 UTC]
thanks!~
ill take that tip into thought (:
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minteacup [2012-01-21 15:52:40 +0000 UTC]
You're so amazing at drawing~!
I wish I could draw like you~ The bunnies are so CUTE
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LoliCross In reply to minteacup [2012-01-22 08:13:46 +0000 UTC]
thanks!~
your also good @ drawing!~
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