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My application forlink to full Rayn :[link]
link to full pet :[link]
BIG EDIT: I GOT IN!!!!!! so i'll probably be doing a lot more voleros related works from now on
anyway, IT IS VEERRRYYY LOOONNNGGG, SO BE WARNED!!! here goes...
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Name: Rayn (has never had a surname - will be explained, keep reading)
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Species: Dragon - Longwing species (will also be explained)
Job: Unemployed - Thief
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Talents:
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Personality: Rayn is very cold towards other people, She prefers to be alone rather than with others, mostly just because she has to live like this because she's a thief. she also prefers to get things done herself rather than relying on others for help, and avoids contact with others if she can. Despite her cold exterior though, she's actually very sweet and lively. she only shows this side to people she trusts though.
She's also vulnerable: even though her outside appearance makes her seem tough and heartless, she very often feels lonely, as she's barely ever had real parents and has never had any real friends. She's also very quiet and shy, and barely talks to others (except when she shows her true personality - the sweet side) and she only smiles in the presence of people she knows well and trusts.
She likes the colour blue, and also adores shiny objects and collecting things (like a child does) She is quick-thinking and cunning (for when she steals), though she often misunderstands normal aspects of life and gets confused - she has not learnt the skills children get naturally from watching their parents.
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History: Rayn was born to a Pegasus mother and a longwing dragon father. Her mother was originally from Alora and was named Elora by her parents in respect for the country. She was an artisan - travelling and playing the flute around Voleros. She had blond hair and blue eyes, and also had very petite appearance (small and thin) so she looked younger than she was. These aspects she passed down to Rayn who only took the species, some skills, and some personality traits from her father. Rayn also shares a startling resemblance to her mother - to the point that their faces look almost completely identical.
Her Father was a longwing dragon from a noble family in Elavernis, named Marz. He was a high-ranking soldier in the army, specializing in long range attacks and assassination - putting his perfect aim and quick reflexes to good use. He had Black hair and red eyes, and was very tall (over 6 ft, though that is normal for his race)
Elora and Marz met when they were 15 and were completely in love for years, though Marz was not allowed to marry her when he was 18 as his parents dissaproved of her. Later, Rayn was born due to an affair between Elora and Marz, as at that point Marz had been forced to marry a dragon from another noble family.
Rayn has no knowledge of her father, as her mother fled from Marz's family when her affair with Marz was discovered, later giving birth to Rayn and deciding to return to Alora when Rayn was 2. however while travelling through Elavernis, Elora and Rayn were attacked by bandits, and had to flee. Elora, considering her daughter's safety, ran into a nearby bar (ow! ko) and asked the friendly manager to look after Rayn while she went to try and recover the stolen items. She never returned, and Rayn was left an orphan.
Rayn was "raised" by the manager of the Pub (a friendly, and motherly middle aged woman) until she was around 8 years old, when she decided to leave to find her parents, despite the manager's protests (Rayn felt as though she didn't belong). She didn't remember much about her mother at all (not even her name, which is why Rayn has no surname) and wished to find out who her father was.
She decided to travel to gather information about her father and the bandits who attacked them before, though as she was so young, had to steal to survive.
Now aged 14, she has still never found the bandits who attacked her and her mother. However, she has learned that her father is a soldier in the army and has decided to meet him, hoping to possibly, finally, have a family and a correct surname. Though she doesn't know if her father will accept her, or if he even knows she exists.
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Additional Info:
This particular type also has a strange genetic trait - The colour of the wings are determined by the colour of the eyes as well as the hair. The colour of the eyes become the colour of the wings, and the lightness/darkness of the hair detemines the lightness/darkness of the wings - Eg. black hair, red eyes like Marz = Black or very dark red wings, Blond hair, blue eyes like Rayn = Light blue wings. As most of this type of longwings have dark hair (often black) they mostly have dark wings, Rayn's colour is rare and is only obtained by different species of parents.
They instinctly prefer open spaces (due to their wing size) and like flying high with no obstacles, even though they are skilled at flying and could avoid obstacles easily due to strong wings.
Bag: Rayn wears this around her waist - using the strap like a belt and wearing the bag itself behind her (so she can fly with it easily). It carries all of her supplies - blanket for when it gets cold, spare clothes, money, food, medicine etc. and also carries her Panpipes
Quiver: holds arrows for her bow, it straps onto her bag and has a cover that prevents arrows from falling out when she flies.
Scarf: Rayn wears this around her neck - rarely takes it off. When she steals she uses it to cover her face so that otherwise, when she buys items etc she appears like a normal citizen and her thieving remains a secret.
Necklace: given to her by her mother (though it was originally given to Elora by Marz) and is made of a blue emerald. Rayn never takes it off (it is usually hidden under her scarf)
Panpipes: Rayn bought these at a market in Elavernis - she picked them up on a whim, she thought they might calm her down as she was very irritated that day, she later realised that she didn't know any songs to play on them. At one point during travelling, she found someone else who played the panpipes and copied the songs she liked from them. She also made up a song of her own, and she plays this to calm her down, take her mind of things, or entertain her pet.
Bow: Belonged to her mother, given to Elora by Marz - Elora used it for self defense when she was travelling, she also practiced archery as a hobbie thanks to Marz. Rayn uses it if necessary when stealing, and also for her hobby or archery.
Kit - Pet: Kit is Rayn's pet Ailura (or Gem cat) and her one real friend so far. more info here:[link]
Rayn usually targets travelling bandits (never targets the innocent due to what happened to her mother) and she often steals from them while they are out on an open road, preferably with a tall structure nearby. Rayn hides up as high as she can, then jumps and plummets to the ground, gaining speed, and smashes into the bandits with great force - quickly stealing the items/money she desires without giving the bandits time to react.
She prefers to do this on very sunny days at midday - when she often makes a noise etc to attract the attention of the bandits causing them to look up and be partially blinded by the sun, making it easier for her to steal from them as they take longer to react.
When she travels, Rayn picks one spot to be a "hideout" for a while, where she stores all of her supplies and possessions etc so she doesn't have to carry them all when she flies. She usually picks a cave, or a clearing in a forest etc - somewhere isolated. She doesn't use a tent - just the blanket she has in her bag and her Wings for shelter if it rains - she covers her belongings and sleeps sitting up.
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LOL IF YOU HAVE MANAGED TO READ ALL OF THAT WITHOUT FALLING ASLEEP I SINCERELY CONGRATULATE YOU!!!
anyways i hope you like her!...
I will include more detail about the parents, pet etc in pictures i am drawing of them.
i only own the character and the art
the application background belongs to the awesome
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Comments: 29
Hannahdoodle100 [2012-09-04 17:20:43 +0000 UTC]
wow! she's amaising!!! i love her design. (i want my chara to meet her now :/)
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Forests-n-Foxes [2011-02-10 21:19:37 +0000 UTC]
I love her blue design and her clothes are really nice too. I really like the shape of her bow too. She has so many things abut her that I love XD
Its quite funny to see that mine and your char has the same name pronunciation but their spelt differently XD
Congrats on getting in and hope we rp sometime~
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lorellashray In reply to Forests-n-Foxes [2011-02-10 22:28:40 +0000 UTC]
yay! thank youu!!
lol i like your way of spelling it too! XD OMG puzzle solving!! i think Rayn likes that too, though i didn't mention it O_O and your's is an alchemist!
i was thinking of making rayn an alchemist at one point
weird XD i love the white streaks in your Rhaen's hair and he's so cute!
thank you! yeah! hopefully
though i've never done an rp type thing before and i'm really bad with chatrooms and stuff, so i might need ... er.. a lot of help XD
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Forests-n-Foxes In reply to lorellashray [2011-02-11 00:57:20 +0000 UTC]
Your very welcome
Haha thankies <3 WOW so many similarities, they could be long lost family lol ;D They could battle it out to see who answers faster O.O
Aww thank you, yh I love those bits also XD
Your welcome Well ill be glad to help if you ever wanted to start one and there's always the forums to start private ones to help get started if you didn't mind doing one with me =]
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lorellashray In reply to Forests-n-Foxes [2011-02-20 13:52:50 +0000 UTC]
sorry for the late reply
you're welcome! lol they could XD OMG that's such a good idea!! OAO if there's ever a "contest" type event in Voleros we must draw that!!
you're welcome! XD you should! they're awesome!
aww you're so nice!! TT^TT yeah i'll try and get on the forums! it's just coz i need to finish some requests and stuff before i can do anything else -_-
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Forests-n-Foxes In reply to lorellashray [2011-02-25 02:18:08 +0000 UTC]
Haha yes we so should XD It would be a lot of fun
Awesome, hopefully see you around there soon then <3
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Ribbon-Knight [2011-02-09 18:50:35 +0000 UTC]
Rayn sounds super interesting! I especially like her adorable personality and the thing about her hideouts changing. C: It's a nice little touch. Plus, I just ADORE her outfit - it's gorgeous! <333
Welcome to VolSa!~
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lorellashray In reply to Ribbon-Knight [2011-02-09 19:58:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much!! yay! i'm glad you like the costume!! XD
aww thank you again!
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Ribbon-Knight In reply to lorellashray [2011-02-10 17:19:03 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!~ I really do, it's super unique and really cute! <3
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lorellashray In reply to Ribbon-Knight [2011-02-10 22:35:14 +0000 UTC]
lol not as cute as your's though!! her costume's adorable!!
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Ribbon-Knight In reply to lorellashray [2011-02-12 16:55:49 +0000 UTC]
Awww! ;u;
Thank you, that's a huge compliment, thanks so much! <333
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lorellashray In reply to Ribbon-Knight [2011-02-12 18:59:36 +0000 UTC]
aww no problem!
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Iheartbluepandas [2010-12-18 22:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Cool character!
Yes that is a lot of typing.... o_o just wondering....how long did that take you to type???
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lorellashray In reply to Iheartbluepandas [2010-12-18 22:38:02 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
erm... ah ha ha... probably more than the time it took to draw it xD
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Iheartbluepandas In reply to lorellashray [2010-12-21 11:31:01 +0000 UTC]
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lorellashray In reply to Iheartbluepandas [2010-12-21 16:55:26 +0000 UTC]
ikr? lol.
i didn't get in with the app this time either but it's ok i can just wait til next time
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Iheartbluepandas In reply to lorellashray [2010-12-23 22:46:06 +0000 UTC]
Awww π: 0 β©: 1 Your optimistic!
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lorellashray In reply to Iheartbluepandas [2010-12-24 00:39:56 +0000 UTC]
lol xD not really i was uber annoyed for like a day after it xD
omg i've seen that before! though i haven't seen that version of the pv have you seen the other one? [link] it's in colour and the story's kinda different i think
lol the most rated comment on that other one is "normal girls are in love with actors or singers but people like me are in love with Japanese software XD" lol xD
omg yeah i know, Len is drawn REALLY well sometimes!! though he is supposed to be like 14, so he's a bit young for me
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Iheartbluepandas In reply to lorellashray [2010-12-25 12:41:50 +0000 UTC]
xD rofl
OMG What a man wh*re! xD (sorry if you don't like cursing but seriously! )
OMG Yes I saw that one! CX Yes sometimes the childish version of Len makes me go...Awww and then that version makes me go He's so pretty that I want to lock him in my closet....xD LOL
Wow really? He looks like in that video that he could pass for a 16 yr old....and if he's really supposed to be 14 yrs of age then that means he's in my grade..... o_o Aww well its only by a few years so I think its okay! ;D It's not like a 10 yrs difference like my parents... ._.;
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lorellashray In reply to Iheartbluepandas [2011-01-01 22:37:56 +0000 UTC]
lol ikr? xD nah it's ok, i swear all the time
SAME! he's so cute when he's little but when he's older he is pretty damn hot
ikr? though i don't know if the whole 14 year old thing is just what they think he should be, since you can change the age of the characters depending on the story so maybe he is actually 16 or 17 in that vid
lol if he's 16 he's in my year! xD damn i don't want him to be 14 now
OMG 10 years!? seriously!? that is pretty big though my parents are 7 years difference so that's not much better xD
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Iheartbluepandas In reply to lorellashray [2011-01-05 14:44:15 +0000 UTC]
;D That reminds me whenever my friend did an 'experiment' (same person that had the meanie sister) and this is how it went...
Her:I wonder what would happen if I said a curse word too much?
Me: Idk try it out
(I don't necessarily like saying the same curse word OVER AND OVER AGAIN 'cause it just gets old but I just found this hilarious)
Her:Hey, Leera wouldn't it be fucking hilarious if I poked Buddy(her dog) sides? I wonder what would happen
-pokes Buddy at the sides-
-Buddy farts-
Both of us: o_o
LMFAO
Her: (I don't remember exactly what she said but she cursed.....a lot) (O_O) (-imagines one of those bleeper things for tv shows) BLEEP BLAH BLEEP BLEEEEEEEEEP
Me: O_O
Her: OMG LEERA I CAN'T FUCKING STOP
Me: xD That sounds wrong
Her: :l This is not the time for that
(15 seconds later)
Her: -is rolling on the floor laughing-
Me:
Her: No seriously I can't fucking stop
-me is about to open my mouth to say something-
-she gets up-
-opens the window-
Her: (as loudest as she can) FUCK
-closes the window-
Her: You were saying?
Me: . . . (btw we have smart german neighbors that speak fluent english... o_o)
Me: repeat after me
(then I told her to say something really stupid but funny...I wish I remembered... :/ )
And that was the end of my story ;D xD
xD He's a teen! He's just in the highschoolish range. Let's just say that he's for all teenage girls! XDDDD
Actually now that I think about it its actually 12 yrs not 10 Or wait was it 11? CRUD I DON'T KNOW ANYMOAR! But I know for a fact that it was in that range ('cause my mom was 22 whenever she married my dad and my dad was 30 somthin') OMG You know GakupoxLuka???
I just love that couple...they look so cute together Well my mom acts like Luka (she's into that thing with pure rejection/the hate=love sorta thing)(well its not actually a thing its just a part of her personality) and my dad acts like gakupo (really nice and expresses his feelings a bit too much >.>) Its like an animation turns into real life >.< GOSH I AM SUCH A NERD . . .
I need to focus on real life things
xD lol
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lorellashray In reply to Iheartbluepandas [2011-01-05 18:22:57 +0000 UTC]
omg i can't breathe!
*catches breath*
anyways... omg i wish i could've seen that!! xD now i feel like drawing a comic of it - it's THAT EPIC!!!
yesh he is!
lol yeah i love them too! so much better than gummi/gackupo =3= lol have you seen the vid "google it"? it's so funny! it's gack/Luka!
though i don't understand the japanese writing in the pv it's still really good>> [link]
lol that sounds so funny! xD i wish my parents were like that! xD my dad's just kinda normal dad-like =3= though he's funny sometimes xD apparently i'm REALLY like him O_O which is weird but true tbh and my mum is normal mum-like, always tries to be helpful but can shout like hell O_O xD
lol i saw a stamp with something like that on it - something like "when you life starts to become like an anime you know something is wrong" xD
lol same!! xD i'm too focused on anime and stuff i'm scared in school some teacher will ask me a question while i'm daydreaming and i say "gomenasaii!!!" instead of sorry xD sometimes my brain thinks in japanese like that O_O
lol i also found this vid of rin len and luka>> [link] it's not a song but it's really funny and len's soo cute!! xD
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Iheartbluepandas In reply to lorellashray [2011-01-15 09:16:50 +0000 UTC]
xD YES I want to at least make a small comic about what happens with my friends...actually we were thinking about doing a manga but my friend already knows what to put in the 400 episode of the anime >_> She's too optimistic...sometimes so optimistic that it scares me a bit...
Me: Okay so since you already have the plot for ... 400 episodes give me the thumbnail so we can start on the manga
Kate: What's thumbnailing?
Me: -headdesk-
>///< -gives a death hug to my stuffed animal- -imagines its len- -squeezes the stuffed animal even harder-
OMG YES I HAVE SEEN THAT VIDEO BEFORE!!! lol are you even wearing any panties? xD And then a couple seconds later she stabs him with the fork 8D She's a crazy lady! C:
xD lol
Whoa thats scary...its like Russia (or something, if you have seen Hetalia) where your cute and cuddly on the outside but on the inside your a sadistic scary person.... O_O;
xD ROFL I think I've seen something like that before!
xD OMG That reminds me of this manga that this person made on dA but she's still working on it...I think and this girl had a really bad dream that she killed her parents in this old fashioned time (like kuroshitsuji time (19th century)) and then she was screaming NO NEVER and it turns out that she was sleeping on her desk at school and she was sitting in the front of the class room LOL
-gasp- I have seen that before!!! XD YAY ROAD ROLLER!!! YES I love how their eyes glimmered whenever they were like ROAD ROLLER!!
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yggdradia [2010-12-15 16:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Nice Character settingβͺ
Rayn-chan is so cool and beautyβͺ
...Sorry, "Cool Beauty(γ―γΌγ«γγ₯γΌγγ£γΌ)" is Japaniese sense^^
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lorellashray In reply to yggdradia [2010-12-15 16:47:54 +0000 UTC]
ah thank you! the background isn't mine though
just the character.
aww thank you! i was aiming for that kind of character
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SoundlessSteelBlue [2010-12-13 02:17:33 +0000 UTC]
o: Somehow I'm reminded of Fire Emblem...cool pic ^^
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lorellashray In reply to SoundlessSteelBlue [2010-12-13 16:48:47 +0000 UTC]
haha lol thanks!
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