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Published: 2016-06-17 14:04:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 2
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Not my oc :> it's of some one I follow in Instagram who's DA is magato98No bg rn, couldn't think of a suiting one
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Comments: 9
Empty-Brooke [2016-07-01 09:32:20 +0000 UTC]
First of all, I really like the way you've done the shadows and the highlights on this piece. I also especially enjoy the fade into the white background at the end of the character's hair.
One thing I might note, critique-wise are the shadows close to the end of the character's nose. I checked out the DA page of the character's creator and while they tend to focus a lot on the tip of the character's nose, they do seem to have a traditional, if not small, nose. Adding the shadows close to the end of the nose as you've done here gives the appearance of a very dramatic arch in the character's nose. Removing that shadow and adding perhaps a thin strip of a highlight from close to the bridge of the nose down to the end of the nose might help to bring it a little more to the forefront.
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Louriaan In reply to Empty-Brooke [2016-07-01 12:35:19 +0000 UTC]
oh, i see where i went wrong. thank you for pointing it out ^u^ I appreciate the critique
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