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Published: 2003-10-27 01:46:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 13
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yea.. i dont know dont ask. it confuses me too not my usual style of writing.. i think it sucks, it probably doesnt belong in poetry, it probably shouldnt be viewed because it sucks so much..Related content
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I don't love it, but I like the way that the metaphor works. I agree that the title is a good choice... Take care, Alex.
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That's incredibly powerful title (as is the last couplet). Very vivid imagery that really ties everything together. Impressive.
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Yeh that was pretty good...i still think u should stay in Commercial Arts though...its ur choice.<3
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