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Published: 2006-08-30 20:11:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 528; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Ok, this piece really needs an explanation! It is principally based on a story of mine involving my charas, (yes, the 'status bar' down here is took from clock tower: the first fear on SNES) here's the basic summary:

The chupacabras always scared the human and demon population with their attacks to the livestocks and other animals, but when our heroes are called in a small city for check something soprannatural, they find various corpses of slaughtered creatures with purple blood, something else was here, and it was hunting those nightmarish creatures!

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The screams had started around midnight, against any self-defence rule, Kaori had silently left the Hotel in search of the screaming creature, she had nothing but her trusty sword, and the full moon gave her enough vision for not falling in a hole or in the well, Kaori flichered her ears, now the screams had changed, now it sounded like a painful call of help. She had already eard night creatures screeching for help when a predator got them, but nothing screamed like that! The screams became closer, probably she was almost there. She regretted about forgetting her torch or at least, bringing Phobos with her, but what she saw made just regret her of leaving the Hotel in first place.

The creature was a bipedal reptilian and it was about six feet tall, between his forepaws it clutched the cause of all those screams, a chupacabra! Kaori Recognized the wriggling creature from all the corpses that she and her friends had found, all of them had their guts spilled over, and this one still alive made no exception! The purple, bio-lumineshent blood shone malevolently on the victim and on the stained grass where it dripped from a deep cut on the abdomen. Kaori could feet her stomach churn as she spotted a piece of intestine hanging out, the chupacabra let out another scream of pain as the reptilian creature tore off another piece of meat from it, the moonlight illumined his sharp theet as it grinned in satistifacion. Suddenly, the beast catched her shent and turned its head around and eyed her.

Kaori felt her blood turn cold, the beast had blue eyes! It was impossible! The only reptilian with blue eyes where the sea dragons! She then spotted the hind paws of the monster, on the central toe it had a scyte-like claw:
"Ah... ah...!" It was the only thing that came out of her troat, that beast was supposed to be dead from millions of years! The grin on the beast's mouth disappeared as it glared at her coldly, it dropped the now agonizing chupacabra on the ground and roared at her, Kaori just stood there, totally forgetting the sword stripped on her back, Suddenly, a shot echoed in the air and a projectile sunk in the dirt at the beast's feet, the creature yelped in surprise and ran away hiding in the near woods, Kaori saw a flash of light and a tall, muscled man stepped in front of her, the gun in his hand still smoking, she just looked at him in surprise: "Clyde.".

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Charas are (c) by me, lskaori
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Comments: 10

fuzzalot [2006-09-04 23:04:55 +0000 UTC]

heh,hehehe. I meant strangely, not strabgeky Ahh! And I meant to say it's, not it'd. English lessons for me!

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lskaori In reply to fuzzalot [2006-09-05 08:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I'm not mad at you for bad spelling. Sometimes I can do a freak show!

Maybe is the almost total darkness, maybe is the glowing blood, maybe is Max's eye, maybe it's even the 'status bar' down here. Wo knows, it's rare seeing a chupacabra suffering!

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fuzzalot In reply to lskaori [2006-09-24 10:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it's all of them, eh? It's cool, anyway

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fuzzalot [2006-09-04 23:03:34 +0000 UTC]

There's something strabgeky awesome about it. It'd really, really cool

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popeyethecat [2006-08-31 10:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Woah, great lighting effect here, it's REALLY cool! I like how the purple blood kinda glows, too, so that's mainly what you see. One suggestion - maybe more black on the claws would help. But this picture kicks arse, no question!

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lskaori In reply to popeyethecat [2006-08-31 11:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Maybe the chupacabras are alien creatures, so I gave them glowing blood, prbably it is the only source of light after the moonlight. I don't know what I was thinking when I doodled this scene.

I forgot the claws! Thank you for telling me, next time I'll keep it on mind!

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Sassobabe [2006-08-31 02:24:35 +0000 UTC]

That is too awesome The shadow effect and everything are wonderful!

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lskaori In reply to Sassobabe [2006-08-31 08:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Dehe... Not even I could predict the result at the end.

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VederlichtArt [2006-08-30 20:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! What a scary picture. I'd be pretty shocked to come across a scene like this too. Even if the victim is a chupacabras...

I really like the intense shadow you used here, with only small patches of light. It adds an eerie and dark sphere to the picture ^^

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lskaori In reply to VederlichtArt [2006-08-30 20:23:01 +0000 UTC]

I was shuddering while the colouration, or maybe it was all the fan's fault.

Well, let's say that now strolling alone in the open fields at night with only a torch will be a little harder Maxy can be really, really evil!

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