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lumaeya — Fog of my own memory
Published: 2012-08-18 20:56:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 640; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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PLEASE CRITIQUEdfnhjasflkjgasgkfhklghkasdjgvlbd EDIT// reuploaded a better quality picture.
15 approx. hours
and I am like dead.
I started this yesterday and barely managed to finish it today #~#
um so I've sorta started getting into complicated themes;3
I like the foggy effect<3
I would've made it a little better but I was happy with it already so yanno.
but I hate the water and I think the perspective is off again
oops
i think Im, starting to love drawing details and backgrounds<3
I hope your happy with it! I tried my best! plus I dd it with all the jetlag of coming back from Cyprus, but hey heres my "im back" piece!
anyway, please tell me what you think
Oh and also well, the flowers are just their.. I think girls lying in water with eyes closed hands over chest with lilies and lilypads everywhere drawings are beautiful, but also overused. so i decided, stuff the position, stuff the lilypads, stuff a real flower, lets make my ownXD
im weird//sh
love you guys<3
Im also making a new youtube because my old one is well.. old.
so this drawing has been recorded 8D i shall edit this and update my journal when its up, with my username and shizz<3
enjoyyyyy~
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Comments: 26
I really like the composition of the piece. The colors are unsaturated, staying true to the fog. You say she is floating in water, but it sort of looks like its a reflection instead of floating in some places. Since the water is not moving, i think the hair should be spread out more instead of only being in one direction. The folds on the dress look very nice. I don't think that the flowers petals should be submerged. The one flower by the girls body looks submerged. The coloring technique is good overall, and has a clean look. The look of the girl is calm which fits this piece.
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thank you for this critique<3 I love hearing both good and needs to be worked on points, ill keep them in mine!<3
I really love unsaturated colours, so im glad they fit<3
this is a lovely critique;3; thank you!<3
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thank you a lot ! you did a really great job with it overall
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At least you finish it in 2 days! I'm still aweing over how amazing your coloring skill is
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asdfghjkl you're so good at digital art;; 
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aw thank you<3333 you're so sweet<3
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This is awesome!!
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aw thanks so much! I actually didnt like the flowers very much because when I bucket filled them in there were gaps where the lineart is, and some of the lineart is low density so there were missing patches^^/ i tried to fix them best I could!
Im working on water too!
thanks so much for the watch too<3
I actually filmed this for a speedpaint on my new YT account to open it up
heres the link
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You're most welcome! You are super talented, and I really love the meaning behind your work. Very unusual and original. I will check out the link for sure ^^
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your so sweet<3 thanks so much^^
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the flowers are so realistic! and the girl have beautiful hair
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thank you so much >u< <333
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this is really beautiful! i wish i could do bg like that!
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Absolutely stunning! I love it! The atmosphere you created in this picture is beautiful. I really like the angle you did as well~
The flowers are very beautiful! <33 I think you did a super nice job with that <3333
And the soft shading omigosh, no words can describe how lovely it looks <3
The way you colored her and how she fits into the overall composition is beautiful.
Honestly everything is very well done! It completely takes my breath away~
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asdfghjkl your wayway too sweet<3 thanks so much<3 your comment makes my heart warm;u;
Im really happy you like it<33333///
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