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Here is my entry to the #PixelPlaza Avatar Contest! I doubt I'll win, because not only is this pretty bad, but there are so many awesome entries! For instance, ~Czar-the-Dragon 's entry is amazing! I'm just putting out there in the hope that I might win an honourable mention!If anyone wants to tell me what can be improved, then please do!
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Comments: 20
fear-the-brilliance [2010-12-22 05:17:50 +0000 UTC]
nice pixeling! I really like the background
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Nintendogirl213 [2010-12-21 01:27:39 +0000 UTC]
I like this! Hmm critique? There's something about the clouds... I'm not sure what. Otherwise, I like this entry, thank you for entering!
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Lushbob In reply to Nintendogirl213 [2010-12-21 11:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I would ask what you dislike about the clouds, but you don't know
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Nintendogirl213 In reply to Lushbob [2010-12-22 04:30:25 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, how about try to make them look fluffy!
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Lushbob In reply to Nintendogirl213 [2010-12-22 10:58:59 +0000 UTC]
That is a good idea, but I don't really know how to do that! If you could help with any tips, that'd be great!
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Nintendogirl213 In reply to Lushbob [2010-12-23 07:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Wooo, shading! I'm not quite sure how you shade clouds though
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Lushbob In reply to Nintendogirl213 [2010-12-23 10:58:22 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha thanks anyway for your help! I'll see what I can do! :3
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DimetrodonDanya [2010-12-20 22:07:14 +0000 UTC]
Looks awesome! I love the border, and how you outlined the name. I think you have a good chance in the contest!
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Lushbob In reply to DimetrodonDanya [2010-12-20 22:13:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
And I hope so too!
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QuintonCharles [2010-12-20 21:38:18 +0000 UTC]
If I'm honest, I prefer yours over Czar's. It's more colourful, and eye-catching, and pixel-tastic whut.
The only thing that really caught my eye is those clouds. Same shape, same everything
Though I think the cloud's shouldn't be behind the blue one, or that close to the emotes, it's generally all-round good, anyway
And when I look at the birds, think more 'bats' than 'birds'...but that's probably just me
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Lushbob In reply to QuintonCharles [2010-12-20 21:44:11 +0000 UTC]
Really? I don't!
Those clouds?
Yeah, I was also annoyed at that, but I didn't want them 'merging' with the white border of the letters...
But thanks!
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QuintonCharles In reply to Lushbob [2010-12-20 21:49:11 +0000 UTC]
I figured you'd say that
And yeah, they struck me instantly as the ones from [link] - but I appreciate how difficult it would be to make 'original' clouds
I figured you'd say that - I thought the same thing, after commenting. But because I 'figured you'd say that', I didn't bother re-posting or anything. I'd just justify it now.
Which I don't seem to be doing...
But...er...
You're welcome
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Lushbob In reply to QuintonCharles [2010-12-20 22:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh wait O_O I honestly didn't realise. I didn't copy those clouds! I had a mixture of rough plans, and I guess that my mind just... copied the clouds?
But it wasn't a copy and paste...
xD
Although I can definitely see why you'd think that!
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QuintonCharles In reply to Lushbob [2010-12-20 22:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you didn't?
Well...that's...intriguing.
They also remind me of the classic Toy Story background.
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Lushbob In reply to QuintonCharles [2010-12-20 23:01:44 +0000 UTC]
You seem... disbelieving
Although, yes, it's understandable.
You know, the process was simple... Draw a few circles, fill in the gaps
If I'm honest, I don't really trust myself. Maybe my subconscious remembered the clouds, and then just re-drew them.
And yay for Toy Story!
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QuintonCharles In reply to Lushbob [2010-12-20 23:07:06 +0000 UTC]
Not disbelieving, or mistrustful, or doubtful, or even sceptical...more...flabbergasted. With a hint of befuddlement.
I wouldn't be surprised if that was the case; often, I end up contradicting previously-written statements of mine in stories, simply because the subject is on my mind, and the subject of that subject's negative appeal is on my mind also!
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Lushbob In reply to QuintonCharles [2010-12-20 23:09:31 +0000 UTC]
Befuddlement <3
Yeah, it's confusing! And... befuddling...
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