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m32 — Enough for two
Published: 2004-10-26 16:19:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description the good mornings are hardest
without you by my side
I know good things lie ahead
and I can't share them with you

                                         I wake up every morning
                                         with the knowledge you're gone

I keep on living in tomorrow
when I will be over you

                                         some one told me once,
                                           that I was too nice
                                         but I’ve never thought of taking that advice

I love you with my whole heart
I fall, and it tears me apart
I try, I try, I try
I don’t know why
you lie, you lie, you lie
my empty eyes stare at the sky
you ain't got time for me
I'd give my life to you
you ain't got room for me
we've got the world and all the stars
you ain't got love for me
girl, I’ve got enough for two
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Comments: 4

life-and-death [2004-11-01 22:54:59 +0000 UTC]

Its good but the last stanza is the best part.

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m32 In reply to life-and-death [2004-11-02 22:21:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your input. I've been planing to revise this poem for a while now, and I was considering just junking the first four stanzas altogether, so yeah, I agree.

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FloydianJoe [2004-10-27 06:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Again....this really hits home...I like it. Are you psychic? This was what my first relationship was like.

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m32 In reply to FloydianJoe [2004-10-28 21:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but only slighlty psychic. Glad I wasn't the only one to start out like that...

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