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Published: 2006-02-23 06:50:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I'm driving wreckless once againwatching the needle not the road
see it slide into the red
wondering how much I need to feel okay again
I need to get this out
I hold my breath and let the engine scream instead
pushing the pedal down with all my hate
trembling fists closed tight around the wheel
my body stiff with rage and fear
all I can do is stare
unseeing eyes dilated lika a deer
caught in the headlights of a truck
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Comments: 5
crashchick [2006-02-25 00:57:31 +0000 UTC]
It's wicked....really gives the impression of rage, tension, like your head's gonna explode!
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m32 In reply to crashchick [2006-02-27 21:11:05 +0000 UTC]
Glad you liked it, that was pretty much the impression I was going for.
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UsaniPanda [2006-02-23 16:06:32 +0000 UTC]
Firstly, I like the title.
I like the emotion, its tense and the narrator just seems out of control. I'm so bad at leaving comments. But yeah overall I like it!
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