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m32 — Six Paths Of The Road
Published: 2004-12-07 21:46:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Moments of silent reflection,
Caught in the midst of
A jerks jibber-jabber.
Honking horns
And humming tunes in
The static commute.
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Heat and humidity.
Tired and used.
Pneumatic cough
Delivering dreams.
Money to make.
Sleep for the dead.
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Trafficking.
Sweaty and restless,
Shallow breaths in the dark.
Rumbling, jostling
Sardines trucked into
The brave new world.
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curled lips
tasting the smog.
prey to prey pouncing,
mirror shades glimmer.
“Blind justice my ass –
I got quotas to fill”
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Rolling
Platform of sound.
Improbable spinners
On a rusted wreck.
Booming vibrations
Of an old Cadillac.
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Pulses racing
Within wondrous curves.
Passion and pleasure,
Drifting under control.
Wild screaming endeavors,
Shoulders markèd by lust.
==== ~m32 ====
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Comments: 10
Nice, I'd leave a big long lovely comment, but.. I can't think of anything. And it took me long enough to read it! Good job though. *clap clap*
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i particularly like the way this has been set out it gives it more meaning in a funny way
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Thanks. I don't ususally format my poems, but I thought that these ones might be well suited for it. I'm glad you liked it.
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Interesting peice/s, very different to anything i've read in a while, which is refreshing. My fave is 5/the Cadillac one, it's a really good description of what an old car is like to travel in
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Thanks, I appreciate the positive feedback.
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Trafficking.
Sweaty and restless,
Shallow breaths in the dark.
Rumbling, jostling
Sardines trucked into
The brave new world.
my fave part..
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Thanks.
I really like that part too.
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cool..
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