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m32 — Still Standing
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Published: 2005-02-21 05:14:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 35; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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i cant take thisthis bullshit
this orgasm
this gambit
i cant love you
why the fuck should i?
you know i dont trust you
not enough to admit it
either way, we're nothing
more than the meat and the bone
of simple machines built to fuck
to fuck, and to fuck, and to fuck...
you know that you'd leave me
youd cheat me for somebody better
I know that you would
you know I would too.
theres no secret to all this
so why cant we be honest
you want me, i want you
i fuck you, you fuck me
then its over,
completely
you can go fuck that guy,
and i can fuck some one else
it don't matter.
the moment is gone
the sweat is cooled off
and we're together alone
but it dont matter
cause i dont trust you to be mine
and i dont 'love' you to be yours
so pick your shit up and get out
Comments: 8
Love the last stanza, it gives me power just by reading it
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nice hardcore literal poetry, its a lovley kick in the face, good job conveying the emotion
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This is so powerful, I like it a lot. I really like the emotion behind this, it really gives a feel for the narrators erm.. feelings. It's kinda hot.
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"It's kinda hot."
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Yeah I know.. not the normal responce you expect. >.>
But, the anger makes it attractive. Or something.
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