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Published: 2004-12-01 00:53:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 98; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Cheap lexis
Vomited upon the page

Ink but blood
Upon the sheets
Sealed within a word –
Fuel now for the fire

Vain drivel – a lure –
for drooling fans
hot and ready
for the next romance
Transfixed – demure –
by lines, stuck-rooted
side-by-side within
a hopeless trance.

Sin sold for souvenirs
Her wounds bleed greed.
Yet hungry, not yet
Gorged; that public lust for
Grief.
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Comments: 10

Jam-o [2004-12-06 05:10:35 +0000 UTC]

niicee i likess!!

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nosugarjustanger [2004-12-04 07:42:04 +0000 UTC]

I added you in my watchlist..
I like the way the poem doesn't flow smoothly; there is a distinctive kinda rhythm and beat to it, which I like.. keep writing..

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m32 In reply to nosugarjustanger [2004-12-04 08:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm flattered.

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Jeans16 [2004-12-02 18:34:44 +0000 UTC]

I want to give you quality comments, but I'm not sure I can do so here, because I must admit I do not fully understand this peice. However I like these lines:

Vain drivel – a lure –
for drooling fans
hot and ready
for the next romance

I find these strong words, sure of themselves and with an opinion.
I hope you forgive me for such vagueness...

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m32 In reply to Jeans16 [2004-12-02 18:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

The poem is about a writer who exposes her soul/life/scars to the audience for a profit, but who puts no genuine feeling behind the works - a hack writer if you will, a popular novelist.

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Jeans16 In reply to m32 [2004-12-02 18:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay makes alot more sense now, thanks for the explanation. I must admit i'm a fan of knowing the idea/story behind a poem.

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UsaniPanda [2004-12-01 00:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I like how you use your words.

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m32 In reply to UsaniPanda [2004-12-01 01:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. That may have been the fastest comment in history.

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m32 In reply to UsaniPanda [2004-12-01 00:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. That may have been the qiuckest comment in the history of :devart

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m32 In reply to m32 [2004-12-01 01:13:53 +0000 UTC]

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