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Published: 2006-12-07 09:34:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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I could say and do everything just right, and yet go wrongI've made myself more likable, but not so fuckable as him
tho fucking leads to feelings as often the other way
excuse me if I'm bitter, but I gave you way too much
and all you did was hurt me, hurt me and you're hurting me again
I've got enemies that treat me better
when I first met you I was so surprised
to find someone so much alike
I fell in love and failed to see
that you were just too much like me -
an ignorant, selfish, powerless whore
with an appetite for digging your own grave
I know I've wrote this shit before but you've always pulled me back
I am not your goddamn girlfriend
and I don't want you crying on my shoulder
unless it's cause I'm fucking you too hard
so take your accursed friendship
and shove it up your ass
In a nutshell, you're way too much like me
that's why I'll hate you
but never blame you
for all the shit you've done to me
You're killing me, like only I can kill myself
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Comments: 3
Very honest and powerful...... I'm not much of a writer but I do like this alot!
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So honest and man, I think I felt like this before.
when I first met you I was so surprised
to find someone so much alike
I fell in love and failed to see
that you were just too much like me -
an ignorant, selfish, powerless whore
with an appetite for digging your own grave
You used simple words, not bombastic ones, and yet they look so proper and fresh. It's a different way to look at how the person is so alike, that it just becomes a bad thing.
And the last line, about how she's killing you like you're killing yourself, is just amazing.
Love it.
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Aw! Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it
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