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Published: 2004-04-05 07:11:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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I'm tired of the old shit right now....I'm especially tired of people reading my shit on here, and thinking that I now write like this...so here is ........ once again........... a new poem. Consider yourselves lucky on this one. *sighs*Related content
Comments: 18
malignancy In reply to Ezma [2004-04-08 15:17:29 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if I could deal with being a rockstar...All the shit I hear them go through seems like a lot, but doing great music rox!
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evcfenix [2004-04-06 12:16:18 +0000 UTC]
awesome! i get vivid images of a dark stage with neon spotlights all over and the audience are just silhouettes. i noe maybe its not meant to be this sort of visual, maybe its more of a song coming from a radio but hey, i like the visual i get
the comparison with acid dye and the last two lines ennding it were really good
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malignancy In reply to evcfenix [2004-04-06 17:50:06 +0000 UTC]
oo, I like that visual of vividness...I can totally see that as well. I can't tell anyone what it's truly about cause it's just kinda odd...but I'm so glad that you like it.
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rockisdeaddclxvi [2004-04-05 18:56:52 +0000 UTC]
lucky is right....nicely done on this...
dw
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mydeadstars [2004-04-05 15:18:36 +0000 UTC]
I like it. Really good visuals and stuff.
Why is it rated mature? Because it has the word sex in it?
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malignancy In reply to mydeadstars [2004-04-05 15:56:26 +0000 UTC]
I guess.lol...you never know who's reading this shit...I've gotten in trouble for shit like that before on certain shit...so, ha, yeah..I guess.
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champignon [2004-04-05 09:10:21 +0000 UTC]
one of your best yet- definately. Lovely writing style you have here- very lovely.
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thanamosity [2004-04-05 08:00:09 +0000 UTC]
betiful poem
i have to say that i like your new stuff more
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malignancy In reply to thanamosity [2004-04-05 15:59:32 +0000 UTC]
yeah...so do I...I just want to get my old shit up here, so that I can have almost like a back-catalouge of all the shit I've ever written...you know? But then I was having all these people saying...it's good but.....and I'm like "JESUS! Can you guys not fucking read that my good shit's at the begining, and that this is all old shit!?!?" Grr, very grr indeed. Anyway, glad you like it.
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thanamosity In reply to malignancy [2004-04-05 17:06:10 +0000 UTC]
lol
calm down now...no need to did jesus in this
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AngelY2Knight [2004-04-05 07:27:53 +0000 UTC]
.....i'm speechless..... Who do you....??
FUCK! is... shit, i dont have words, i just love it, where do you learn to write like this, i mean, i've read your others works, and they was good, but this.....! shit, i love the way that you express the fellings.... it's just so pure, simple.... fuck, this is a fav!!!
sorry, i just dont know what to say.........
FAV!!
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malignancy In reply to AngelY2Knight [2004-04-05 16:04:35 +0000 UTC]
haha, thanx. These things float in and out of my cerebral cortex constantly. So, read the first poems I put up on this site...I guareente you'd like them as well....and I'm not talking about my recent work ...I'm talking about my first deviant pieces. Again....thanx, o, and for the fav too.
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